My Wife Is Beyond Redemption

The Lament of Miscellaneous Fish, finally updated, it's really Miscellaneous Fish~♡Miscellaneous Fish~♡

No, this protagonist is average-looking and short. Do you really feel like you can relate to him? And I don't quite understand why he is so popular.

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When I saw the introduction, I suddenly thought of a book called The Fairy Wife Is a Vicious Female Supporter 🙂

I saw the first chapter of Renqing as soon as it was released. From then on, I remembered the new author and began to silently follow Y-da's various series, from Renqing, to The End of the Earth, After Flowers, and Fairy Wife. Talking about the novel, the previous weak main line promotion mode of daily + meat is quite suitable to be placed in the club. After all, the goal is clear and it is for meat, which is an absolute advantage. But speaking of it, the starting point is not appropriate. The large-scale daily lack of meat and polish leads to redundant and slow plot advancement, and the viewing experience plummets. It is not that it is not good, but it is very tiring. After all, you have to read it with a large head, and it feels like you have not watched it. This post is a suggestion, keep the style, and don't lose your strengths. No one can match this small track, but it is recommended to polish the plot keel. Each chapter should still appropriately add a smooth progression of the plot, maintain the rhythm, increase the information entropy, and strive for subsequent plots to make readers unable to stop, and it is best to be hooked. I saw Y University at seven o'clock on the first day, best wishes.

Exactly the same name

Female video author😥 I feel it's pretentious😥

They are all full and feel suitable for a book of elegies

The author would like to finish the story of Fairy Wife 😭😭😭, other readers can do anything 😭😭😭

The biggest problem is that I used the Fairy Wife method to write a new book at the starting point. For those who have read the original book, it will be tasteless. For others, it will be full of non-C and rejection of women. Just like the protagonist himself said that he wants both xxx and xxx, the protagonist can say this, and the readers can also say it, but if the author says it through the protagonist's mouth, the whole book will change. Of course, concave characters are okay, but what more people want to see is the contrast, always blindly saying that they are forced to reject women. Some people may think that the protagonist has his own personality, but I only see a full of literary youth. Failure to control conflicts and insisting on creating conflicts will only create a different image.