
Deputy Professional Master of a Certain American Comic
某美漫的副职业大师
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- Infinite Flow
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- 1y ago
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Overall OK
It was okay at the beginning, but after meeting the Punisher, the plot was somewhat accelerating, and the overall reading experience was quite good. And the setting of sub-professional full master is also very interesting. After reading the few paragraphs about the industrial park, my impression really dropped a bit. The first dozen or so chapters were quite positive, but why has the moral sense declined at this point? To transform the Winter Soldiers into awakening, you can just add a few explanations about preventing rebellion in the future. There is no need to say "Tools must have the awareness of tools" before forcibly shutting down. Taken together, okay, the enhanced person is no longer a human being, so by the way, Bucky was directly sold to Tony. It's very awkward. According to such standards and logic, if the protagonist is destroyed by Thanos in the future, then don't struggle. After all, "ants must have the consciousness of ants." It feels like there are too many spoilers. The protagonist must have read the novel script and is not afraid of the butterfly effect at all. And the most amazing thing is that Gu Yi completely let nature take its course. Take Iron Man as an example. Tony's suffering is an important opportunity to become Iron Man. Without this incident and knowing the script, he would most likely only be Young Iron Man, not Iron Man. Moreover, Tony, who was not awakened by the disaster, had a very bad and dandy character and attitude at that time. In the book, he is too innocent. Generally speaking, it's okay. Come on, author, teacher.
Can you sell space backpacks? !
The author should consider the fact that the protagonist can sell space backpacks. The smaller one is smuggling, and the larger extreme one requires dead soldiers to carry nuclear bombs and place them on the enemy's territory. This feasibility is high. If the space backpack is sold later, and the terrorists or the forces that want to provoke a war still use ordinary people to launch the war, or use ordinary weapons to launch the war, then your space backpack is extremely poisonous.
Behind the scenes, don't expose it. This is the best way to write. Be a third party other than S. H. I. E. L. D. And the Avengers.
When the author told Tony so early, wasn't he afraid that there would be no Iron Man in the future? After all, some things can't be changed just by talking. Tony's change started with the kidnapping.
It's so watery, I just write like this over and over again. I can write 3,000 words for a background introduction, 3,000 words for buying a fish, and 3,000 words for copying from Baidu Encyclopedia.
No, it's a Marvel movie again. Even if you wear Marvel anime, it's okay. Marvel movies have been poorly written in the past two years.
Will you incorporate innovation by learning from Marvel's technology? Or can we only do system things?
It became more and more complicated, and I wrote three or four chapters on a spider thread. It was very laborious and expensive to come up with. This thing can be produced in a few hours by asking Stark.
Tell others that you can see the future from the very beginning? As soon as this ability is exposed, whoever is not greedy will want to arrest you and interrogate you in the future!
Eternal is the creator of Marvel? ? ? ? Seriously
The author might as well make the protagonist like those in the Continental Hotel who are responsible for logistics, elegant, stylish, and also a sweeper, who can go out to wipe the butt of the American team in charge of the front row when they can't help it, and preferably whip the opponent to turn the tide.
These two chapters are not very good. There is no need to step on others to highlight your own strengths. What's the big deal in bullying an old man? It's really not pleasant for a veteran to wake up after being injured and be treated as an experience pack directly.
The bonus period for American comic novels is almost over! It is said that you quit when you could get the bonus, but now that you can't get the bonus, you are back to write!
Although it's okay, the protagonist's sub-career system feels dispensable. It has little to do with the title of the book, and I don't see any priority. I just write here and there.
Every dwarf family has a book of hatred. Records of enemies from generation to generation and deeds of hatred. The new leader of the dwarves opened the Book of Great Hatred belonging to the High King, but was surprised to find that the unfinished entries above were filled with a person's name: "In the 588th year of the dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why did other races resist large charges? A spear or a halberd is enough, and a dwarf can hold a shield? I said: This is a symbol of strength! A guy holding a warhammer slandered: Everyone on the other side was tripped. " ----Snorri Whitebeard, the first supreme king, note: This is too much of an insult to me, and this is a life-and-death feud! "In the year 2526 of the Dwarf calendar, Someone asked: Why are dwarf helmets so thick and strong? I said: Dwarf blacksmiths are highly skilled, and the thick iron helmets can withstand all ferocious attacks of the enemy. A certain hammer man: Too short, afraid of being hit in the head by a knife." ----The second generation of the High King Gotrek Starbreaker, note: I have insulted me too much, and this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the 3273rd year of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why are light rangers and bare-chested butchers not much faster than heavily armored dwarves? I said: All dwarves are muscular men, and armor cannot be a burden to us. A certain hammer man: short legs, with an upper limit." ----Three generations of High King Mograem Blackbeard, note: If I am too harsh, this hatred is irreconcilable! "In the year 3576 of the Dwarven calendar, Someone asked: Why do most dwarf helmets have spikes and sharp corners? I laughed and said: If necessary, you can use a head hammer to attack. A certain hammer man: If the spikes pierce your feet, the enemy will not step on your head to cut off the back row." ----The fourth generation of the High King Sgrim Mogrimson, note: The insult to me is too great, this hatred is irreconcilable! In 4143, the fifth-generation high king Logan Ironbeard... In 4508, the sixth-generation high king Korgan Ironbeard... In 5208, the seventh-generation high king Finn Thorkel... In 6235, the eighth-generation Supreme King Kendrak Grickson In 6728, the ninth-generation Supreme King Orrick... In 6825, the tenth-generation Supreme King Orrickson... Densely written: This hatred is irreconcilable! "Who is this guy with the warhammer? Why is he everywhere?" He was a little confused. "Why didn't the dwarves capture any replacements after the war?" A voice suddenly sounded from behind. "Because dwarves have no mercy towards their enemies, they can only kill them all!" He said proudly. "Shouldn't it be that my legs are short and I can't catch up?" Hearing this voice, he suddenly looked back and saw a guy holding a warhammer thinking leisurely. So, he angrily opened a new page and continued to write: The dwarves will be great again! Also, a guy with a warhammer insulted our clan, and we have a life-and-death hatred! ---High King Thorgrim. The Resentful One.
Hey, what about archeology, author?
What about archeology when I'm a senior? Even if there are no other cultural relics, this alchemy dragon cannot be lived without!
I haven't seen it yet, but I just want to ask the protagonist later, they brought the entire red room, and all the black widows didn't want it? It's about to happen. Natasha's three generations of grandparents
Marvel Chapter 3 is always about predicting the future, there is no other reason
The author saw and followed the content
Is the last fantasy book still updated?
Damn, half a year has passed, and it looks like I can no longer cheat.