Take the Interstellar into Fantasy

The male protagonist really has a chaotic relationship between men and women and opens a harem

Hey, everything was fine before, but I suddenly felt bored when I got to Call of Duty, and there is almost no trace of StarCraft here. Also, I want to ask, the author, is the protagonist you wrote American or Chinese? China is not mentioned at all from beginning to end. I just want to ask, are you a time traveler or an aborigine? ??

The idea is great, the concept is good, but the writing is so poor that I can't bear to look at it.

. There are a lot of comic book thieves this year. I have never played StarCraft. I don't understand the plot, but the Marvel plot in it is still interesting next door. I see that the most popular ones have good reviews. I haven't seen any nutritious reviews. We don't know what the highlight of this book is. I read it mindlessly for a while, just reading the chapters.

Original text: Laura is still a girl after all. Although she knows Chris very well and knows that this guy must have set his sights on her harem, she still finds it very useful. "Hey, Laura, is this your spouse too? It's actually a male? It looks ordinary..." While the two were still enjoying the sweetness of this moment, one of the alien girls behind Laura couldn't help it, and the one who spoke was the Shia girl with two feathers on her head. At this time, the other party was looking at Chris with a high and disdainful look.

I don't know much about StarCraft. I would like to ask if the golden finger of StarCraft is enough. The simplest example is, what is the speed of light at the fastest spaceship in StarCraft? Is there space technology, dimensional technology, or even time technology? There is also the ability to create small universes in some science fiction novels. If small universes cannot be created, can stars or black holes do it? Or do they just stay at a very weak stage? What is the life span of living organisms?

Build an incense burning tower to commemorate the youth of the robbers who were in the third or fourth watch. Let's burn incense.

Iron Man and the Terminator, a wolf in sheep's clothing and a sheep in wolf's clothing...

The author should at least do some popular science. He made a mistake in the first chapter, okayヽ(￣д￣;)ノ, 100 units of terazine? Anyone who has played StarCraft knows that this is an impossible task.

In an invincible start, I thought your goal was the stars and the sea, but you ended up making a small fuss on the earth! Goodbye👋🏻

Even if you start a new book and don't update this one, everyone knows you are a eunuch, so who expects you to finish the new book?

I hope the author will update more so that my trump account can support you more. Don't believe me? I'll change my trump account and send it to 999 for you to see.

I can't stand it, all kinds of elements are mixed together, summoning characters is just to serve the plot, and summoning things to summon jb, I don't know what jb I'm writing at the 23rd chapter, the plot is not explained well, the characters are not explained well, the main universe is not outlined, and more than half of the words are useless pens

You can't chew off more than you can chew, and the author's writing power can't be controlled. If there is too much chaos and no balance, the power system will collapse. The author tries to force a balance but it feels inconsistent.

Can't comment. Personally, I feel that the plot is too slow. In more than 300 chapters, even one-fifth of the human race's technology is not included, let alone the Zerg and the Protoss. At this speed, the novel will have 2000 to 3000 chapters. The ending will be good. Besides, the title and introduction say that it is a fantasy time-travel story about StarCraft, but there are very few StarCraft characters and characteristics in the content. It's not that there are none, but the author has been fantasizing about himself and scheming.

Is the rhythm too tight? One thing follows another. It feels like the protagonist has no rest at all. Moreover, many things are happening at the same time. It is a headache to read the multi-line description. Can we do less things each time and insert two chapters between each incident to take a daily rest?

A suggestion for the author's next book: If you don't have enough writing and logical thinking to write a protagonist with some brains, don't always let the protagonist face various difficulties and threats and then use so-called luck and coincidence to promote the plot. Really disgusting.

It feels like a lot of bad things have been imposed on SHIELD, regardless of the original setting.

The use of Tony Stark: let him develop the protoss medic. Only Tony on earth can cure and repair a fatal BUG of the protoss designated by Blizzard. There is no medic. This is quite fatal for a race that has entered the starry sky and has a population growth rate as low as single digits. This is a win-win for Chris and Tony. Tony He can win the title of the Protoss's eternal friend, and Al's airport will always be open to him, so that Tony can risk his death with confidence and boldness. And Chris has the ability of the Protoss Medic to allow the Protoss to face the three major empires of the Marvel Universe. With his talents, he is the only one who can answer the question of what the Kedarin Crystal is. This is a great thing for the Protoss. The Eve of the Big Explosion of Technology Remarks: Tony is essentially lazy. He needs an opponent to unleash his potential. Once there is no opponent (such as Chris, the Mandarin, Hulk, and the Ten Rings Gang) he will drink alcohol (refer to the Earth Z parallel universe), but once there is an opponent, he will He will develop new types of armor and turn money into power instead of spending money like water. Chris can stimulate this love-struck friend to stay in the laboratory all day instead of being competitive. When Tony creates a powerful armor with a serial number of more than three digits in the comic universe, Chris can harvest Tony's achievements and join the interstellar technology tree with a smile.

It's really good. Damn it, I don't want to read your introduction at all. That huge and boring StarCraft background. After all, you are just summoning and building, and you are not really in StarCraft. You only need to introduce the functions and combat power, and then start fighting immediately. You are not here to tell me the background story.

I guess the robbers will never update before watching Avengers 4, hehehe

Really bad water, the waterways are endless, and how big is the Marvel Earth when there are multiple copies of the plot added together? I don't want to say too much, it's really not good-looking.

There are too many hodgepodges, and it looks like a mess. Moreover, the author does not have the ability to handle the chain reaction of the hodgepodge of various world views. The whole chapter is an introduction. The readers are not here to read your popular science.

There are many common sense mistakes. Many of them are almost introductions to the power of water.

Popular science about some military settings in StarCraft: First of all, the world background and story background of StarCraft 1 to StarCraft 2 are very complete, and they are set according to certain rules and logic. If the force of StarCraft really wants to compete with those bullshit beings in the comic version of Marvel, it is indeed impossible. However, the author also emphasized that it is a movie version, so don't worry about who is stronger and who is weaker. (The combat power settings mentioned below are derived from the integration of official data, plots, game background stories, etc. Please do not take the game data performance into account. For example, machine gunners can knock down battlecruisers and aircraft carriers. This is a game performance, not a real-world performance in the background of the story) Human race: Marines (machine gunners) are the most basic armed force of the human race. They wear power armor and have a built-in nuclear fusion reactor to provide energy. In addition, they have advanced life support devices inside and can defend against many non-super-large-caliber weapon attacks. It is equipped with a C-14 Piercer assault rifle, which uses 8 mm U-238 depleted uranium bullets and uses electromagnetic energy to push the bullets out of the chamber. The principle is the same as the electromagnetic gun. It is powerful enough to penetrate several meters of alloy armor.

Let's open another floor to popularize science about some special units in the interstellar world. I don't know whether the author will write about these units later, but I can't help but want to popularize science in advance. (The soul of science popularization is burning)

The protagonist sits back and watches the T-Virus spread throughout Raccoon City, taking the opportunity to make war profits. He has no compassion and is a bit hard to accept.

The protagonist is no longer a human being. He is making war fortune crazily and strengthening terrorists. Both the military and the terrorists are making money. Sit back and watch the crisis spread

Anyone who knows the author can help me ask if he is still alive.

It has been added to the collection. It has great ideas and the author's writing is very good. This book title makes people want to click on it. I visited with my work "The Witcher Begins in America". Thank you!