Dog-Headed Military Advisor

The author, after reading more than ten chapters, I found that your description was too detailed. How to practice the exercises, explanation of terminology, mentioning a certain thing repeatedly, etc. A suggestion, the language needs to be concise. It is a metaphor for cultivation. Everyone only looks at the results and does not care about the cultivation method. There is no need to introduce everyone in detail (except plot characters).

Everything else is better But it's too verbose Can you tell me a little bit about it Does your family live in the sea

Water is healthier, but too much water is a bit discouraging. Come on, author. I withdrew first.

I think the author wrote it very well! ! Very suitable to my taste! Come on! ! ! !

This is my first comment from a ten-year-old bookworm. The author's writing is wonderful, with twists and turns in the plot, and sophisticated writing. The worst thing is that Su Yunxiu was written to death, and the two elders of the Shu family were written to death. The sister was kept. The sister Shu Yunxiu died. It feels like the protagonist's IQ suddenly dropped. A lot of it, this is very bad. The VIP plot behind it feels like it has been pieced together. The more it is written, the worse it becomes. The scholar is still hiding in the bandit's den. Isn't it good to go out and wander the world? Isn't it good to be an official? You can rebel even if you are not good at it. Anyway, the emperor is fatuous.

The plot of Chapter 42 can be summarized in a few thousand words. It's really too watery.

The plot advances too slowly and there are too many psychological descriptions.

In the first chapter, the protagonist poured a glass of wine, but in the tenth chapter, the glass of wine was still warm 🤓

The author has entered the palace? ?

Pig's Foot wants to escape and take Su Yushi's family to the capital? Do you want to repay the favor of saving his life? His wife and daughter committed themselves to thieves. How can people know about this shame and humiliation? It's too late to kill people and silence them. I don't know why Pig's Foot is so stupid.

Shui, you are quite skilled at this. How long does it take you to describe a scene? How many chapters have it been? Just this scene! It's like a shot (he stepped out of the door) to you. (He walked over slowly. The sound of his footsteps already revealed a bit of desolation. He frowned as if he was deep in thought. What was he thinking? Is there anything different about last night's scene from usual? Or was he thinking about the time when he just left? Are the words appropriate? I still think about how to go down the road. Should I turn left or right after exiting the gate? If I go left... If I go right... Maybe I shouldn't be so impulsive. As he got closer to the gate, he raised his head slightly and looked at the already stained door. He thought to himself: If it weren't for the word limit, I could still be good...

More than 500 chapters later, the protagonist is still wandering up and down that mountain.

This is my first book. I couldn't stand it and even abandoned it. It's so rubbish. It keeps repeating irrelevant words. It's very toxic. It's a waste of time to read it.

When I read Chapter 9, for the entire 9 chapters, the male protagonist didn't leave his room, and he was all writing about his inner drama.

This is really a bit confusing. One chapter is all about the difficulties of escaping, and I have said it several times before. The escape route needs another chapter 🙂🙂🙂🙂

Author, the protagonist of your book should not be called Gouchen, but Gonggong, because Gonggong is the god of water.

I've read more than a dozen chapters and it's too watery, mostly narration. Don't advance the main line, dig deeper into every corner. The writing method of the first dozen chapters and the main plot are as bland as writing an essay. It feels like there is no way to write it down. When it comes to practicing magic, it seems like I have found some information and pasted it on, hoping to have as many words as possible. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I can still feel the same feeling as when I was writing essays for the college entrance examination without bragging.

What should I say? I feel that the writing is really bloated. I only need to write down which hand to wipe in detail when I go to the latrine. I'm not a troll, but this is not a farming article, and it's too detailed, making it seem like we can succeed in cultivation. I thought I was reading the Minshan Shu training manual. I thought it would be better if I signed up for V, but I feel like it's not worth it even though it's almost fully booked. It feels like it's almost catching up with the later stage of Zhetian. One palm can describe a chapter. I was stunned.

This is one of the most verbose books I have ever seen. If you want to see it, be mentally prepared.

First, the text is too watery. It looks like it is written very carefully. In fact, it is just a running account, which is completely useless for promoting the plot. Second, the Virgin Mother cannot stand it at all. Brother Su tried to kill him twice, but he didn't deliberately not kill him. His spell skills are so poor, but he still forcibly kept a bomb. It's so stupid.

The book written by the author is too bad. There are three bad chapters at the beginning, and the seventh chapter is a bad one. A chapter of several thousand words only has more than 100 words in the main text. How does such an author still want to make money?

Seeing so many people talking about water, I left with peace of mind. Goodbye👋🏻. As someone who supports the author, I hope that the charging process will be the same. Oh, don't call it detailed. It's very detailed, very, very detailed.

It's so stupid, will you steal everyone's money after it's put on the shelves?

You are looking at the wrong place. In fact, you only need to look at the table of contents for this book.

How to say it? The author's writing style is not bad, and the embellishments are very good, but the author's thinking is too jumping, right? As I write, I write about irrelevant things, so it makes people feel very tired to read, because they can't grasp the key points. It's like saying that I plan to buy a car, and after thinking about it, I think about how the parts of the car are produced? How was industrial civilization born? The evolution and origins of humankind. And the author loves to explain. In fact, we readers don't need too much explanation. As long as there are no big logical errors, we can feel satisfied. Explanations can also be summarized. I hope the author's thinking will not be so jumpy. Because when you jump, our thinking must also jump with it, and the more we look at it, the more confused we become. Plus plenty of explanations. Therefore, this book gives people a very watery feeling, and it can also give people a headache. I hope the author can improve it! 🙂

It hasn't been cut yet. . . . Do you think the writing is good or not? . Very good, watery not watery very watery. . . Cut and rise again. . I still persevere even though I can't make any money. I don't know whether to say I'm impressed or pitiful. . .

Digging is not finished yet. I remember it was on my bookshelf several years ago. It is not finished yet. I am convinced.

This is one of the coolest novels I have ever read.

There is a tribe on an island in the Pacific. Uncensored gatherings can be seen everywhere. There are no taboos on the sexual intercourse between men and women of all kinds, such as father-daughter, mother-son, brother-sister, uncle-nephew, etc. The relationship is very real. What do "real people" think?

Author, are you the author of The Strongest Warrior? I couldn't find this book at Qidian. I liked this book very much when I first came into contact with online writing. Unfortunately, the update was too slow, so I read other books first.