Female Queen: I Can Only Do Whatever I Want in This World

Shen Nong is here, identified as 🐢, no need to read it

In the clouds and fog, I don't know what to say. It's the work of a pure novice.

Too little foreshadowing leads to a lack of desire to watch. I hope this can be changed (don't spray it if you don't wash it).

🌝I thought I had held a big one in,,, but I didn't expect it was a big one.

Read more than fifty chapters. The biggest feeling is who I am, where I am, and what I want to do. Firstly, Yunliwuli, and secondly, all the Riddlers. The idea of ​​this book is good, and the thinking is good, but I always feel that the author is a novice, and he just wants to hold back a big story, so he sets up suspense everywhere. For example, the explanation of the situation of the Wenren sisters can be placed in the first few chapters of the chapter to give readers a general impression and not be so vague. After reading 100,000 words, the author belatedly came to explain the situation of the two people. . . My mood at this time: [subway, old man, mobile phone] 😵 In general, come on, author!

Find a job in a factory, it's 8,000 a month

It can be seen that the author is a novice in online writing. He has a bad grasp of the cool points and the plot is too scattered. Keep up the good work.

They are all low-class girls. All I can say is that I feel so cold about Yang Shu.

What the hell did you write? . . At first I thought the male protagonist's scheme was quite powerful. He also strengthened the empress. But your rank was leaked just after you strengthened it? Don't you know how much you weigh? ? Have you lived in vain for more than forty years? ? Of course, the main thing is to say that you, the author, are illogical. Don't even understand the most basic logic. How to write a wonderful story about strategy?

It's too chaotic and too rushed. I can't stand it anymore. Everything and all the characters are swarming around me. I don't even know what I'm looking at.

When I read the synopsis, I thought that after more than ten chapters, the plot turned out to be getting longer and longer.

The logic of the whole article is online, and everyone has not lost their intelligence. It is not a riddle to say it is. The disadvantage is that the paving is too large, covering both time and space, but there is too little paving, resulting in unclear visibility. And Sese will be separated from this big plot.

I didn't understand the third golden chapter at all. Is it foreshadowing for the third golden chapter?

Ding Han, it's really hard to finish the mission points quickly, and then a so-called chessboard third party pops up inexplicably to stop this plot. It's uncomfortable to watch.

History I didn't see the introduction in the text The world of female supremacy is for Se Se. I only saw the plot you wrote, but I couldn't see Se Se. Can't see Sese. Can't see Sese