I'm Not a Potion Ingredient

Thinking of the weird teammates in Lao Dao's book, it seems normal to add a dragon who can't afford the gift 🙂

Overall, the plot and rhythm are good. The writing skills are not deep, but they are above the standard line. The readability is good. If I ignore the only shortcoming, as a novel reader with more than 30 years of history, I can continue reading it. But the problem lies in the only flaw: the male protagonist made me feel awkward for a while, so awkward that I finally breathed a sigh of relief after reading the latest chapter. I can accept all kinds of protagonists with different personalities, good guys, bad guys, honest guys, hypocrites, virgins, scoundrels, gangsters, liars, and psychopaths, but I have never seen anyone create a real mentally retarded person as the protagonist, because no matter how absurd the story is In fact, the characters and characters have their own internal logic, but the protagonist of this book has no logic at all from beginning to end, whether it is his behavior or thinking, and does not reflect a little bit of the wisdom and knowledge of time-travelers, he is completely like a fool. Some people will definitely argue that he has just traveled through time and is confused, but he has been confused for ten days, is he okay? From the first second of the first day, he encountered a life and death crisis, killing people and being imprisoned in a dungeon. He also killed dozens or hundreds of people with an obviously evil strong man before escaping from the prison. If you insist on saying that he has been confused, then I have nothing to say. The protagonist in every plot is dispensable. The only reason for his existence is to serve as a tool for the djinn to descend when other characters in the plot encounter situations that cannot be solved. Even having him makes many plots more complicated and difficult. For example, when I first met Night Owl, he would have run away without him. For example, when the Dark Bishop escaped from prison, he had dug his own tunnels. Although there were temple ruins blocking the way, if the protagonist did not come, the escaped prisoners on the first floor of the dungeon would also have dug there, and they could also become the Bishop's tool to solve the problem. I can understand that the author wants to create a dream of lying flat but is constantly being pushed away by various people and things, forming a protagonist with a strong sense of contrast. However, lying flat does not mean becoming a fool. Lying flat means not wanting to use your brain, but when something happens, you can't lie down. You can't get up but your brain is still lying down. What's more, the situations the protagonist encounters are fatal. What's the point of a protagonist who can continue to muddle along without using his brain under the threat of death? Judging from the world background of DND and the creation of other characters, the author probably did not intend to write a novice novel, and even the protagonist of the novice novel is not really mentally retarded, but just too naive. The reason why I was able to finish it is because the story and other characters are good, and the word count is not many, so I can endure it. However, if it is put on the shelves and you want me to subscribe, I will never be able to stand the current protagonist.

From The Secret of Radiation - Rising from the Wasteland - Slaying Dragons - Knights of Light - Boring, I want to read A River of Blood. The author has slowly started to become a good person. Now this book doesn't even have a yellow bag. The protagonist is not happy with the life of grudges and hatred. Uh-huh, uh-huh, this style is very good, but it's a pity that it doesn't suit me. I have been following Tongchi Taoist's books for almost 5 years. Goodbye, I won't follow him anymore.

After Wasteland, you haven't finished a book normally. For those of us who support you with real money, it's not too much to finish a book properly, right?

A few books are the same as before. I can only read them in the early and middle stages. If it doesn't work, just go back to picking up trash.

It didn't feel as exciting as the previous books, it was too bland. The most interesting thing before was opening an instant noodle factory in modern society.

I always feel that the writing is very casual. The protagonist's strength and IQ are uncertain, but he can still win. The main theme is that I am the author and how I write is reasonable 😅😅.

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You were an angry young man 10 years ago, and now you are a labor insurance worker. Just like your writing, it is becoming more and more interesting😅

I have a question, a djinn or a demigod can travel through time and create Gatling fireworks, but the angel next to the protagonist is actually afraid of gunpowder guns?