Holding Amulet

It's pretty good. Why don't you update it?

It's not good to write something ambiguous while having evil intentions but no courage.

It seems that the author can't stand other people's opinions 😁😁😁 Some people say that the progress of cultivation is slow, but you have only increased two levels in four chapters. It still depends on how you arrange your writing. It's not that you shouldn't listen to other people's opinions, but that you have to make reasonable arrangements based on your own actual situation and your own outline and storyline. Don't do it when others say something else, and when others say something east, you act something else. In the end, your writing will collapse. This is all based on lessons learned from the past.

Is Lao Deng reincarnated or is he an alien demon?

Let the author take a look You clearly know that your writing is a bit broken, and you clearly said that you want to pull it back, but why do you keep running further and further away? Does this mean that my writing is not good enough? Hurry up and bring it back to the talisman itself. Besides, the storyline is poorly arranged. I won't talk about the previous ones, let's start from the time you went on, from going into the mountains to hunt lions and beasts until now. What does the storyline have to do with pig's feet? In other words, if you pick off the pig's feet in these storylines, it still won't affect the plot direction. Then what's the use of writing about pig's feet? This time should be a complete adventure. Even if it follows the basic routine, it should be a story with ups and downs, but in the end, it turns out to be a VCR, which passes by in a flash and is boring. Many authors have high self-esteem and disdain to use routines. But the problem is that if you are proficient in routines, how can you break out of them? According to the succession and transition of the basic routine, the plot of this story should be starting. The first step is to introduce the background. This author has it. The second step is to send an invitation, and the author is also available. The third step is to refuse the invitation. Pig's Feet has to refuse, and then there is a reason to go. That is, from this step on, the author completely gives up the routine. Inherited The first step is preparation. Pig's Feet is going to take an adventure. It needs to buy equipment or practice secret techniques. As a result, Pig's Feet is not prepared at all. The second step, companions, I have introduced a few here, so there are some. The third step, digging holes, that is, setting up suspense, there is no such thing here. I originally thought that the next plot was that the poster deliberately led people to kill the lion, and he had a good time. So at this step, Pigfoot should have discovered the problem, which is why the person did not find someone to become a lion, but sold information. Transfer The first step is to arrive. Arrive at the battlefield. It is here. Wait for the lion and collect information about the lion. The second step, setback, is the setback caused by the failure of Pig's Foot's team, or it can also be the setback caused by Pig's Foot causing the enemy's salted fish. There seems to be some here. The third step, to destroy the enemy, must be to show off the power of the pig's feet, which is not available here. Join The first step, resurrection, the pig's foot team completes the task and needs to be rewarded. Killing the lion is a step, right? The second step is to return, also called filling in the hole. The previous hole must be filled back in this step, that is, the pig's foot team is being followed by someone else's oriole. I don't know if this step counts? Because there is no suspense? The third step is to get the treasure, that is, no matter whether the pig's trotters team is wiped out or not, the pig's trotters will definitely be rewarded with treasures. I don't know if this step counts? When we look at the plot from the beginning, we find that there is no rejection of invitations, no advance preparation, no suspense of the story, no pig's feet showing off their power, and no cherished treasures. Excuse me, in this story, Pig's Feet would be just like that without him. Wouldn't he just become a soy sauce character? The reason why routines are called routines is the summary of previous experience. It is better to follow the basic routines first. Of course, if you can better conceive the arrangement, you can not follow the routines. But in this article, it is very undesirable to completely let the pig's feet play the role of soy sauce.

What should I say? The author wrote the series from God's perspective, which somewhat affects the reading experience You haven't mentioned any achievements in your formation before? When the people on the mountain were communicating, they mentioned that it could block the golden elixir Then the people attacking the mountain at the bottom all knew that this formation could block the golden elixir Can you tell me how far it goes?

Why is this introduction no different from that talisman that is always banned?

It started with the Mortal stream, why did it switch to the Incense Shinto stream later? Those who can insist on seeing the back must be those who like mortal flow.

All I can say is to do it for yourself, what the hell?

Tell me, who are you?

Fantasy novels about immortals, please don't change it to the incense and Shinto style. The author has two systems and two different backgrounds. The immortal cultivating mortals are mixed with gods, which is a bit nondescript. I suggest Ye Yang change to a powerful sect background, a rich second generation or an abandoned disciple. The Water Goddess is changed to a powerful ghost cultivator who dominates the world. The conflict between the two is changed to a fight for a genius treasure or other conflicts. It all depends on the author. Finally, this is just my opinion and has no other meaning.

The author writes a book promotion post or book list to promote it.

I am a crow's mouth, and another book collapsed 😅😅😅 Two suggestions for the author The first is the easy one, now that you have realized that it has collapsed, you can still pull it back, work hard to pull it back, and slowly win back readers. The second book will naturally be more acceptable. The second most difficult thing is to start the second book directly. Either you are really a master and soar to the sky, or you sink. In short, let the author weigh the pros and cons himself!

Can you believe it? If you say cut it off, I will delete the book. I was looking for a book on the bookshelf, and I saw it again. It was still being updated, so I followed it again.

I give all my recommendation votes to you today. Come on, author😄

Not bad. Keep it for now. Call me when it's on the shelves.

You can take a look, and the unexpected discovery is pretty good.

Chapter 38, have you reached a higher level now?🙂