Work Overtime and Pick up the Defeated Magical Girl

Let me first predict that the girl my son met who made lunch for him every day was the reincarnation of his mother 🤓

I have finished reading this book. The first three chapters are really well written. They naturally introduce the world view and the male protagonist's situation, and at the same time advance the plot. The male protagonist is really handsome when he kills the cat-headed man in seconds... But for the rest, let's not talk about the plot, just the logic. It feels a bit baffling. This is not to say that this book has no logic, on the contrary. There are many places that seem quite real, but the logic is too fast, and there are many things that are not written. For example, in the secret base, the male protagonist goes to make a phone call to his son. It should be mentioned here that Lan Yuan's heart skipped a beat or something, but the author didn't write anything and jumped directly to the back. Lan Yuan breathed a sigh of relief. Sometimes this little thing can make people feel very different. I hope the author can pay attention to it, give more details, and slow down some plots Then there is the plot, which is a bit baffling to be honest, and the most surprising thing - Mochizuki Rin is the reincarnation of the male protagonist's wife, this kind of ultimate invincibility is huge and heavy You should give a little more foreshadowing, a little more foreshadowing, and hide it for a longer time. Don't worry about whether someone can guess it. Even the male protagonist is a blood beast, his wife was killed by the male protagonist, and a series of other things can be hidden for a longer time. Don't treat this information as trivial things that can be said casually. Now the author gives me the impression that he is a somewhat talented amateur, relying on an inspiration to write until now, but if many things are not planned, I can say that this book will not last long, and even if it can be written for a long time, it will collapse - many foreshadowings are not written down without an outline.

As long as you give the order, we will immediately support you as the orthodox demon of off duty.

The damn Arc Salt has forced so many book lovers to write their own books and create spiritual sequels, damn it

As long as you give the order, we will immediately support you as the new Arc Salt

Come on, the word count will soon exceed prison salt!

There is a strong sense of déjà vu, which feels similar to the book "Get Off Work and Become a Magical Girl" next door.

These two pictures are very strange. The class teacher knows that all the students in the class are either rich or noble. She wants to disgust the students instead of building a good relationship. What is the benefit of disgusting the students? There is no benefit at all. At the same time, she may be retaliated by the parents because she has lost face. I feel that this is probably the plot that the author came up with after seeing the video of the parent-teacher conference. The writing is really not good

Not only is she the strongest, she is also the biggest magical girl.

Magical girls look like this?

I haven't read it yet. Is the defeated magical girl I picked up the protagonist's son?

Qin Chuan is an active JK, and his favorite skin is a red scarf dog (no)

There have been so many magical girls recently, and the prison salt has been forced to live xswl

Is this a prison salt sacrifice?

As long as you give the order, we will support you as the new arc

I have seen many people use the background of the main story to draw the book. This is the first time I saw the person who sewed the background of the book to write the main story.

Mad is full of knives. The more I look at it, the harder it is to laugh.

Wooden protagonists are no longer popular

There is reason to suspect that this person and Lao Yan are the same person

This confession was supposed to be a breaking point, but it ended up passing by without any emotion.

Yeah, I finally found a meal replacement book, I finally don't have to be afraid of eunuchs, and I don't have to worry about the pressure of updating every Monday, yeah yeah yeah

As expected of a prisoner🧂, all my colleagues have been dealt with