The Smiling Proud Dragon Asked the Heavens

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Very well written. Twenty years ago, martial arts had a place for you. But in 2025, you are just talking nonsense, without focus, overwhelming the golden mountain, and annoying people. But you are also a talent. Without any plot advancement, I was able to make up a few thousand words. Just like the first chapter. There are a lot of bala bala, just the last sentence has some information. Another example is Chapter 2. Bala, there are a lot of them, just the last sentence has some information. Another example is Chapter 3. There are a lot of bala bala, but there is only a small amount of information. The plot advances extremely slowly. But! This does not prevent you from being a master. Maybe this is the writing technique you developed after writing more than 5 million words. Strive for this book to upgrade you to lv3!

After reading six chapters, the whole story is narrated. The only real plot is that the protagonist falls. Li Qiu Shui thinks he looks like Wu Yazi, and then the protagonist says he can have plastic surgery. The protagonist and Li Qiu Shui do it twice. That's it. Chapter six, the plot is just that. The rest are all narrated introductions. Not to mention that everyone has basically watched Tianlong. You know a little bit about character relationships. Even if it's an original world, that's not how you introduce the background.

Nowadays, the novel is really weak, the plot is only a little advanced, but it is all a bunch of nonsense about the introduction.

It doesn't make sense. Writing a protagonist who looks like Wu Yazi is speechless. Writing a similar second character like Wu Yazi doesn't make much sense. It's better to just write someone who is handsome and charming, who is better than you, or more handsome than Wu Yazi. If I write about Li Qiu Shui, I let the protagonist go because he is handsome and charming. Because Li Qiu Shui is a good-looking person, it makes sense!

These days, it's still rare to see novels in which the protagonist is a scumbag.

It's been over 30 chapters and I haven't started practicing martial arts yet.

As far as the triple version is concerned, the Beiming and Wu Yazi left by Li Qiu Shui should not be the same version. Li's version can only absorb power, while Wu Yazi's Beiming Qi was cultivated by himself. Duan Yu's internal power of Beiming's magical power has never been called Beiming Qi by the narrator. Xu Zhu's internal power obtained from Wu Yazi has always been called Beiming Qi, and the various special effects of Beiming's Qi have always been emphasized. Duan Yu's internal power has no special effects.

Zhutianliu, you have always been in this world and I am convinced. It is a pity that I abandoned it because it is tasteless and too lazy to find a book. The plot should be more compact 😒

It's well written, but it's too watery and overwhelming. It's 120 chapters in and the main plot hasn't even started yet. Why do you have this kind of writing technique to write a fan novel? I see that you, Shu Ming, came here just for the sake of fandom, but it took you so long to write and the main plot hasn't even started yet? ? ? Isn't this headline fraud? ?

The most interesting part of this book is that the protagonist treats Li Qiu Shui. What is written next? Or you start at the bottom, slowly get closer to Li Qiu Shui, and start so high? Then start to deal with and fight with the bottom of the world. Do you think it can attract people? Think about it yourself. Don't write randomly.

I want to say that the protagonist must not kick Li Qiu Shui if he is too awesome, otherwise he will look like a white-eyed wolf.

After writing this, I almost became Duan Yu's licking dog. I finally couldn't stand it any longer and slipped away.

Yang Guo practiced at the bottom of the waterfall, letting the water wash over his body, and using his kung fu to counteract the impact of the water falling from a height. Is the internal strength cultivated through this method equivalent to ten years of training by an ordinary martial artist for one year?

It is recommended to have more female protagonists. Recommended collection: Nangong Wan, Xin Ruyin and Xiaomei, Dong Xuan'er, Chen Qiaoqian, Hong Fu, Zhong Weiniang and her master Jiang Yun, Nishang Fairy, Zi Ling and her mother Wang Menzhu, Fan Jingmei, Zhuo Ruting, Yuan Yao, Yanli, Wen Madam, Ling Yuling and her mother Wen Qing, Yinyue, Bingfeng, Han Zhixian, Mei Ning, Wen Siyue, Liu Yu, Gongsun Xing, Shidie Fairy, Xiao Cui'er, Nie Ying, Yan Ruyan, Bingpo Fairy, Song Yu, Tianlan Saint Lin Yin Ping, Mulan Prairie Saint Music Master, Feng Bing, Mu Peiling, Bai Yaoyi, Saint Ancestor Yuancha, Saint Ancestor Baohua, Dai'er, Fairy Black Phoenix, Jin Yue, Xianxian, Liu Leer, Bai Suyuan, Mo Caihuan, Mo Yuzhu, Mo Fengwu, The four wives of the Mohist family (Yan, Li, Liu, Wang)

