My Puppet Cult

I just read a few books, and I feel that the author's writing is quite good, and I like the protagonist's character very much, but I still hope that the protagonist will not be bound by human morality and not be soft on women, because for us readers from a God's perspective, we have read too many books with this kind of plot, which is very boring. Women do not need special treatment, and the chaotic world does not allow mercy. For people to survive, Writing a protagonist who is soft-hearted will lose readers who like to see decisive means. Writing a protagonist who is determined and decisive will at least be acceptable to everyone. As long as the protagonist is not written as perverted, dark, and crazy, everyone can accept it. Most readers still prefer egoistic protagonists. Come on, readers will slowly accumulate.

Are all the religious converts women?

This book is quite good, but some details are not done well. For example, the manor given by the father can be inherited or not. At least an explanation is given. There is also the pocket watch of the first believer whose spirituality was tested by the professor and belongs to that god. Why the protagonist did not hold it and there is no explanation. Moreover, when she was asked to join the religion, I felt that it was a bit weak. For a esoteric cult, it was a bit bland and unfamiliar. Of course, it may also show that the protagonist is a novice. That's all for now. The author must strengthen the details! ! ! I feel like I'm a bit of a germaphobe, so come on, author!

It feels a bit like a tantric simulator

Does the author not correct typos and incorrect sentences at all? Countless of them have been pointed out in the comment section.

Complaints and revised posts Looking at the crashed reading, I didn't expect it to crash again so soon. As for the reasons for the crash, the book review section was quite right. In addition, there is another important reason, which is that there is a vague outline when writing. But there is no setting, which makes many settings a bit vague. The protagonist has other puppets besides Kai'Sa. Fortunately, there are not many words, so maybe I can salvage it (it may be a bit slow to change it, because I am lazy again during the holidays). ----- Specific changes are as follows: 1 Important change: The protagonist will no longer join the Investigation Bureau. Instead, under the control of the protagonist, Black Cat Mir will join the White Eagle Investigation Bureau. 2 The protagonist's character will become more fierce. From now on, the person who killed Barry will become the black cat Mill, and Mill will become the new genius of the Bureau of Investigation. -----Thanks to everyone who has followed the reading, this heart-wrenching plot should not involve too much in the previous part It may be revised on October 7th, and will be uploaded and covered at that time.

I have read The Coming of Death before, and it is very powerful and interesting to follow the path of destiny. I have also read a Western mythology about the god of destiny. Even the god of luck and misfortune has a hard time fighting, and he is suppressed by the god of dimension, time, and absolute order. The setting is very poor and does not highlight the powerful characteristics of destiny. I have also seen Negri, traveling through the four worlds of the second disaster world to contain the world of artifacts. Seeing the power of destiny, I originally thought that the protagonist would follow the path of destiny, but later he did not. Speaking of Negri and Master Gu, I personally feel that they write a lot of literature and some details are not very good, but why are so many people worshiping them? The main character they write is a spirit, a pure spirit. Fang Yuan does whatever it takes to live forever. Negri does everything in order to surpass himself and perfect himself. Gotham Jerome is also a spirit. So I also hope that my cult will write the pure spirit of the protagonist and write it as a pure concept.

Visibly immature writing style

In fact, I prefer the protagonist to work hard from scratch, and the fact that the protagonist is not mentally harmed is a bit too much. In this way, this crazy world view is of no use except to set off the protagonist.

The book is good, but is the author confident enough to finish it? The first two books were emm

It seems that the protagonist's doll contains Zhu and Dong. Could it be that it was Xindan who pinched him?

I don't understand The protagonist is obviously the world's top extraordinary person, why does he have to pretend to be a pig?

Directly, I don't know which b said it brilliantly. The protagonist has obviously played the game, so don't you know the general situation? He's been so cowardly here that he's almost at level 4. He's still a half-pig, and he's not really weak. He's quite incomprehensible.

The writing is really good, but there is no publicity, so there are too few people. If there were so few people, it would be easy to send it.

The subject matter is very good and the writing is okay The following are some of my (opinions?) There may be some spoilers? The first is Tai Lung's appearance. It took some words to describe it, but in the end he was killed neatly. I probably saw it and wanted to show that there are very few extraordinary people. The protagonist's ability is relatively strong at the beginning There are very few extraordinary people in the secular world. I didn't see it in the article (that is, the performance is better than Weaker) The second is The introduction is very similar to the instruction manual. In fact, this can be shown in the conflicts in the later chapters, such as Tai Lung's exclamation (personal opinion) He said that he was curious, and this should be to express that the protagonist has nothing to do with Tai Lung's true purpose. Interested? Also, there are too many narrations, which is a bit uncomfortable (maybe my own problem) The last part is the segmentation. I feel very comfortable in the front, but there are more segments in the back, which seems very lengthy, such as In the end, it can be read, the subject matter is also good, the details can be better, and the future can be expected (The above are my personal thoughts, I still read it more seriously)

There are so many typos and omissions! Really convinced

I thought I couldn't write any more. Then I clicked on the homework homepage and found that this is the one I've been persisting with for the longest time. It's really yours.

God cannot speak, so why not sacrifice a book of Morse code to the gods? Put a candle and let God use the flame to type the code

I don't know how to describe the character and behavior of this protagonist! This subject matter is quite good. I rarely read such books, but after reading a few chapters, the protagonist was as decisive as he should be, but I don't know why. Is it a problem with the writing style? I feel that the protagonist is very deliberate in everything he does. He has a soft and sweet personality, but he is decisive in doing things. It does not give people the impression of being moody, but rather deliberate, deliberate killing, and deliberate doing something.

I really like it. Cheers, author (／≧ω＼)

It's too slow. Hurry up. It's faster. I'll finish it in one go.

It's over before I even watch it

There is still one day, you'd better send out your new book!

Is there still no heroine? I have no desire to read anymore.

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