Hunter X Hunter: Tonight, Germain Joins the Hunt

If you have read The Hunter, I suggest you not read this book.

The funniest thing is that the protagonist, a brigade-level master, seriously picks up corpses and collects tens of thousands of nuns, and robs tens of thousands of nuns in cash.

The author may not understand the full-time job well enough. It is a failure that the protagonist can go to the Dark Continent from the beginning. He describes the Dark Continent like the African grassland where there are dangers, but if you have a gun, there will be no danger. Then, in terms of characters, I don't know whether the author's writing is not good enough or he is deliberately all original characters. , But some of the original characters do not fit the setting, some of the descriptions are average or even inconsistent with the characters, and there are loopholes in some settings and plots. Maybe the writing is not enough. In fact, it might have been better if the original characters and the Dark Continent had not appeared so early when it was written.

Without the wolf, it's almost a family portrait

Logically speaking, the Dark Continent should be high-risk and high-return, but it turned out to be low-risk and low-return. If the trip was just to sell materials and make some money, it would be better to go to the Meile Wetland. The protagonist clearly offended the Phantom Troupe and went to the World Tree without any cover-up. The protagonist either had confidence in his own strength or simply forgot about the Troupe. Before he went there, he had no idea that he would encounter Mo Laowu. As a result, Feitan and the two were forced into a desperate situation. The more you justified Feitan's strength, the more clown the protagonist became, pretending not to be able to win. If the three Phantom Troupes had come or if they hadn't met Mo Laowu by chance, the protagonist would have died long ago. The author did not give the protagonist a strength dice, but gave the protagonist a luck dice. If he was lucky, he would be able to save the protagonist.

Why would you go to the Dark Continent if you have the strength to fight several killers? What is the purpose? What means are there? I still don't understand my abilities. What should I do if I can't come back? Without any preparation, you just want to take a look at the Dark Continent, right? If you want to pretend to be B, don't look at your equipment. Others have three heads and six arms, while the protagonist only has one head and two arms.

This is a bit outrageous, that's not how the heads are given. At least you have to be prepared and go to the forbidden area with bare board.

Now that I see it, I feel that what I write about is no longer a full-time hunter. It basically has nothing to do with hunters except for the place names. It's directly the soul system, and it also has a world view and power system. Becoming narrow-minded and incompatible without realizing it. I don't know how I will write it later, but I personally feel that the charm of hunters is constantly diminishing on the original basis.

The theme is very good, but the poison points are too strong 1. The exponentially increasing cooling time is just to sell millions of dollars? If you are short of money, just go to the Sky Arena 2. The protagonist is not short of money, why do you always have to sell things to get money 3 The Dark Continent can be visited by the protagonist with his strength? If you set up a different world, you can still go semi-infinite, is it not much better than the current Dark Continent? 4. The protagonist has no motivation to take risks and go to the Dark Continent.

The most taboo thing about writing a fanfic is to change the base. Aren't you writing a fanfic to attract people who like the base of the story and come to read it? Because people who came in from the basic market saw the changes and found that there were changes, and most of them couldn't accept it. If you rely on traffic, don't challenge it. . . .