Becoming a God, One Daily Fortune at a Time

I'm speechless. This setting makes it so easy for people to die. Ordinary people should die early. I can't stand it.

I'm too verbose before every fight. After the fight, wouldn't it be more satisfying to step on the head and force Lailai? After forcing him to behead him, it would be ok! And every time, the opponent was forced to fight before the fight. The same routine happened too many times.

In fact, I feel that it can develop steadily. The protagonist is either causing trouble or on the way to make trouble. It feels very aesthetically exhausting.

I feel that the plot is still a bit cliche, with some new ideas but not much, and the pace is fast but it can't be called an invincible flow. Plus you have a fan limit of 300 for speaking out... Oh, it's hard to get out of the circle.

Can there be less passers-by watching? Everything is done in such a high-profile manner. Whenever I buy something, there are a lot of passers-by watching and commenting.

The protagonist's strength must be too strong. With perfect skills and well-equipped equipment, enemies at a smaller stage can be beaten away. There is really no difference from ordinary skills.

Some book friends said that prices are chaotic, but that is impossible. I have made the corresponding settings in advance. Some of the settings are as follows: 1 copper coin = 1 meat bun 1 tael of silver = 1000 copper coins 1 tael of gold = 10 taels of silver Spiritual Ore Price ≥ gold of equal quality One blood spirit grass: 500 copper coins One body-building fruit: 500 copper coins One portion of Tianxin Polygonatum odorifera liquid: 500 copper coins One Zhuyan fruit: 650 copper coins One purple-patterned lotus seed: 3 50 copper coins One pound of monster meat in the early stage of body tempering: 100 copper coins One pound of monster meat in the middle stage of body tempering: 200 copper coins One pound of monster meat in the late stage of body tempering: 400 copper coins One pound of monster meat in the peak stage of body tempering: 1,000 copper coins One pound of Qi Refining Realm demon meat: 10 taels of silver One day's wages for an ordinary thug: 10 copper coins Price of a private courtyard: starting price of 100 taels of silver Rent for a private courtyard: 10 taels of silver per year (an area of half an acre)

Son, am I coquettish or not?

The progression of the plot is too routine, and the pretense is also very stiff.

Let me share my feelings after seeing this: First, the relationship between people is too simple, they are either good guys or bad guys, and there is no change and struggle of human nature; second, the dialogue is slightly retarded, the description of psychological activities is too much, and the fighting scenes are not very good. Overall, it's fun to watch, but not enough food.