Douluo: as a Pet Soul Beast, I Like to Fight in Groups.

First☝️Firstly, the meditation method that is not weak in Tang Sanyuan world is added to Douluo, and all nobles have it. The top-notch product produced by Yu Xiaogang in the original work was evaluated by Tang San as being somewhat like a martial art, which meant that it could not be considered a real martial arts if it was not popular. Second 🤫 Douluo Continent's army has battle formations, which can strengthen the soldiers like in other fantasy novels. In fact, they can't even crack the crossbow. The soul guide technology was brought by the sun and the moon. They are not like this🧠Do you know? Moreover, you have made so many secondary designs that deviate from the original work, why don't you write an original one?

Good guy. You may have underestimated the importance of the Broken Mirror Pill. Qibao Glazed Sect. Blue Lightning Overlord Sect. Wuhun Palace might not have come overnight to ask Dan Fangjia to exterminate the family. Whenever this thing is exposed. There are no more than two titled Douluo who can't defend it.

The author's writing is not strong enough, and the descriptions are particularly embarrassing. For example, when he was brought back to the Po clan by Yang Wudi for the first time when he was six years old, and he spoke to the clan members, I felt awkward every time I read it 😅

Every time I see explosives, Douluo fans of the gun just give up. I don't know why.

Accepted, the soul-breaking gun comes with a ten-thousand-year black ring. Thank you. . .

I like them all, especially Bibi Dong and Master

Looking at this introduction, it seems that everyone in the world is an enemy and doesn't want any allies, right?

This is the first time I have seen Tang San Hao Qian Renxue in a fan. I won't mention the poison mentioned earlier. This is really discouraging readers.

The writing is pretty good, better than most fanfics. Abuse San, almost all the protagonists in the original work are dead, only Tang San is left, Xiao Wu doesn't know if he is still alive or not, and there is currently no heroine. The first 150 chapters are very well written, I prefer the protagonist's decisive character in killing, but the last 40 chapters are poisoned, and there are many places where the writing is very embarrassing, and And when I meet a girl, I feel like my personality changes, and for some reason, I especially like to write about the protagonist having an affair with other girls in the last forty chapters. (Five) It's a pity that I didn't set up a character who is only focused on getting stronger and moving forward without any distractions. These forty chapters fell apart a bit. (Personal opinion)