Madam, Don't Worry, I'm a Gentleman!

How can I put it, the writing is indeed very good, but the first 18 chapters are written in a fog, and most of the settings are not explained clearly. Looking at Tuota, I don't really understand why the protagonist wants to develop the village. The characters must be able to promote the development of the plot. I took a blood pill, which was said to restore blood, but it looked more like adding vitality. It was useless to use demon elixir to open Rendu's two meridians. Overall, it seemed that I just talked about settings here and there, but the results were all nonsense. This is my entire impression of the first 18 chapters. The first part of a novel needs to be fast-paced, so as to catch other people's attention. If you delay like this, I can only say that it is difficult for me to handle.

To be honest, I feel that in the recent dragon slaying plot, the protagonist is a bit smart. You told Fang Tianhe that you wanted to slay the dragon yourself, but within a few days a dragon roar appeared near you. You still wanted to treat it as if it had nothing to do with you, especially the one who asked for information. Why did you specify a specific place? Isn't this treating others as fools? Anyone who knows can tell with a little guessing that the protagonist already knows where the dragon is. It's better to just confess where you heard the news about the dragon (adventure). When others think you have lost your memory and you don't know the Fang Tianhe News Network, sincerity is definitely more effective than lies. If you want to use other people's power to slay the dragon with your own hands, but also want to distance yourself, it is almost impossible with the current layout.

Generally speaking, it's pretty good, but it's a pity that it's not popular.

What's the potential for development in this poor village?

I was excited at the beginning, but after reading it I felt like: That's it, I've completed eight chapters! I just started by saying that I only watched the plot and couldn't stop.

The pace is too slow, just like the useless people. Will the useless people help the plot later? Now it seems that it is not helpful, it is just a water seal. For example, after a useless person breaks through, he can slap his clan members in the face, giving readers a sense of satisfaction, or there is a mastermind behind the scenes who seals the male protagonist and leads to the mastermind behind the scenes. But there is none here. It is just to highlight the male protagonist's perseverance to attract the female protagonist. There is also Xiaozhaizi, which is a branch line and should not be written as the main line.

It's a bit proficient, but not very impressive. It's good as a hobby.

The setting for the protagonist to not die even once is outrageous. Unless the existence of no soul is forced to be set later, you will know at a glance that the protagonist is reborn. Amnesia is just a loss of memory. Does it change his character? Moreover, what he knows is so different from the original version. It is really awesome that a person with amnesia can know things that the original version does not know.

If it doesn't update, send the blade to the author.

I couldn't understand the plot of sending someone back and still being arrested, and calling my father "who is so and so"?

It uses love relationships and connections between people to promote the development of the plot. It feels like this is not a male video.

It's broken, keep it and keep it, it's gone. If I had known it, I would have read it 😢

Dear friends, would you recommend keeping this book?

Can the author please post more pictures today?

Can the author add two more pages today?

Author, I have given you all the recommended films. Can you add two more?

What's wrong with the late wife? I mean, you have a bad habit of pinching off the head and tail 🤫