There's Something Wrong with This Disaster Word Game

I catch up on the latest in one go, including sex, doomsday, and the game Alien World. All three are very good. The character of the protagonist is acceptable, and there are no objectionable plots. What is a little annoying is that the author does not like to write data. The setting will increase the score, and the protagonist will receive a small score.

After reading the previous part, I would like to write a book review and comment on some uncomfortable parts in the book. First, the protagonist and several newcomers disclosed their talents in the group. The disclosure was inexplicable. This is not the price of Luo's pimping you game. The second is the issue of occupation. Currently, there are several occupations: night watchman, herb gatherer, messenger, and dog trainer. The first three are not so much occupations as jobs, and can also be called life occupations. They are only related to work and have nothing to do with fighting methods. Then the boss of the protagonist, the dog king, is the night watch manager, but his occupation is dog trainer, which is completely different from the night watch manager. The occupation itself does not add attributes or skills, so this dog trainer is very abrupt. Finally, there is the issue of making money after the protagonist changes his job. The protagonist changes from a night watchman to a herb gatherer. He no longer needs to patrol, and can accept herb collection tasks. The reward for herb collection tasks is money. What can you do with money? You can build equipment, repair equipment, and buy gems. However, the protagonist is already equipped with magic equipment. The money can also buy some bad books. However, the protagonist has no intention of ordinary learning, and no books with important knowledge are sold. Taking on tasks is a waste of time for the protagonist and cannot improve combat effectiveness at all.

(Small book review with slight spoilers) An adventure story with a novel setting You can see some once popular elements in it, such as chat groups and different worlds. Although this different world is said to be a game world. But with the author's writing, this game world is not like an ordinary game; the white dove embraces the black prison, a bold scene. Yes, the game world seems to be alive, and as the story progresses, the portrayal of each supporting character is so impressive. A decent but crazy witch, a group that once had a great journey, an old-school family that has solidified, a mad scientist, a treasure hunter running around, Grandpa Hammer's moving train, the mastermind behind the two worlds... Believe me, as an adventure it is absolutely wonderful, and don't forget the joy of being the fourth natural disaster. Do you want to know that the protagonist of the story will eventually pass the level without any injuries? By coincidence, I also want to know...ᕕ( ᐛ )ᕗ Perhaps, you can find some of your childhood memories and original intention for adventure in this novel.

The pace is fast and the writing is good, keep up the good work.

I finished watching it for free, and it's pretty much what most people in the comments said. Authors often dig holes and then forget about them. The biggest cheat for the protagonist earlier was the exclusive talent of Morning Star, which he spent a life to refresh. Later, when he met Seabird, he introduced the concept of fragment upgrade and the setting that a super strong person might have Morning Star fragments or spend a life to refresh his talent. But this setting is about 50-60 chapters, and now there are more than 300 chapters. The protagonist's exclusive talent basically has no other description other than being a search locator. The protagonist's biggest cheat is no longer useful and has been changed to an exclusive black domain power. I have also forgotten the blade stone disease set in the early stage, and the setting of the Candle Witch dying soon. The early chat group, the organization of the group leader and the deputy group leader are also not described. . . . . In short, there are too many pitfalls. The author has basically forgotten what he wrote before, causing the plot of this book to be extremely confusing. There is also a problem with the power setting. The previous description was in terms of levels. The concept of a special player was suddenly introduced in the early stage, but there were no specific criteria for judging special players. In the middle period, we met the Rat Man again. The Rat Man introduced four stages of mastering the forbidden book. The protagonist is the peak of the first period, the Rat Man is the peak of the third period, and the prison lord is the fourth period. Later, the levels of disasters were described, but there are also several types of disasters in the author's description, and a disaster power system was introduced to the protagonist. In fact, just use the 1-100 level system from the beginning to the end. A level above 20 is enough, and 40.60.80 Can be divided into power stages. However, power systems with different names and standards have been introduced. The protagonist is level 24, the second issue of the Forbidden Book, and the disaster level, but he is not a special author, so you don't feel something is wrong There are too many pitfalls in the level system. On the one hand, the author describes that the strongest person like the prison master of the death group is very high, but the protagonist seems to be almost at the level of the prison master in the chaotic level system. There are also big problems with the description of some body movements. The protagonist holds his chin at all times. Of course, there is no problem with holding his chin. Even if the author uses the word "cheek hold" to describe every action of the protagonist, I can't bear it. Look at the options of holding your cheek, holding your cheek while thinking, holding your cheek while standing and talking to others. Anyway, the protagonist only has two body movements, one is holding the cheek, and the other is the more important hand rubbing. In the early stage, I always wrote about rubbing hands, which can be understood as a fly rubbing its hands. Some readers may think it is cute, but your protagonist keeps rubbing his hands, why do all the supporting characters do the same? She rubbed her hands every day when she met the Flower Witch in the early stage, she also rubbed her hands every day when she met the Candle Witch in the middle stage, and she also rubbed her hands every day when she met the Book Witch in the later stage. The author seems to have no other words for the protagonist's actions except holding his chin and rubbing his hands. For other supporting characters, the flower witch is a bit new and interesting. After all, the silly Baitian described can express his mood with flowers. Even many passers-by have their own interesting personalities, except for the protagonist who always holds his chin and rubs his hands. This book has too many problems, but it is limited to free and there are no strict requirements after reading it for free. The many pitfalls and shortcomings of this book really need to be corrected as soon as possible, otherwise it is better to finish it quickly. My advice to the author is to stop updating for a few days, take a good look back, and correct a large number of typos. I still can't bear to correct the typos a hundred chapters ago. Then reorganize the protagonist's abilities and paths and reorganize the power system. I have to fill in so many pitfalls in the past, first the upgrade of the exclusive talent, and then the debt collector's contract (the debt collector's knife is given to the protagonist to complete the contract. The protagonist has already learned that the rat man should go back to lift the curse of the contract before he is dead), his own blade stone disease, the story line of the dog owner, Gao Tian's completion, the story line of the early supporting characters, the pitfalls of the chat group, there are too many pitfalls that have not been filled. If you have time, continue to build a house in the air, instead of going back and patching up the foundation that was cut corners.

