Mortals, Start by Purifying the Elixir

The writing is pretty good, but it gives the reader a mouthful of shit from time to time.

The author made a big mistake. He changed the unit of 2 tons in the introduction and directly replaced it with several levels of monsters. Don't use specific units to compare things in Xiuxian.

After reading the Fairyland chapter (the protagonist didn't dare to grab the "little green bottle"), I couldn't write a fanfic about it as a mortal! If you are good at it and it is better than Han Li, then Han Li is dispensable! If you haven't failed, or if you failed to improve your strength (the protagonist doesn't dare to grab the "little green bottle"), Old Demon Han will not share his resources with you because of his caution!

There are so many women in the role list, but Nangong Wan doesn't dare to accept them? Are you so fatalistic that you dare not grab Han Lao Mo's bottle? The Immortal Realm chapter is just a piece of shit in my eyes and it will end in the spiritual world.

Are they all like this, the master of foundation building, the master of Jie Dan, the old monster of Nascent Soul, the old immortal of transformation?

Let's put it this way, if you kill Nangong or Han Li, you will collapse. You will regret reading the original work instead of killing the protagonist of the original work. Wouldn't it be more enjoyable to read those cool novels that kill people without blinking an eye? Moreover, it is obviously illogical to dare to kill people without blinking an eye when traveling through the past. Unless you are a murderous pervert in the real society, or are anti-social and anti-human. For a successful work, the first step is the protagonist. The shaping of the character does not require perfection but it must have its own personality charm. Secondly, it must be logical and interesting. Then, in terms of writing, the description of the battle should attract the readers and be more detailed. Don't rush through it. Furthermore, this is a fanfic to make up for the original regrets, so put some effort into the emotional description. If you can do this, there will be no traffic, so why worry about not being popular...

This book has a lot of problems, and it always gives readers trouble, but fortunately, the upgrades are not sloppy, and the killings are clean and neat, which makes people keep chasing.

Why does it take so much time to introduce the background of the story? Do you think anyone has never seen Mortal? ? Write more stories and less nonsense.

If you are a child of Lianxu, you can quickly take the treasure flowers into your harem and avoid thousands of years of detours.

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An old monster from the Mahayana cultivator glanced at Su Li unintentionally. There was no secret in Su Li's body. A few days later, Su Li's soul card was broken in the hands of Su Li's Taoist companion in the human world. End

People in the spiritual world are really young. In their twenties and thirties, they are in a realm above Nascent Soul.

The love of the evil god, the tyranny of Immortal Ni, and the cultivation of immortality by mortals, yes, five-star praise

The hook is bigger than the old devil. It's all kinds of hard-licking model workers. They give elixirs and materials. Some even give them for free.

This book is just a stallion harem novel, it doesn't look like a mortal at all 😅

Before reading, I would like to ask the author: Do you write about the fairyland in this book? I want to see a more exciting fairyland chapter, so forget it if I don't write it...

Finally, did the male protagonist give Ling Yuling her title?

The author's writing is too out of tune, and there are too many poisonous points. The author doesn't seem to understand the settings of mortals, and he just makes fun of himself😰

Borrowing precious treasures to push the book, "I will clean up the Tibetan Scripture Pavilion at the beginning, and I will complete the incomplete skills." Mortal flow, Gou Dao flow, IQ will not decrease if IQ is online, the protagonist's magical power refers to ancient magic: a wonderful pen creates a dragon, scattering beans to form an army, dividing the ground to form a river, etc. Interested Taoist friends can take a look. If you are bothering me, please contact me. [Asking mortals to recommend each other's authors]

Do all the novels you open have multiple female protagonists?

Has it been changed before? Chapter 7 and Chapter 10 are different. Chapter 10 in particular feels inconsistent with the title. There is another version on the website. I also wrote a diary. I haven't seen the original version.

The seventh picture has been changed. I read it before and then I downloaded it. Once I listened to the book, I listened to it again. Wow, the story is different. Why did you change it? I am really speechless.

I frowned and wanted to give up several times in the middle of the chase. There are still quite a lot of minor flaws. It can be regarded as a refreshing version of Mortal Cultivation of Immortality Promax.

What kind of fan fiction will you write for your next novel? ? ? 1 The Trilogy of Fighting Po (Fighting to Break the Sky and the Great Master of the Universe) 2 Master Gu 3 Immortal Ni

The author's writing is very good, definitely worth reading and subscribing! I would like to recommend a book that is decisive in killing, nonsensical and full of joy. "The old man picked up rags in time and lived by making bad movies" is hilarious...

Chen Qiaoqian is a bit downgraded when she becomes a doctor with a love brain.

I feel that the avenue of space is not as good as the avenue of time. Will I be overpowered by the Korean model worker's avenue of time later?