America: Stereotype of Able People

Let me first state that I patiently read about forty chapters. I really couldn't stand the author and the protagonist he wrote. Then I went to the comment area and read other comments and found that the protagonist's mentality and strength have not grown at all. Like the author, I cover my eyes and ears and indulge in my own small circle, so that I have no enemies and will not be affected. Mentality, this protagonist is not suitable for a Chinese. After reading other comments in the comment area, they are all looking for excuses to say that the protagonist is a very ordinary ordinary person. I hold an objection. The Chinese people have the highest crisis awareness in the world, otherwise they would not have the highest savings value in the world. The protagonist knows that he is in a chaotic Marvel world where various extraordinary elements are stitched together. In the extraordinary world, we know that a large number of ordinary people in the world have been affected by the battles of extraordinary beings, and their property and even their lives have been lost. The protagonist is familiar with all kinds of plots. He also has a very strong golden finger and a plug-in celestial traveler. He does not have any sense of crisis that a Chinese should have to use the golden finger to find ways to increase his strength in order to protect himself. The relaxed state of mind is like going to the roadside shop to buy a sausage on the way home from school. I can't stand such an author and protagonist. Ordinary people will not be in an environment where the safety of life and property is greatly threatened, and there is a very powerful cheat. They can't resist improving themselves. This is not ordinary people. Ordinary people are not that smart. As for the plot, it is all a running account without any memory points or emotions. Everyday prose is written in the same way as daily prose. It is definitely not like eating a meal today and writing like this and doing this and eating a meal tomorrow. It is a straightforward story without any ups and downs in the plot. It is like a primary school student who is forced to write a diary. In this way, it doesn't have the fun of elementary school students that sometimes makes people laugh; If there are no Marvel elements in it to guide the book, and without the Marvel characters and plot foundation to support it, the author's purely original writing, from the protagonist to the supporting roles to the plot, will not make people remember and interest in reading it.

What are you writing about? Would you rather practice traditional kung fu than vigorously develop plug-ins that can fly faster than the ants? Marvel's combat power expands extremely quickly. You'll be crushed by elite monsters before you even get started! You know the worldview and related plot information, how do you settle down and go about your daily life? Any other author and protagonist would probably be in a hurry to learn spells from Karma Taj or try to get help from Stan Lee. Otherwise, they would have to find those influential characters to use their help to improve the attributes of the plug-in.

The writing is very juvenile, the pace is a bit slow, and Golden Finger is not strong enough.

Write Slowly and Watch Slowly Life, it has the style of TV series and movies of the last century, and it has a very special feeling. I have only seen a similar warm and strange style of painting in another book that collapsed in the later period. It's a pity that Qidian's mechanism doesn't have this patience. I hope it can be completed smoothly.

It's clearly written like a running account, with 0 description of facial expressions and approximately 0 description of environment. It's not that exciting, but surprisingly I can barely read it.

The protagonist has a hidden stereotype (a Chinese boy who is capable but is bullied and dare not retaliate). This is my stereotype of this book.

I was hit in the head with a rugby ball when my attribute points were filled up and I got the title of Kung Fu Boy. I didn't notice it at all. After it was over, the other party said it was okay? The protagonist doesn't even dare to fart, so he conforms to the stereotype of Chinese Americans. Isn't this a serious attribute improvement?