I have to say, it's amazing. In recent times, word game-themed novels generally follow the layman mode, that is, unlimited resurrection, and trading lives for exploration. There is no doubt that Shu Shuhao has written something new and has almost escaped the shadow of the secular master. And the plot is also quite interesting. But I feel that the power system is not particularly perfect. Of course, there are only more than 30 pictures, and I can't tell what the power system is, but it feels that way from the writing. I feel that although this book cannot reach the height of its host, it is still a rare masterpiece. The most important thing is new ideas, new ideas, new ideas. Say important things three times.

I really don't believe that another newcomer in the organization can keep up with the protagonist, even if she is a woman, unless the author gives her a cheat.

The author writes a wave of comparison data every time a game starts, but the attribute points for upgrades are not added. In the early stage, the protagonist has a hard time beating anyone. In the later stage, he simply upgrades without adding attribute points. Awesome author, there is no need to look at attributes now, the protagonist can beat anyone, right?

Luo Qing, looks like this, AI drawing

To be honest, it makes the thief feel uncomfortable reading this book. He knows so much information and doesn't reveal it without exchanging resources. He blinds the eyes of the organization that has helped him. If he is extremely selfish, he can also exchange resources for development! But he didn't say anything. He still had strength to develop, but also suffered all kinds of discomforts. He knew a little bit of this, a little bit of that, and in what other field, was he speechless, a field that would hurt himself? Isn't it just a large-scale indiscriminate attack skill? Does the author have any misunderstandings about the field? Other people's fields are extended by oneself, suppressing or attacking people covered by the field, and here it becomes an undifferentiated range attack skill. It is really different from Samsara Paradise. If you want to see this kind of thing, you should watch Samsara Paradise! Recommend.

The protagonist's most important talent is given by others. Why is it written like this? ? ? What are the benefits of writing about a mysterious old man? All of a sudden I felt like I had changed...

It's a little weird and the sentences don't make sense, just a small part of it. The problem is that the protagonist realizes that this game is life-threatening, so why does he still save it without adding attribute points? Also, those clothes can obviously hide the appearance. Why don't you wear them all the time and only wear them when you have to use them?

What is this written on the back? The more I read, the more bored I become. In the end, I just click on the directory without even wanting to subscribe. It's typical of starting high and then going low.

This must be the author's first time writing a book. The pace of this book is too fast. With more than 100 chapters, the protagonist is almost invincible in reality. At this pace, more than 300 chapters will be completed.

I feel like the following scene is a bit typical. Also, is it possible that the top executives are all women? They are basically all witches. . .

