Xiu Xian: I Have an Equipment Slot

So far, there is nothing poisonous about it, come on!

Um, your prices give me a headache One contribution point per meal (one spiritual stone) 70% of the income from two hundred acres of land is 230 spiritual stones The total of one acre of land is less than two spiritual stones. To put it bluntly, it is not enough for a day's meal Why is this sect cultivating such poor land? This is not enough trouble

I also came out to read a new book. Why is it that the book is full of pretentious style from more than ten years ago? The ancient author has returned? All the pretense is too stiff and embarrassing

Everything else is okay, but buying futons is very toxic. The author doesn't think he wrote the plot very well, right?

Ambrosia before it hits the shelves, shit after it hits the shelves.

If such a plug-in didn't become a weapon refiner earlier, what kind of spiritual planter would he be! The entire spiritual weapon was exchanged for a new one, business is booming!

How to say it? The plug-in setting of the book - the equipment column is quite interesting. Equipment items can be borrowed. It can be regarded as an alternative entry system. This makes me want to read it. But the author's sensitivity to numbers makes me uncomfortable. I even wonder if the author has graduated from elementary school? Case 1: A magic weapon is fifty spiritual stones, and the protagonist receives 45 contribution points (spiritual stones: contribution points = 1:1, the seller sees that the contribution points are reduced by 5 points). The protagonist only gets 30 spiritual stones after three months of farming (cutting grass every day), but one meal requires one spiritual stone. With three months of busy work, it can only last ten days. Is this meal made of a panacea? You didn't even write about how effective this meal is! Case 2: Half percent is 30 spiritual stones, ten percent is 600 spiritual stones, this is the output of one hundred acres. The protagonist owns 200 acres of spiritual land, and the yield is 10% more. Logically speaking, the harvest is 1320 spiritual stones. The protagonist and the sect divide it 37%, and he gets 70%, 1320✖️0.7=924. So why did the protagonist only get about 230 spiritual stones, and who pocketed nearly 700 spiritual stones? Case 3: The main ingredient of the Beauty Pill is not much inferior to the main ingredient of the Foundation Establishment Pill, which is worth thousands of spiritual stones. One treatment provided resources worth more than 300 spirit stones, and he had to be treated three times. The author didn't mention how much resources the deacon paid for the last two times, so let's calculate it as if he didn't give it for the last two times. It's really grand to save something worth thousands of spiritual stones for one-third of its value! In the words of a book friend, "The main material of the beauty pill ≠ the beauty pill. You will have to look for other possible main materials, other auxiliary materials, the alchemist's labor costs, etc. Later." Are you squandering your money like this? Case 4: The protagonist starts a stone gambling business and finds a magic weapon to give 100 contribution points. Let's not talk about whether it is worth it to the sect (after all, people print contribution points). You got hundreds of contribution points by unraveling the stone on the first day, and you also have the experience of looking at the stone. Is it necessary to look "impatient" when you see a task of 600 contribution points? It's still a continuous mission, and I only got 600 contribution points in half a year! How much will the solution stone produce in half a year? Let's not say that we can solve the magic weapon every day. Simply speaking, if we solve a magic weapon in five days, it will be 100 contribution points. In that half a year, there will be "180/5=36, 36✖️100=3600"! Fellow author, use your mathematical knowledge to tell me which one is higher? How many times higher? Which one should I be more "impatient" about? Case 5: I heard from book friends about the problem of foundation building later. A spell is completed, and the mana is increased by 10% after the foundation is established. The protagonist's thirty-six spells were completed, and the final mana was 3.6 Times more powerful than ordinary foundation building in the same year? Is this right? According to this, if the protagonist builds a base normally, he will not have any mana at all! What kind of immortals do people in this world cultivate? This still ignores small poisonous points such as "abstractly asking for the futon the female cultivator is sitting on three times, equipment entries are confusing, and the cooling time is confusing". The previous system has collapsed like this, and I don't know how many monsters and ghosts there are behind 🤔

The previous writing is quite good, and the supporting characters also have some vision and wisdom. After it was put on the shelves, I went to Gambling Stone and wrote it with gusto. I used all kinds of tricks to lower the mentally retarded, and plug-ins were not enabled. I just talked about being an omnipotent person, in the style of urban cool writing. When I came back to build the foundation, I used all kinds of forced hydrology. The author's writing status is obviously getting worse and worse. He writes whatever comes to mind, breaks away from the outline, and starts to open plug-ins randomly. He is inconsistent. Author, author 😅

In terms of the golden finger of the protagonist, [normal development] is enough. It is not recommended to appear in the plot of going to the secret realm and slaying monsters for resources.

Overall, this book is okay. Let me talk about the shortcomings first. The author often eats books. The protagonist has learned it before and has to learn it again later. Mathematics is not very good. One magical power has 10% more mana, and 36 kinds is 360%. This is extra, so the protagonist has four times more mana, not three times more. The remaining shortcomings probably vary from person to person, that is, you introduced the character but didn't use the futon, and now it seems to be almost useless. Then I will talk about the advantages that I personally think are more prominent. The first is that it is a pure and refreshing article that never suffers from deficiencies. This is a good point. I decided to write a refreshing article that should be pure. I hope the author can continue to maintain it. The second point is that the atmosphere of the sect is really good. This is rare in novels about cultivating immortals. But I feel very comfortable when I read it. Just go with outsiders for intrigues and intrigues.

The overall rhythm is good, but the data is really messy and there are many inconsistencies. That Wanhua Palace said at the beginning that it would only accept women, but it turned out that all men were in charge?

Learn more from Han Paopao, and your development will be king.

Shennong was poisoned to death. I only read a dozen chapters. The monetary system collapsed completely. It was uncomfortable to read 😐😐😐

If you don't know how to describe the plot of a female character, then don't write it 😥😥 The first-level cutie Hu Qiu writes randomly. It's not enough to make me laugh to death once. Does it mean that every time I buy a futon, it has to be under this girl's buttocks? The author also replied cleverly Wow, you are really good at writing skillfully. It's not you who has the final say on how the pen is in your hand😥😥😥😥Explanation for being unable to complain😅😅

The author just wrote it off the top of his head, without any framework at all. In Chapter 16, he forgot about the second pest control spell given by the newcomer. I am too lazy to write about equipment combinations, such as the second period of Qi training, which three equipment combinations to use during the sowing period, the combinations to use during training, etc. Now it feels like you can use it all day long when you get it.

Abandoned. Chapter 89 said that Qi training was complete, and Chapter 106 started eating books. Either the account has been replaced, or there is no outline.

The front is fine, but the thirty-six magical powers at the back are broken and cannot be controlled. To be honest, things have been falling apart since the ancient city Xiangshi. Before it was just a small crash.

The same name is Zhang Yan. Compared with the character of Zhang Yan, the protagonist of Dao Zheng, the character of this protagonist is as different as heaven and earth. It is like the difference between a scheming old man and a high school student.

I don't want to subscribe to the titles of the recent chapters, Gambling on Stones, Holy Maiden, what about Red Flower House?

Indeed, it was rubbish after it was put on the shelves, and my subscription was in vain.

Nowadays, when writing cultivation novels, they all start with the most rubbish and low-grade spiritual roots? Really made me vomit

The first hundred chapters are okay, the next one or two hundred chapters are readable, and the last hundred or so chapters are not as good as primary school students writing essays.

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]