Witch, I Am Really Not the Ancient God of the Deep Sea!

More than three hundred chapters later, the protagonist is still being rubbed, and it's far from the title of the book! With hundreds of chapters, there is an active flower witch, a fire witch who has not yet transformed, and a background ice witch. Are you planning to write 500 chapters and upwards? To sum up, it is a new perspective, but the writing and outline are a bit weak.

So the monsters of the deep sea see you as a traitor, and the humans see you as a monster?

The conception and description of Miss Crow's character are very contradictory and unreasonable, and too idealistic. Failure

I really dare not read it. The four books combined do not have 2 million words.

I have read the latest chapter now. The whole book is characterized by its brisk writing style, which is more daily oriented, and its theme is adventure travel. The features of this book are novel deep-sea monsters, the interaction between the protagonist and the deep-sea monsters, and various crack explorations (the next copy). The female characters in the book so far are well portrayed, each has its own characteristics, and is not stereotyped.

I couldn't stand it after watching 20 pictures. First, when entering the gap, Captain Black Eyes fought alone, and it took a lot of effort to fight even one toad. As a result, the treasure was densely packed with toads, and he could still win. The captain, with his highest combat power, could only fight one, and then there was only one door. How did the protagonist sneak out? Do you think those people are fools?

Isn't this just bad news? ? ? ? ? ?

Can you please mark the settings from "The Esoteric Cult Simulator"? It doesn't matter to you, the author. Many of Qidian's novels with a bit of a grammatical style like to embed the Esoteric Cult. Daogui has sewed Si Chen/Si Ming, the hour in charge, and multiple histories, but at least don't do it so blatantly. Taking a step back, can you at least sew better and make the mechanism clearer? 😅 The effect of the yellow injection at the beginning, at a glance, is the [Heart] Xingxiang that symbolizes "never-ending", "movement" and "inspiring life", and what is the relationship between the [Cup] Xingxing that symbolizes "temptation", "desire" and "gluttonous insatiability"? The same is true for the doctor profession. He can be [Winter], [Lamp] and [Heart], but he definitely cannot be [Cup]. This has nothing to do with [Cup]. The setting of the secret sect itself is extremely brilliant. If you, the author, have a fuller understanding of it and apply it, you will definitely achieve more dazzling results; instead of just learning half-heartedly, you will be neither good nor bad.

According to players' time travel, let's not talk about high-level ones. Level 5 is rare and can be left to chance. Level 4 is rare but you can have some clues to know how to get it. Levels 1 to 3, which are more common, have to be picked and combined with talents to create a systematic combination. The protagonist, the player, is no different from the natives. He only knows a little bit about the plot.

Let's complain about the protagonist's strategy-up character design. What's the use of following the trend after time travel? Moreover, the time travel game setting is in the later stage. Why can't we even make better resources and growth plans?

Why do I feel like it's getting more and more witty and fluent in the future, and the ups and downs are gone. The plot has returned, which is a common problem in most cool novels, and they won't write about combat power in the later stages. I used to be impatient to wait for updates, but now it's tasteless every day, and it's a pity to throw it away. It's inexplicable.

I plan to write several female protagonists in this book. I think the emotional descriptions are quite good. I might consider developing more female protagonists to broaden my literary style.

Good or not bad, judging from the early stage, it is a very mediocre story, but the setting is very good, but the narrative rhythm is flawed, not rigorous enough and not interesting enough. It can be watched, but how good it is cannot be counted.

The setting is okay, but unfortunately the writing and description are not enough. The writing style is very different from the setting style, which leads to the decline of the full text. Some of it is tasteless and it is a pity to abandon it. I really want to see the later settings, but the description is too sloppy

This book didn't get good grades but it's palatable. I'm afraid the dog will take it away

The original title of the book should have been "Deep Sea Hunter, Starting from Conquering the Witch Sea", but now it has become "Witch, I am really not the ancient god of the deep sea". I was just about to read this book when I saw a lot of comments in the comment section that were general or vicious. From the title of the book, it can be seen that it was supposed to be about a hunter conquering the ocean. Later, the title was changed to Ancient God of the Deep Sea to attract readers. Therefore, many people complained that the talent of Deep Sea Affinity was not fully utilized in the article and it was not developed towards the Ancient God.

It's quite a light novel. The protagonist always crosses the line and fights the opponent. However, this routine is repeated too many times. When you run to a higher place, you only meet a higher opponent. There is no benefit at all after upgrading. The author should write more about other aspects. It can't be from killing lobsters with an iron knife to killing colorful lobsters with a dragon-slaying knife, right?

I feel that the plot and atmosphere have always been incompatible and always contradictory. The pirate captain was obviously a funny character in the past, but as soon as I wrote about the little crow, the style of painting immediately changed and I wrote about the death of the little crow in the previous life... And the creation of the deep sea... I personally like the feeling of unknown and exploration, but the protagonist always stays away, and the motivation is not too strong, so it feels like an ordinary upgrade novel...

I can't stand it any longer. I always feel like a pig's feet are hiding here and there like a mouse. They are afraid of this and that. I can't see the word "freedom" on you at all.

The early stage is generally good in the middle, but the later stage is average. I don't know whether it will be multiple female protagonists or single female protagonist. Little Crow and that Andu both like the male protagonist. Crow even gets together with the male protagonist in the parallel world. But for now, there are basically no emotional scenes, only Fen and the male protagonist fell down. Feeling so dry

After the protagonist becomes stronger, there will always be an even stronger one. The boss in the previous chapter will immediately become the roadside in the next chapter.

I thought the demigods had just begun and the big one was coming, but I didn't expect it to be the end 😅

Nnd, I haven't updated the ending for a few days. Isn't it because I'm just trying to catch a fish? I feel like the ending is pretty much guessable, so it's a good idea to finish the book in advance. The writing is good, but the flaws are not small. However, because it is to my liking, my evaluation will be a higher level. The writing style is relatively light novel but not so strong, and the main description of the story of the sea is very suitable for my taste. Although the pace of the whole book is still a bit poor, especially when the third level in the middle, it takes too long. The next two levels, the fourth and fifth levels, do not seem to be as long as the third level. This part is a bit slow. In fact, I think it's a little too fast to prepare for the ending at Plantagenet, but maybe it's really difficult to control the rhythm later on. It's not bad to end in time, but it's just a pity. Then I think the map is still a bit too small, just the Witch Sea. In fact, I hope to write more sea areas in different places to enrich the content of the adventure and write more about different customs and customs. Maybe it will be better. The front is still a bit too tight.

Finished with flowers🎉

Let me ask, why does the protagonist pay back the money? It's the money from the garbage man's boat in Marlow Town. Isn't he rich? As a foreshadowing laid before, I saw Chapter 153, "Have a Good Rest", where the protagonist went to Maro Town for the third time.

Can 14 be refined

Although I am studying and not pursuing my studies, I will give you all the monthly tickets. I'm afraid I'll give you the monthly tickets based on my results. There are seven tickets in total, and there should be more after this month

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