Transmigrating Through the Worlds of RimWorld

Sorry, I thought it was a fringe world

I thought it started from the game Ring World..., But it turned out to be like this.

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I'll check if there are any brothers who play ring. I can add more stories about the ring, such as the customs of alien creatures in the ring world... Cough cough cough. In short, the main thing is the heavens, and the rings belong to the background!

I still want to complain about it. Being deprived of power by the system and accepting punishment is a very poisonous point. Although there are systematic punishments in other authors' books, not many protagonists are really punished. If you write it like this, it will only make the protagonist look like a clown. Your strength, life and everything else come from the charity of the system. If you make the system unhappy, you will be treated like a servant in no time.

Aha, I know why I have a problem. Your NPC description is too broad. When I watch a movie, especially a foreign movie, I basically can't remember the name of the protagonist. However, there are a lot of foreign names in your novels that are not described. Just like the movie commentary, everyone uses Xiaoshuai and Xiaomei. It's easy to remember. You have to grasp the characteristics of the NPC. Roman Eyes is very good. You can use it as a reference. Turn over Ah Huang and ask him to stop writing about astronomy now.

First, the plot is written quickly and urgently, lacking polish, and lacks the fascinating plots of the previous period such as the black pope. It feels like a running account. Second, there are too many typos and logically confusing dialogue. Third, I miss women every day, which is really a bit of a stallion style. Fourthly, there are many self-pleasure memes, which may not be understood by readers who are not familiar with them. In short, I feel that the author is not paying attention to writing and wants to finish it quickly.

As the title states, if the protagonist throws his emotions to death, then his polarity will not be biased toward any of the eight rays of chaos. In other words, can the protagonist be said to be chaotic and undivided (that is, the hole in the center of the eight-pointed star)?

The author did not intend to write about Ring World in detail. It is more of a transit point for a temporary rest. Every time he travels through the world and comes back, he will move on to the next world after about 3 chapters. It is obvious that Hong Kong, DC, and Marvel authors are more interested. Currently, there are more than 380 chapters in Ring World, which does not account for even one-tenth of the world.

It gives me a feeling of the end of the world. I like this type of novel, but the shortcomings are obvious. The author writes too fast, has no details, and has no process of cultivating feelings with people. It is easy to not write long.

Think it's Worldwide, be wary of new types of scams 🙂

Please, stop using direct all the time. There can be dozens of directs in a chapter. Could you please use another word?

It's a bit of a stream of consciousness. I could describe it in more detail.

These last few chapters are like shit.

It's very uncomfortable to watch. I can't see the main plot, and there is no detailed character description. Maybe this is a common problem in the world. I hope there can be some original things. The main plot of each world is more specific and the characters are more fleshed out.

Ah ha, the writing is so sultry.

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1 I hope to write more about our country's horror movies, Gu, Rebirth in Seven Days, Old Corpse in a Mountain Village, etc. The more popular ones are fine. I don't like foreign ones, but I quite like The Conjuring World. Maybe it's because the movie is more popular 2 Which world you enter, write the chapter name The name of the world, so that some people can just read it if they like it, and those who don't like it can skip it. They don't have to keep scrolling down to miss the plot. How wonderful 3 is quite funny. Anyway, I laughed many times. Let's find the direction. Is it that the power of the East and the West wants all at present?

After saving for 2 months, I opened the catalog and saw that it was still American comics. I was at a loss. Are there only American comics in the West? Either DC or Marvel. You are not required to write Eastern plots.

There has been no update in the past day. Do you need a eunuch?

Since we started with Ring World, can you tell us more about Ring World? I only learned about this game from here.

The author's way of writing the protagonist in a sand sculpture style is a bit like "The End of the World". Come on, give me your monthly tickets.

Not bad, I feel like I'm having a great time, I'll continue to follow up 🤓

Shennong I haven't read Ring World, but it can be read as a very good unlimited novel.

To put it simply, it's interesting. Those who don't like the theme of the heavens may find it confusing. The Zhutian theme is about world adventure island stories, similar to "Rick and Morty" but not an original world.

The plot setting is okay, the protagonist is okay, but it's too weak. I can write a clear paragraph in 50 words, but the author can write 150 words, and I can wait for him to be 100 words at most.

I really like the ghost game, the mysterious East Asian supernatural culture

I have to ask a classic question: Is it compatible with CE?

I can't tell which worlds there are in the introduction. Can anyone introduce them?

Is the main world of the game other worlds of film and television? That's boring😭