Let's talk about two misunderstandings this book has caused for new readers. First of all, the background is in the United States, but it is not the normal America, but the American TV series, which includes Spider-Man, Captain America, Tony, Dad, Black Monkey, and other film and television characters. In other words, the world background itself contains extraordinary elements and is not a solipsistic type. Second point, the protagonist's golden finger has a very low sense of existence, and the stereotype he gets does not mean that he will have this ability as soon as he gets it, but more of a potential. If he wants to realize the potential, he still needs to add some points. And after adding points, the performance is mediocre, not as good as the golden cudgel adventure obtained from dad. Currently, the only highlight ability is "other people's children", which can make the protagonist's IQ higher than those around him and turn him into a genius. Then let's talk about the plot and characters. The character of the protagonist is a very ordinary ordinary person, which is very different from the protagonists in most online books. Even if most of the protagonists are ordinary people, they basically have many characteristics that only "protagonists" have, such as being calm and thoughtful in situations. But the protagonist of this book is different. His psychology is not that mature, and he is closer to ordinary people in reality, as can be seen from the example of the football hitting his head in the book review area. Finally, the plot, I think the plot is the biggest problem of this book. The problem with the plot is that there is no plot. Books without plots are generally daily articles, and the author is indeed writing about daily life. I really wanted to beautify the author's daily life, but in the end I gave up. To be honest, the author's daily description level is at the level of a running account, and he relies entirely on two fan characters, Peter and Gwen, to support his appearance. If he created his own two characters to interact with the protagonist, this book would definitely be praised. Write the main points of daily life, one is interesting, the other is to pay attention to the emotional changes of the characters. But the author's way of writing is to tell you what the protagonist eats every day and how many dishes he cooks. Today's dish is shredded potatoes, how to choose the potatoes, how thick to cut the shreds, what temperature the oil is... The narrative method is like boiled water, without emotion. If daily life is compared to water, then in reality our daily life is like boiled water, tasteless but indispensable. The author feels the same way when he writes. But the daily life that readers want to see is not real daily life. It is fruit juice with a bit of sourness and sweetness, not plain water. Because I have drunk enough boiled water. If you read this book as a whole, you will find that nearly 70% of it is this kind of invalid content, and you can't even recall what this book is about. There are only a few things that I really remember, one is the Golden Cudgel, the other is the Time and Space Radio, and the first time I met Steve, there is nothing else

The plot is slow and day-to-day, and the golden finger is not regular. I thought that I could directly obtain this ability by telling others what their stereotypes are, but in the end, I got a little bit of attribute points by asking others to form stereotypes. The key is that the protagonist clearly knows that this is not a peaceful everyday world, and may even be a comic version of Marvel that is more dangerous than the movie version of Marvel, but he has no sense of urgency and chooses not to deliberately improve his attributes and go with the flow. Furthermore, Chapters 50 and 60 are just a level with a bit of brute force and loose kung fu, and the combat power is purely sewer-like. To be honest, looking at the introduction, it feels like being cheated. There is obviously a good idea, but the writing is ordinary.

I can't stop watching it. The pace is slow and the plot development is not bad, but you can't keep talking about it. The whole article is meaningless and the word count has almost no substantive progress. I wish that passers-by had to write down everything they say. This is not a slow pace, it is just watering down And you are writing for Marvel, and you keep repeating the content about the protagonist learning kung fu. There hasn't been much progress yet. This is Marvel. There are technological explosions with high combat power and various cosmic energy mutants. Do you plan to write an Iron Fist? Even if you want to brag about how powerful kung fu is, you don't mean to keep writing about kung fu. Test, everything is full of disdain for the culture of other countries. The last person who did this said a classic "The heaven is vast and the earth is rich", and he really used the most low-end writing method to stamp his head. If you think that Cathay has the best culture in the world, no country can compare with it, then you should write other types. If you step on Marvel here, the classic plan is to defeat Thanos with one hand The subject matter is to It's rubbish, the content is meant to be flooded, there are no plot points, the characters are pale, the comment section must be controlled and deleted, foreign culture must be suppressed, the writing is not good, and the protagonist must be a turtle While writing about America's stereotypes of Chinese people, I am also full of stereotypes about America It's so messy

The protagonist increased his ability to the human limit of Captain America level early on, but as a result, he could only stand for a few minutes, and his movements were sluggish with a 20 kilogram sandbag. There is also a label called Kung Fu Kid that I don't see any use for. Is there any difference if I have it or not?

After reading Chapter 13, I asked one thing, what exactly is the protagonist's bonus? The so-called limit for ordinary people is 31 points, and then all the points in the bucket are full. They even said that they broke the limit and added some points, but it ended up being mailed in five minutes of class? And when you go to practice martial arts, you just have to step on the horse for a while, and that's not enough? A bucket that is said to be the limit of ordinary people, even if the will is full? What is the use of this attribute point? It feels like it's not even as good as a slightly stronger ordinary person. It's too outrageous.

The introduction should be accompanied by a description of daily writing, because 95% of it is daily. The first impression of the current introduction is that it is a funny meme article, or an American comic article. Ordinary readers who want to come in to read funny articles or read some mindless and refreshing articles will basically be persuaded to leave. In fact, there is no need to reverse the sheep-headed dog meat, because American comics are daily articles. There are very few, and they can be used as a signboard. The other is that the biggest selling point at present is "When Peter Gwen grew up" and "Live and grow on campus with Chaoyue". This aspect is not mentioned in the introduction. This is the reason why 90% of readers collect and read it. On the other hand, there is really no reason to use a funny introduction.

