
Douluo: Make a Gun First at the Beginning
斗罗:开局先造枪
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 510k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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226Chapters
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Another one for Shrek. Just a bunch of teachers who mislead students in that shabby place, how dare you go in there?
Huge cheat, useless protagonist
You have to do the trick of compressing the soul power, and you have to write a reason why the Dantian can't bear it. You have to follow the original story. After the breakthrough and before you get the soul ring, the soul power will only exist in the body and not be displayed. Also, after inheriting the legacy of the Ice and Fire Dragon King, one reaches level 40. Not to mention the difference in combat power and so on. The idea that level is everything is highlighted more than once in the article.
When I saw the protagonist's first soul ring, I suddenly didn't want to watch anymore. Others are desperately trying to absorb high-year soul rings. The protagonist can absorb thousand-year soul rings, but he only wants to absorb seven or eight hundred-year-old soul rings. There is a second martial spirit. Don't worry about this. But it feels like fantasy to me. Fight if you can. Strive to reach the peak of what you can achieve in every realm. Almost, a little bit. You are just a little bit worse than humans in every realm in a fantasy sewer world like Zhetian. Others work hard to be better than others in the same realm. You have the conditions but waste it. I don't know how I would die if I were to prove the Dao with those who strive for the Dao. Originally, the first soul ring lasted for a thousand years, and if the third soul ring had enough mental strength, it would be possible for the third soul ring to last for ten thousand years. For example, if your first soul ring absorbs seven or eight hundred thousand years of soul rings, it will basically take your fourth soul ring.
Precious medicinal materials are given away randomly or in large quantities. True 6, after the Tiandou team came out, Dugu Yan and the remaining people gave a large amount of medicinal materials that were thousands of years old. It was just revealed that Qian Renxue was a dead person. All seven people in a team were promoted.
Indeed worship Tang San, fantasize about Tang San, discredit Tang San, become Tang San
It collapsed at the beginning. It was just pure talk. Qin Ming's original work didn't mention how awesome he was, but his talent was recognized by the entire Tiandou Empire. As a result, he was demoted to be useless. The age of the soul ring was completely prepared to commit suicide. Has no one experimented with it after so many years of research in Wuhun Palace? No one in the Spirit Hall can think of things like strengthening the body, but you are the only one who thinks about it? The data are all piled up by human lives, so what makes you stand out? You have a lot of innate soul power. You have no system, you are not a god-level martial soul, and you don't even have a million soul beasts to sacrifice. If you still want to exceed the age limit, just say hello, I said yes, it's fine, but you haven't even watched it after reading a few chapters. You rely on the original work to achieve your own transcendence. In fact, you are not even as good as Tang San.
I am an LSP fan of Douluo novels, so I may abandon it later and give you a pitfall.
After reading Chapter 120, it seems that Ye Lingling is the single heroine, and Zhu Zhuqing is going to be paired with Oscar, but she doesn't know the rest. I have obtained all the jelly grass, and whale glue that is better than the jelly grass has never appeared. At level 30, the soul bone is attached. At level 40, you can go to the eyes of Ice and Fire to get the Dragon King soul bone and compress the soul power to condense the soul core. The soul core cannot be sensed by others. There are no plug-ins in the pig's trotters, only the so-called twin martial souls, which are inherited from his father. It is not clear whether the pig's trotters' actual martial souls are special, so it's a bit unnatural. I can still accept the setting. It depends on whether the author's plot can attract me later. The abandonment rate is 60%. Of course these are my personal opinions and thoughts.
After chapter 80, I don't recommend reading it. You can give it up. The protagonist is acting like a clown and being a dog in public. It really disgusts me. If it's to survive, I won't say anything. It's just for a woman I just met. I can barely accept the poisonous points in the front, but I really can't accept it in the back. Bye.
I don't know when, "IQ Online" became a dispensable label and the choice of a few authors I don't know when, looking at the choices of most authors, you came up with the idea of writing yourself At every moment when inspiration strikes, you write down the creativity, looking forward to using this creativity to add to your own work Every time At a moment when you are not understood, you open your book and look at the protagonists and supporting characters, as if you have become them, and they have become your close friends And one day, you suddenly find this comment in the vast sea of books, and suddenly encounter this book, you may get a friend, get an understanding, and get some ideas...
Starting to charge tens of thousands of words. . . . . .
Write some romantic nonsense
It's not considered to be a good one.
I've been biased since the beginning of Ice and Fire Eyes. I subscribed for 60 chapters and it doesn't look good.
I read Chapter 210, and after a while, I completely finished the book 😆
Most of the books about Douluo have multiple women, but this one has only one woman.
Hee hee😬
In the original play, Flanders and Liu Erlong and Yu Xiaogang had a love triangle. Flanders liked Liu Erlong, Liu Erlong liked Yu Xiaogang, and Yu Xiaogang liked Bibi Dong. This time Flanders can snatch Liu Erlong over 😆
Why did Zhu Zhuqing insist on giving the Oscar? It feels a bit like giving away a girl. In addition, this book is about a single girl, and the subject matter is novel.
It's easy to go wrong when recreating the characters in the original work. Dai Mubai's character is a bit extreme.
Oscar's soul ring should also consider the taste of the "soul skill food", the choice of soul beasts, and the increase for himself and his teammates.
Haha, don't put only 20 pictures on the shelves. The results can be better.
Overall, the protagonist's skills and growth process are well written, so keep up the good work.
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Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?
Can you hurry up and play? It's boring.