Taking Root in Myriad Worlds, Beginning with the Elven Divine Tree

In the first twenty chapters, there are no major bad points, and the plot is quite smooth, but there are also shortcomings. The protagonist's friend has a plastic brotherhood with the protagonist. In order to chase a woman (he is still a sea king, the protagonist's friend is a pure dog licker), he ignores his brother, and the protagonist helps him regardless of his own situation (he can hardly afford to eat). This character is a tool to promote the development of the plot. Also, in the early stage, before setting foot on the extraordinary, it is best not to put otherworldly objects in front of others, in case others have a way to tell that they are not from this world.

How to put it this way, I feel that the plot is too confusing. Firstly, there are a lot of plots for the brothers. Secondly, an inexplicable woman comes in. Thirdly, the protagonist feels that he is very capable, but the writing feels so weak.

It feels so weird, I can't stand it, maybe it's my personal reasons.

What a coincidence, I came across you again. I was in the same period as you 4 years ago, and the first order number was similar to yours. Then I was so discouraged that I didn't dare to write a book for 4 years, so I gave up. Later I found out that you had finished your lv4 book, and suddenly I felt so inspiring, so I started a new book again. I didn't expect to see you again today.

Look at it, how can you play the development game like this! When there is no danger, you should develop the sacred tree. You take 80% of the big head and develop a hammer.

This alien world line is actually quite exciting if written in detail. I don't know if the author's copy is like Infinite Flow or something like that, but the author obviously put more effort into the plot of the main world line, and then wrote it in a sentence. Some people like to watch plots in other worlds, and some like to watch plots in the main world. But it's a pity that the author didn't write both lines well.

It feels like gay friends are just cheating on the protagonist's life 😅

One chapter is too few, and it will make people lose the desire to read. Why not just two chapters a day?

On the first day of publication, get a front row seat 😌

This book is so beautiful. It's just too short, Shuhuang moves on: Chaos Lord Infinite Instructions.