Jinyang Fairy Road

It's difficult to write something original, and many people can't stand it. Can you, the author, do it?

Why can't waste pills be absorbed to refine spiritual liquid.

During the Qi training period, the age requirement for elixirs is low. When the golden elixir is required to be 500 years old, how can there be so many elixirs? The golden finger is useless, and the higher the cultivation level, the fewer elixirs.

You already have three spiritual roots, why not develop five elements?

The main character's name is too difficult to pronounce, and the description method of writing the book needs to be improved. The writing is rigid and cannot highlight the key points, and cannot attract readers.

The protagonist's name is indeed too difficult to pronounce. It feels a bit awkward when I read it. I might as well just call him Yu Yue.

You have to be moderate when making jokes. It's been 2 and a half years every time, and there are a lot of typos. I'll catch a few of them for you. Let me remind you, it's hard to catch a bunch of typos. Do you want to correct them?

To be honest, the overall story is very bland, and the prominent parts of the plot are not written out. The whole story is like boiled water, and it is too bland to read. The essence of Gou Dao is to show off 7-8 points after development to show off, and give people a sense of satisfaction.

Name changed? I searched for a long time and couldn't find it. I thought it was deleted.

It is suggested that the title of the book be changed to "The Story of Immortal Gourd and Immortality"

What does it mean? ? Did you cut it? ? ? ? ?