From Practice Player to Superstar

No little girls, no trial cards, no big eaters.

At this pace, I still hope the protagonist of this book will graduate before entering the NBA, like Tim Duncan. I'm tired of seeing characters become invincible after just one semester; I'd prefer a more gradual approach, at least until his sophomore or junior year before participating in the draft. Also, is the protagonist's role model going to be a point forward? Someone with defense, playmaking, and shooting.

Every single one is written by the same old auntie, always fawning over Jordan, always using the same formulaic writing style. It's not easy for someone to write a book by hand and turn it into an industrial assembly line.

The basketball writing in "Microphone" is as good as ever, but I hope the protagonist doesn't take control of the team. The general manager is all sucking up to him and everything he says is dictated by the protagonist; the owner wants the Chinese market so he treats the protagonist like a father. Everyone has a desire for control, especially big bosses.

I can't stand the stories about Jordan's comeback and joining the main cast. Every book seems to be praising Jordan. Look at what Ai-chan writes; there's no comparison!

Following the current writing style, is the protagonist destined to be tied to the Clippers? Also, I really don't understand why the protagonist has to bring those few dispensable supporting characters everywhere he goes. They don't even write about the parents, instead writing a bunch of useless supporting characters, especially that aunt... I'm speechless.

A middle-class community, apartment buildings? And then there are units that are only 30 square meters? Your middle-class community is really bizarre, and then there's a community of detached villas nearby? What kind of community is this? And the protagonist attends a prestigious university, where fights are frequent throughout the year.

It's too drawn out. Cutting half the plot wouldn't affect the reading experience at all. I'm leaving.

Jordan is fine, but please don't make it so that he wins the MVP and Finals MVP awards. First, the protagonist will never surpass that in his lifetime. Second, I didn't pay to read the book to see the protagonist as a supporting character.

I don't even know why they went to the Clippers 🚢, I'm not watching anymore.