A Wizard's Guide to Farming

I wrote too much again; it's quite a long short essay 😥 1. The female character was written in a very absurd way. The character is vividly portrayed, showcasing their growth. However, the problem lies in the Western fantasy setting. While it's understandable that the girl aspires to climb the social ladder, what ordinary village girl in a Western aristocratic context would dare to offer herself…

Write less about that woman and more about the daily life of farming and development. Be a little colder to strangers; don't be nice to everyone you meet. Don't be overly friendly with a useless stranger. Write more about expanding and developing your territory. Focus on the wizarding aspect, with farming as a secondary element. These two themes will make the story more interesting.

If you don't mind a protagonist who's overly idealistic, a simp, and indecisive, then you'll definitely love this novel. Also, the tags mentioning "decisive and ruthless" are just a bait to get people to read it. It's a wizarding story with a cheat-like advantage, featuring the most unrefined and pathetic protagonist.

To be honest, I could tolerate Lily's character arc because, although her personality wasn't likable, there are indeed people like that in reality. After all, the author's other writing was quite good, and finding a good novel these days isn't easy... But after a few chapters, especially the house-building part, I started to lose my grip.

I have a question for the author: the protagonist is the second son of a duke, and his mother is the daughter of another duke. He goes out to fight in a pioneering war. His father doesn't arrange any manpower for him, and then he only gives him 20 gold coins. Is that reasonable?

This little fairy character appears in every chapter, but she's not part of the main plot, so why keep writing about her? She's just there to annoy the readers. This book will flop sooner or later because of this supporting character.

Having read up to chapter seventeen, I don't understand why the author would devote so much attention to a village belle maid. Moreover, her family is full of scheming and cunning, making them not likable at all. She doesn't understand any etiquette as a maid serving the Duke's second son, and she calls the protagonist "Hey" instead of "I love you." What I want to read is your medieval magical world, not a fairy's journey to another world.

The protagonist, the second son of a powerful local tycoon, with an overpowered cheat code, dotes on a "little fairy" from the countryside. I almost thought I was reading an ancient Chinese domineering CEO novel.

I have never used the word "disgusting" to describe a character created by an author. Those who have read it should know who I am talking about. It's disgusting; it makes me want to curse.

There's even a scene where a lord personally feeds honey water to a maid he's only known for a month. I even suspect this book is a cheesy romance novel written by a high school girl.