I Suppressed the Weirdness in the Shelter

The first few chapters made people want to read it, but then it didn't work. The story line was too confusing, and I didn't know anything about the main line. I first went to the middle level and then guessed the purpose of the former director. When I saw this, I thought I would go to a director's welcome meeting to solve the matter. I didn't expect to go to the God Son, and then I had to be judged for several chapters. The story unfolded too quickly and was not well laid out, and too much content was crammed into one incident, making it feel confusing and dragging. The characterization and appearance are also baffling. Dorothy could have been well-characterized at the beginning of the chapter, and then stabilized the successors of the four institutes before going on to find the Son of God. She only had a good impression of 25 and the character was not well-characterized, so she led others to find the Son of God.

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

Reading new books is an important indicator for assessment and recommendation. Please readers, please don't keep books. Thank you very much if you can read to the end. If you have any shortcomings, you can point them out and they will definitely be corrected 😢

Well, the beginning of this priest is similar to the protagonist of a book. They are both priests and priests. They strengthen others and make them unable to control themselves.

What criminal would be satisfied with a jail cell? I think most people don't want to stay in it, right? Are the prisoners still satisfied with their cells? What is this weird thing?

Love it. Order as much as you like.

I feel like the background setting is pretty good, but the first few chapters feel like I'm not reading a novel, but an outline, and it's a bit too fast.

The content span is too large. I felt like there wasn't anything very new in the plot behind it, it was just a show-off, and the villain was too cliched. As an engineering major, I can't quite describe that feeling.

The content introduced in the introduction feels a bit like the Witch Warden.

I'm reading the first few chapters, and I feel like it's a little too fast, and I haven't figured out the background yet ()

The pace is fast, but the content is not attractive and sticky. It takes too long to wait for you to set up the plot, and we will already get tired of it and turn to the next book.

This is already the author's third book. Come on, author.

The subject matter is very novel and interesting. I just read Chapter 34 and felt that the content was too compact. I hope to add more character portraits or introductions!

The book I found by accident is pretty good.

The plot is too messy. Can you fix it a little? I feel like time and space are out of whack. There are a lot of things competing against each other.

He is a very good boss. Followed

I've read more than 200 chapters, and the more I read, the more I can't stand it. There's nothing attractive about it. The climax seems too bland, and the ups and downs can be said to be non-existent.

Is it difficult to spend thirty-two days a month updating?