The author can use cowardice as your protagonist's survival strategy, but the plot cannot really be cowardly. It has been so annoying to readers, and it really can't become popular. It would be a pity that this book will become a eunuch. If you are provocative, a short, flat and quick retaliation can make the opponent stop for a long time. This is also a cowardly look, rather than someone like you who is always being bullied.

After reading Chapter 16, the protagonist doesn't seem to have much interest in the development and research of his own abilities, Goldfinger, and he doesn't do much research at all. The label Kung Fu Kid can basically determine how to use it, pretend to be a magic stick or a Taoist priest. A top student! Get those stereotypes, get those labels. But the protagonist won't just muddle along there,

The daily life of a Chinese guy in North America who suggested changing his name

There is a lion hidden in the protagonist's eyes

The protagonist is a very naughty man, a max-level ordinary person who was hit on the head with a ball by someone at a party. Someone came over and told others to be careful, and then left the party and ran away. I know that this is the Marvel world, and I have a system to upgrade and earn abilities, but because of my turtle character, I don't want to become stronger. I have always dreamed of being a turtle.

The author gave him a hook + he knew the plot. At the age of 16, he reached the mortal level with full attributes and became extraordinary, but all day long he was only busy licking others and thinking about "hugging their thighs"... He is so promising, haha This kind of character really makes me want to vomit.

The food is tasteless, the protagonist is a waste, the author is Pure Shark Bi The system has a purely auxiliary role, the system panel and the plot each play their own role No matter how awesome the system values ​​are, it is useless, there is no expressiveness It is a numerical value that is filled in, and the plot is based on shit The protagonist is a pure ordinary person, not even as good as some people with strong talents Purely running account plot

Are you saying that you created a turtle protagonist who is physically strong and can punch through reinforced concrete walls, but then shrinks back when threatened by two gangsters?

Classic American Chinese, thank the author for showing a banana man in front of us

America, the boring daily life of a loser

I won't pick on you if you write about daily life. You're a time traveler and you don't know about the King of Kung Fu? If you make the protagonist stupid, then we have to be picky, right?

I started skipping pages after reading two chapters of the paid chapters. The further back I went, the more I skipped, and then I didn't want to read anymore. After skipping more than a dozen chapters, it still didn't affect the flow of the story, and you knew what kind of book this was.

Wow, the first tag is actually funny. How is it funny?

Good grass, daily writing, warm, mixed with the American comic universe, recommended, fairy grass resources. The look and feel is similar to "The Big Bang Theory" and "Friends". Good review, I hope the more you write, the better.

The evaluation is that it is less than grass jelly and more than food, and it is more of a daily American comic. After getting tired of reading all kinds of beautiful battle comics about big battles and soaring combat power, this book is equivalent to a fresh vegetable salad. Compared to plots where you always pretend to be cool and get slapped in the face or fight to increase your combat power, this book will make you feel refreshed. There is a system but the sense of presence is very low. There is nothing chasing the protagonist to make him desperately upgrade. The writing is very slow but it is very detailed. It does not stick everything together rigidly. It is the kind of story that tells the story word for word. What I hate the most is when the American comic Yigulu fills in all the protagonists and supporting characters in a hodgepodge. This book handles it very well. There are no direct poisonous points. The supporting characters who appear a lot are all people with good senses, and there is no reaction or way of speaking that makes people feel uncomfortable. Some readers may think that the upgrade is slow and there is no clear main line, but I think this daily life is the best main line. How can I put it this way? The high school students look like high school students, and the various reactions are very real. Compared with other novels that always engage in revenge and pretend to be slapped in the face, I think this book is more realistic and immersive. After all, there is so much violence on the Internet, and it is really hard to find books like this. To summarize, the author of this book wrote it very carefully, but there are too few updates every day. 1 to 10 points. This book has a score of 8.5 And can be read in one go. Seriously, please read more about the author. It is really not as easy to find books now as it was more than ten years ago. As a reader who has been reading books for almost twenty years, it is really troublesome to find books now.

Stereotype: Don't dare to fight back when bullied 🙂

Let me put a hole in it to prevent you from clicking on it next time you swipe it. This book is too bland, with dozens of chapters and a running account and no story at all.