Cowherd's Cow

Niu doesn't practice heavy weapons, sticks, swords, and embroidery. I'm sorry, the author, but I'm really not interested in reading it.

The story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl is strange in itself. How could a fairy fall in love with a mortal? The level of life is different. If a fairy looks at the microorganisms all over the body of a mortal, can he swallow them?

There is a reason for the poor performance of this book. At first, it was really disgusting to me that the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl were paired together. If you want him to have a complete family, why can't he find a way to marry an ordinary woman? Whether I can leave or not is because I want to watch the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl get married. It's disgusting. I have to enter the game and then I'm afraid of being eliminated. It's so disgusting. No matter what the rest of the writing is good or not, I can't stand what I've written in the past. It's so disgusting that I opened the door for you. It's so disgusting.

This is the most awesome book I have ever read. It is one of the best. I can fight a zombie for more than 110 chapters. This book only has more than 500 chapters so far. More than 100 chapters are about catching this zombie. Can you believe it?

Don't you think your content is wordy? You force the words into words, but you write a very good story line in a verbose way, which really detracts from people's reading sense!

Poisonous? You've traveled through time, and you still talk about your ex-girlfriend's past life every day?

Water, 70% of a chapter is spent on conjecture and conjecture, and the plot is not advanced. For example, at the beginning of one chapter, the protagonist asks: What is Yinglong, can you believe it after 3,000 words? The next chapter begins with Yinglong being composed of xxxx, which shows how watery it is. The key story is not told well and it is too boring. It is not as worth reading after it is released as it was before it was released. To put it this way, I originally planned to watch it all, but the more I read about it, I lost the intention to subscribe. I just glanced at the chapter names to know what the content was. Water's conspiracy theories and speculations were boring and boring. The more I read, the less I wanted to read it. It was a waste of a good idea.

I have been reading it since Yi Jian Ping Tian, ​​but the author's level has not improved much. There are too many inner narrations of the characters, and the plot direction is completely incomprehensible. I don't know what the meaning of the protagonist's rebirth is. I hit a hammer here and there. I hope the author will write an outline first and find out what the main plot is and what the branch plots are. There is nothing interesting about 500,000 words. It is a tasteless novel and it is a pity to abandon it.

Make up the numbers, and repeat a paragraph over and over again. Every time you practice the exercises, repeat them from the beginning like this.

Too much nonsense, always talking about things that are not on topic. And he always likes to ask and answer himself. You raise concerns first and then give answers immediately. I feel uncomfortable seeing your inconsistency. For example, the previous sentence talks about the loyalty of the three spirits and the Yin soldiers. The last sentence says that the Yin soldiers will not rebel if they need his divine support. The golden eagle among the three spirits sincerely surrenders, so the wolf spirit and pig spirit will not rebel. Damn it, you already have the answer in your mind, why are you pretending to be directing and acting for me?

Che Zhuluan talks too much, and a lot of it is meaningless hydrology. You can't write well at all. I think your book has no impact on just one glance or a few lines. The content of the novel must be concise, otherwise it will just be watery.

I have to say that the author's writing is average. If you want to write about immortals, you shouldn't intersperse so many modern stories, and you shouldn't use a lot of popular science. I really can't stand it anymore.

In fact, the subject matter is very good, but it is too wordy, with all kinds of ramblings and psychological activities.

I've read about forty or fifty chapters so far, let me know what you think! The writing of the novel is okay, not to mention how good the writing is, but it is still pretty good. Although the plot is a bit bland, the daily life atmosphere is well written. Personally, I think it is quite realistic when thinking about the transition from human to cow. I just don't understand why the protagonist insists on helping the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl get married, and maybe by peeking into the bath. Although I haven't written about this yet, it has vaguely revealed this meaning. I haven't seen how it helps them later! And even though he knew that doing so might offend the Jade Emperor and Queen Mother, he still had to prepare to get involved in this matter. What did the protagonist, a little character who had just started to practice, think, or what did the author think? Even if the Cowherd is nice to the protagonist and wants to repay his kindness, he can always think of other ways. If he wants to help the Cowherd find a wife to understand, why does he have to do it with the Weaver Girl? Is it possible that the story of the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl must be completed? To say something ugly is like having water in your head! Except for this point that makes me confused, everything else is okay, not too outstanding but okay. I plan to continue watching. If the protagonist has to pair up the Cowherd and the Weaver Girl, I will reluctantly continue watching. But if you use the trick of peeping in the shower and stealing clothes to let the two get acquainted, then I can't bear it. I can only say that the protagonist is mentally retarded. I'll take another look. If I'm wrong, I'll apologize again.

The protagonist's timeline has jumped. It's only been more than a year. The level of various adventures has increased too fast. Why are you so anxious! A monster has a long lifespan and needs to be polished for hundreds of years. You are doing this too fast. It is outrageous.

The subject matter of this book is good, and the slow pace is actually good. However, I personally think that it is not a shortcoming that you describe the psychological dynamics of the protagonist more. The author's problem is that it is too redundant. To put it bluntly, the word count is too much. The same thing has to be written back and forth several times. For example, the description of the Yulong clan is just an unimportant supporting role. If you just write about the Yulong clan using waste and dedicating dragon meat to Emperor Xia and escaping, you have to write it back and forth three times. Is this necessary? If you write it once, won't everyone know it? This is not about water. What is the word count doing?

You have already traveled through time and become a cow, but instead gave up your racial power talent to play the agile speed sword unless this kind of sword is not bad

It was too watery after it was put on the shelf. Che Luolun said repeatedly

I have been raising a batch of water for more than a month, and I haven't finished harvesting the corpses yet. How many chapters of water do you plan to use?

This progress is too slow. How should I put it? Although there is nothing poisonous about it, it is too bland and not very refreshing. If the subject matter were not a bit novel, I would really not be interested 🤔🤔. Keep it for now, wait until you want to watch it someday😌

I always feel like in popular science, only half of a picture is about introducing the origins and local knowledge of the characters, and the description of the protagonist's experience is the least.

Wangshu is Donghua's daughter? Hou Tu is also the daughter of Donghua? Yeah, I feel like Donghua is about to get a box lunch. The author is so brave.

The idea was creative, but unfortunately it didn't make for a great story.

It's rare to see someone writing about classical fairy tales. I'm tired of reading the ancient classics. Come on, author!

Now it has 100,000 words, and the bookkeepers are almost ready to slaughter it. The current reading data is very important, especially for the new book period. Currently, I have only received one recommendation to test the water. The collection has not exceeded a thousand, and the results are somewhat unsatisfactory, so I really need your support! I will write this book seriously and will persist in writing it. I used to have a few old books that were okay, but I didn't seize the opportunity to stick to them and lacked perseverance. Now that I am no longer young, I have decided to start making changes, starting from learning to persist. Persistence is easier said than done. I also hope to get everyone's supervision and encouragement.

It's really just rambling here and there, and the plot moves very slowly.

I'm still writing a million words in Yaoshan. I just left Xinshou Village and am blind.

This is probably a eunuch. It won't be updated even if a new book is released.

With a reward of five yuan, the author keeps up the good work!

I haven't seen the back yet. What weapon does the protagonist use?