The Land of No Light

Looking at the author's previous books, from the initial epic of salvation, exploring how God became God, to the exploration of God alone, examining why God became God and why He is God, the religious atmosphere is so strong. The entire journey is filled with an epic sense of salvation and love; redemption and forgiveness are the main themes, and compassion and mercy are the best descriptions of…

It started strong but ended weakly, which is a pity. Based on the first few chapters, I genuinely believed the protagonist was the incarnation of the Heavenly Father and the Second Coming of God. However, his strength was inferior to those inspectors, so he surrendered and joined the official faction.

I've read all three of your books, and I feel that you're diluting your own style more and more as you write, moving closer to mainstream literature. Personally, I think you're pleasing neither side if you continue like this. It's better to stick to your own ideas and style; at least people who like your style will gradually gather around.

First of all, I've never been an author, but I want to say that writing 100 chapters a day is very difficult. Is that right? It's not that I'm being unreasonable; after all, I said at the beginning that I didn't... I've worked as an author.

If he's a savior, then he must have the ability to save the world, right? If you have one, then go and save the world. Use power to save the world? Then use your great power to defeat evil, eliminate disasters, and save the innocent; Using knowledge to save the world?

The first three chapters were absolutely stunning; I haven't seen such a breathtaking novel in a long time. The author must have polished it for a long time. This raised readers' expectations very high (๑•.•๑), Making the later chapters rather unremarkable. After chapter 20, it really took a hit; the writing felt disorganized and lacked a clear main plot. Hopefully, the author can adjust quickly and write the plot as well as the first 20 chapters (๑•.•๑).

Dark I've lingered here too long. A flash of light This caused panic in the city. Because of darkness I've lingered here too long. Darkness is like chains Firmly imprisoning this world The Savior's Helplessness He was unable to defend himself and sank into darkness. His love and mercy Until that moment when the light arrived Gently stroke the white dove; it is a messenger of light.

Sigh, I've already cast several monthly tickets. Author, honestly, this book is indeed very good, but it's not suitable for following along, you know? Following along will cause you to lose a large part of the story's coherence. Simply put, this book isn't suitable for online novels. If the author could continue to write a little every day, releasing large chapters at a time, I think many people would read it.

The biggest problem with this book is that at the beginning, no one in the book believed that the protagonist was the savior. This was not a problem as long as the readers believed it. However, when even the readers gradually stopped believing that the protagonist was the savior, the protagonist lost all faith, and the foundation of the book completely collapsed.

The first three chapters went too far with riddles. A little bit of cryptic language can be interesting, but going overboard makes it feel rushed.