At this point in writing, I can only say one thing: the writing is okay, but the plot is too bland. The protagonist has been developing silently, and there is no climax until now. Every time the plot passes by mediocrely, people gradually lose interest.

After taking a look, everyone in the comment section said that the author's writing was not good. In my opinion, the author does have some shortcomings, such as occasional typos, poor handling of the real-life plot, etc., But the author is constantly making adjustments and changes. In my opinion, the plot in the game is quite good, and the characters are also very fleshed-out. As for the battle descriptions that everyone said are too long and too wordy, I think there is no problem. I am used to old-fashioned and boring battle descriptions, but the battle descriptions in this book are refreshing to me. However, the quality of the author's chapters has indeed declined recently, and I hope the author can adjust his status.

The book friend is so right. The author really digs holes but doesn't bury them. He has the ability to predict and doesn't use it when encountering options. . . There are free attribute points but never added. . Abandoned

'Author, I saw chapter 138. Can you write down what the protagonist's attribute points are? To be honest, that's why I read your book. I like data flow. Isn't it okay to write more than ten chapters at a time? I feel a little regretful now that I spent money to read your book. If I had known this was the case, I would not have read it.

After reading the second chapter, the setting of Goldfinger is not perfect for me. The function is to find treasures in a lost place. To be honest, I despise these treasures. They cannot be defeated in the hands of their masters in the prosperous age. In this apocalypse, can the protagonist complete the level by finding treasures? The Lord of the Stars should highlight its characteristics. What are the characteristics of a star? With gravity, it can act on yourself appropriately to make yourself levitate. It is better to take a crossbow and shoot it in the sky. Bring a telescope and God's perspective. It can also act on a stone or iron. Stick, get a meteorite strike, or a space-based weapon God's Scepter, it can be a shelter, temporarily connect the soul after death, which is equivalent to infinite resurrection and reincarnation you can also voluntarily give up your body when encountering mental pollution, and you are immune to mental control and mental pollution it can be used as a storage space, with items on it Once equipped, people can avoid danger when entering. This method is more attractive The planet and the earth have the ability to degrade. You can set the treasure to be buried in the morning star and let it decompose the treasure, and obtain certain treasure properties, such as the shadow cloak. When it is decomposed, you can use your mental power to become invisible. There are no side effects. , Bury certain mental herbs and let Morning Star help you improve your mental power directly. Bury certain monsters and get some monster characteristics, such as the monster's strength, monster's claws, monster's recovery, etc. What you sow will reap melons and beans, which is far more attractive than risking your life to find treasures everywhere.

It's strange, how to allocate free attribute points is not mentioned.

When I saw Chapter 23, attribute points were not added, and then I saw the chapter review saying that they were not added later. What are you doing, author? Can I continue reading this book?

I've seen Chapter 51, so why doesn't the protagonist still practice physical skills? Is it so difficult to even acquire a skill? Especially when there is a book that can guide me, I have to go out and take risks without practicing. I know that I need to fight, but I just don't pay attention to it. I don't understand it (I will read it later after seeing my current opinion.)

Quan Ding! I like this book very much. This is probably the first fully written book that I have read in almost ten years. Good luck to the author.

Finished reading, finished reading. This one is really good. The setting is very interesting. The setting of Xiangxing and Disaster is rarely seen, and the author writes it very well. It has a western fantasy and mysterious style, just like tarot cards? It's not quite right, but it's worth a look anyway. Every time I don't read it for a while, I feel that this book is boring. I think that when I read another two chapters, I will be sucked in again. It's strange, and I finally finish it. Some holes were not filled in, but the author also explained that he felt that the control was not good, so he simply discarded it, but the impact was not big. The author said that the back part was a bit broken, so he accelerated his progress. Otherwise, it seems that he could kick Xiaoyue and punch Bairi? Ha 😅

Wait, isn't this going to be the finale? I feel like this book is only halfway through the plot, right? Don't end it so soon!

The main character in this book is really weird. The dagger has 15 damage points. I've read about 200 chapters, and a normal A-level fight only costs 30. So I've seen the main character become more powerful and pretend to be throwing knives. That doll has holes in its head and is throwing it while fighting? It's a retaliatory weapon anyway, so why not throw it with your bare hands? The author still has some problems

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The most annoying thing is that the charm attribute is nothing but water.