Hong Kong Crossover: Framed from the Start, I Turn the Tables and Strike Back

The more Cantonese you use, the more likely you are to win big. But when you write a novel, the majority of readers are in Mandarin, and Cantonese won't hit the mark.

People hate stupid people these days, and frankly, the stupid things Kim and Maggie did will deter a lot of people. The author's writing is actually alright, but the protagonist clearly knows these two are stupid, yet he still acts without any precautions, making it feel like his intelligence has been drastically reduced, which is very frustrating to watch.

A place to store the brain. When you see a subsystem overthrow the main system and take its place, and the other side is a rich kid who actually accepts bribes and gets suppressed, and then still gets to work as your subordinate, this real world is simply unbelievable.

Old bookworms don't need to read this anymore. Just give up when he takes down his former colleague, who is also the mastermind. The initial problem is minor, but the later parts will cause problems immediately. You can treat it as a mindless, enjoyable read.

Holy crap, you actually thought of that! If this idea had been put at the beginning, your ratings would have skyrocketed. Now it's only been 20-something chapters, and some people can't even see that far ahead.

Let's write everything in Cantonese! That way, more people will read it!

The realistic parts were terrible; it would have been better to write about the protagonist traveling through worlds one by one. I skipped over every single realistic scene.

How can you laugh so hard you don't die? There are over a dozen jokes in a single chapter; every sentence is delivered with a laugh.

Dude, if you're going to write about Hong Kong films, watch the original movie before you write. A 22-year-old police superintendent? Are you serious? Hong Kong only has police station chiefs, not police commissioners. This is so out of place, what's the difference between this and Los Angeles People's Hospital?

How about using this as a female lead illustration?