A Generation of Demon Saints Started by Collecting Spiritual Beads from the Sea

Without a golden finger, you can't grow. Don't even think about it. The author has more intelligence and resources than the protagonist. If you don't give the protagonist a little help, how can you reasonably upgrade the protagonist?

I'm really sorry for all the book friends. The author's original idea was to have multiple parallel lines, a melee between monsters from all sides, and then the protagonist rises all the way through the chaos. It's because I'm not good enough and didn't describe the story I conceived, which affected everyone's perception. I'm really sorry.

Although it is plain, it looks surprisingly comfortable

It's beautiful. The monsters are not only cruel, but also very fairy-like. Good reviews.

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It's too bland, it's tasteless and it's a pity to throw it away

It's quite cute, but it feels like it's missing a section in some places, and a lot of things are not explained clearly. Come on

It's a pity that there are no investment quotas this month. It's a good article.

Update, update, the plot is good, except for the transition from other perspectives, which is a bit unfamiliar. See Chapter 29. It is recommended that the big plot should be less elaborate, otherwise the pace of watching will be too fast. The protagonist has just transformed into two arms, and his cultivation level is still at the lowest level. You always deal with plots about big monsters and various superstructure contents. Sensory, so awkward. The protagonist, the protagonist, feels like a supporting role. You ask him to upgrade first. The time span should be a little larger. How many months have passed? How many years have passed? Give it a little longer. Become a demon general first, and then write more high-level plots, and the protagonist can steal the chicken. The author thinks about it, really. You wrote it yourself, and you have a thorough understanding of the continuation of the story, but you have to let the audience know what it is, otherwise everything they see will be in the clouds. You will know after reading the comments and chapters. It is very confusing. Online novels are a fast-food culture. Everyone reads them quickly. If the details are not in place, it will be difficult to understand the layout of your book. Then watch, watch, as soon as you change the scene, people will be separated from the sense of substitution.

Excellent product, why don't many people see it?

If you don't have enough monthly tickets, you'll definitely get cold. Others say it's even more difficult to see the Holy Mother.

The writing is okay, but there is a section in the middle that is a bit messy

Why is it getting more and more chaotic? What the hell

It's well written and very comfortable to read. But be careful to clearly explain the name of the monster. For example, the one with the sword in the front has always been codenamed "Coi". When someone calls him by his name later, he just uses his name. The same goes for the monsters that come to cause trouble later. It's not that I can't read it, it's just that there are so many monsters that just appeared that I can't tell them apart. It is better to mention the code name and name during the transition. The author has good writing style and the story is good. If the outline is straightened out and the transition from front to back is more natural, readers will like it more.

All book friends can reply to this page with their negative impressions of this book. Hold your fists.