Number One in Scoring

These people in the NBA know all the virtues. Just write about a playboy, don't write about an innocent, billionaire playing an ordinary person, that's really poisonous.

The experience is too fragmented. You are not practicing for a game or something, but for a season. There are dozens of chapters that have nothing to do with the main plot, and it does not promote development. Just for a talent, you have to write tens of thousands of words purely about playing. It is too uncomfortable.

I always feel that there is something wrong with the author's writing, that is, he can't let people see what is so great about the protagonist? What impressed me most was when the protagonist scored more than 60 points. More than 60 points is awesome, but the focus of the author's description is that he was almost exhausted after shooting 60 points, rather than that no one could stop me from scoring points. This is actually very strange. Writing this way actually doesn't feel satisfying at all. The arrogance, arrogance, and kingly demeanor of a top athlete, It didn't show it at all, but instead gave people the impression that they were squeaking, grinding, and barely managing to get 60 points. Although in fact, getting 60 points is very awesome, the description is very average and cannot be expressed at all I don't know if other people feel this way, and it's not one point, not this point. From that time when the article was written until now, he still gives people this feeling, that is, there is no explosive power and no climax. The writing is indeed very smooth, but the emotion he gives is too peaceful.

A team with 70 wins beat Pierce 3-1 in the first round and ended up going to the tiebreaker. Do you think you are being humorous? Do you think you are so beautiful when you are young?

You're not a senior in high school yet, and you entered the NBA before you were seventeen. It's really poisonous and disgusting. The first hundred pictures are about campus basketball, so I skipped it straight from college. I'm sixteen, even if you start writing in college, it's okay. It's really a piece of shit for me.

Does the author like aj so much? It seems that all the novels choose aj. I have always felt that aj is not a good choice, or not a good choice for a dominant player, because he was overshadowed by Jordan from the beginning and it is difficult to stand out.

Xiaofeng feels that there has been no progress in the past few years. . . The problems that first appeared in the Basketball Devil still exist today. The first is nicknames. People are always given some very strange nicknames. Among the gangsters, they call Maddie a traitor to his mother. In this movie, the little fat boss is bald, which is a bit uncomfortable. The second is the slow tempo, which suppresses the protagonist but does not dare to press too much. For example, when I scored 82 points in the rookie game, I was speechless. The rookies on both sides did not play and watched you throw? You're not on the same team, your relationship isn't good, and you're still a yellow guy. . As a result, it is not very enjoyable to watch but is also unreasonable and lengthy and boring, which leads to the third point: water data. I want to write about every game in a season, and about half of it is a routine; so-and-so, in a certain quarter, how many field goals were made, how many three-pointers were made, how many free throws were made, how many points, rebounds, assists, steals, and blocks in total. . . For the main force of the opponent, I have to write several main and supporting characters. After the first quarter, I will write a paragraph of a few hundred words, after the second quarter, I will write another paragraph of several hundred words, and then after the whole game, I will write a paragraph. . . This is too formulaic. The last point is innocence, as if the NBA is a fairy tale world, and they are all good people. Not to mention the fact that someone like Jordan, who came to China without showing his face, can still choose a yellow high school student, it is magical enough. This is also a problem in previous novels. There is a lack of some contradictions. They want to suppress the protagonist and suppress it, both positive and negative. If nothing else, the protagonist with such early strength really won the championship with a few first- and second-grade little Karami, and it was not satisfying at all to watch. . . Even if you can win like this, when you grow up, will you have to fight against twelve? It's better to speed up the pace of the previous colorful pen period, lose when it's time to lose, and fail when it's time to beat, so that the season after the upgrade can be fun. Hey, come on, Xiaofeng.

Do you feel like you wrote this book to imitate that short-tempered and pretty guy who specializes in blackmailing James? Don't imitate him.

Force-feeding poison, why should the Bulls beat the Lakers? With the Lakers' lineup at the beginning of the season, how many championship teams can win? Kidd, Kobe and Garnett, I can't even imagine how this lineup could lose. The three of them are in perfect harmony with each other, and they are fully equipped for passing, controlling and attacking.

Author, are you serious? Can James' defense compare with Howard in the 10-11 season? You can say that Howard is not worthy of being the number one center on active duty, but his defense is really not bad. In terms of defense alone, only Garnett can match James in the interior? Save it, that's not what you're bragging about, right? Is James worthy of matching Howard on the defensive end? The result of defending against Terry in the 10-11 Finals was that he averaged 19 points per game with a shooting percentage of 50%. Is this what you claim to be comparable to Howard?