Cultivation, Starting with My Childhood Friend

After being born, he spent time with his childhood sweetheart, but then all the sweethearts were sent away; a talented woman suddenly appeared and challenged him to a poetry contest, but then she left; after passing the imperial examination, he went to the military camp to flirt with the princess, but then the princess left (a year later); a marriage agreement was suddenly made, and then everyone…

I'm wondering if the author changed. The system's development was okay at the beginning, but it basically disappeared later. All those random skills the system gave, except for the Sharingan, were basically useless. The romance was truly indescribable. The male lead is such a clueless guy, yet he's so devoted to the female lead?

After reading dozens of chapters, the title doesn't match up. The childhood sweetheart is gone, the one who fell from the sky is gone too. This isn't a romance cultivation story, is it? The side characters have more content than the main characters, and there's even a love triangle. You might as well just make it a cultivation story without a female lead, that might be better. It's a case of false advertising!

After reading 140 chapters, even with a system and the five strongest spiritual roots, he's still a useless nobody. But that's nothing compared to the fact that he faced life-threatening situations four times in those 140 chapters, each time escaping by sheer luck. His life is in someone else's hands, isn't it?! By the time I finish this book, I'll probably be saved hundreds of times. What a waste of my money!

What's the deal with writing about the imperial court while cultivating immortality? Let me tell you.

The list of beauties is truly the biggest flaw in this novel.

Having read up to chapter 157, I've finally finished the Border Town instance. It feels rather strange. It's described as a cultivation-based game, and the synopsis mentions cultivating to increase attributes, but it never seems to have any effect. There's no satisfying feeling; it's like stacking up your Q (powerful abilities) for over a decade, only to punch a pillow.

It's hard to imagine that this is the same author as the Resurrection Coin.

The author might be better suited to Japanese light novels. For readers of fantasy/xia (fantasy/martial arts) novels, romance isn't essential, it's just a seasoning; too much "salt" is needed, and a strong main plot and storyline are crucial. Light novel readers tend to enjoy sweet moments and romantic escapades.

Being hypocritical is unacceptable. A protagonist who has lived two lives, daring to act, love, and hate, makes even the supporting characters seem more like protagonists—it's unbearable.