I think the strongest martial arts among Jin Yong, Gu Long, Huang Yi, Wen Ruian, and Liang Yusheng are Xiaoyao sect martial arts such as Beiming Shengong. Because Beiming Shengong and other Xiaoyao sect martial arts were not written by Jin Yong, but were created by Ni Kuang, a science fiction writer, who used science fiction theory and Taoist ideas to create super martial arts science fiction fairy martial arts. Therefore, in Jin Yong's martial arts world, they appear to be too buggy and invincible. It is simply a cultivation method. Because those martial arts are no longer ordinary martial arts but super science fiction cultivation martial arts. Even in some super martial arts science fiction and fantasy worlds such as [Hong Kong Comics: Sea Tiger, God of War, Dragon Tiger V, Wesley Z, Divine Weapon F, Divine Weapon F2: The Second World War], "Star Transformation, Covering the Sky, Tomb of the Gods, Perfect World, Galaxy Emperor, Holy King, Yang Shen, Swallowing the Starry Sky, and the Wild Age" are super top powers. So the martial arts of the Xiaoyao sect such as Beiming Shen Gong can completely crush the martial arts world of Jin Yong, Huang Yi, Gu Long, Wen Ruian, Liang Yusheng and others by one person. However, [Hong Kong Comics (Hong Kong Comics): Wen Rui'an Heroes 1 and 2] also has a sci-fi super martial arts that does not reflect the true power. If you learn this martial arts, you can also crush Jin Yong, Huang Yi, Gu Long, Wen Ruian, Liang Yusheng and other martial arts worlds by yourself. This martial art is [Body-Breaking Invisible Sword Qi]. [Body-Breaking Invisible Sword Qi] is not only as fast as lightning and as nimble as wind, but also contains indestructible and indestructible crazy killing power. It can be said to be a terrifying [killing weapon]. Among them, the word "body breaking" means not the body, but "celestial bodies, time and space, and all things in nature", which arise from thoughts and come out of the sky! The body-breaking invisible sword energy can be infinitely transformed and strengthened as one's own mind or realm or the natural power of the heaven, earth and universe increases. It can be said to be a "sword that breaks the limit" with infinite possibilities, mystery and power. There is no need to practice hard to break the invisible sword energy, just break through or hold on forever or let go of the obsession in your heart. The black invisible sword energy that breaks the body after initial training needs to absorb the negative forces such as death energy, resentment energy, corpse energy, murderous energy, evil energy, evil energy, poisonous energy, yin energy, miasma energy, anger, foul energy, etc. Afterwards, the negative can be turned into a positive, using positive power such as the vitality essence of flowers, plants, woods and other creatures to emit sword energy that can kill and save lives. Finally, there is no distinction between positive and negative. Hunyuan Wuji can use the power of heaven, earth, universe, nature and all things to activate Wuji's infinite, mysterious, unpredictable and powerful sword energy. [Hong Kong Comics (Hong Kong Comics): Wen Rui'an's Heroes 2] In order to save his lover Xiaobai, with a strong desire to travel through time and space in modern Hong Kong, he broke through the limits of his past and turned the impossible into the possible, using an unprecedented body-breaking invisible sword energy that shattered time and space and sent himself to the Song Dynasty. Many parts of Tian Long Ba Bu were ghostwritten by Ni Kuang because Jin Yong was traveling at that time, so the style of many parts of Tian Long Ba Bu is very different from Jin Yong's other novels, and the martial arts and combat power are also far stronger than other Jin Yong novels. Some people say that Ah Qing in Jin Yong's Yue Girl Sword is the strongest, because Ah Qing can defeat three thousand Yue soldiers by herself. But if you look carefully, you will find that Qiao Feng is no weaker than A Qing when he appears. Qiao Feng can move freely on the battlefield of one hundred thousand Xixia elite soldiers who are more powerful than three thousand Yue soldiers and capture the general with ease. Later, in the plot of the Liao Kingdom's Nanyuan King forcing the palace to usurp the throne, from the hundreds of thousands of elite Liao soldiers who helped Yelu Hongji capture the Nanyuan King like mowing grass, it can be seen that Qiao Feng was already stronger than Ah Qing at that time. Beiming Shengong simply does not have the shortcomings of impure true qi, limited absorption of internal energy, and inability to absorb pure and stable martial arts qi such as the Yi Jin Jing. Those shortcomings are all made up by some martial arts fan authors. Ni Kuang and Jin Yong never mentioned the shortcomings of Beiming Divine Art. When Ni Kuang, the founder of Beiming Shengong, originally created this super martial arts sci-fi fairy martial arts with a science fiction concept, he designed it to be an invincible golden finger with no flaws. Ni Kuang said that Beiming Shengong was designed to be the golden finger of the protagonist Duan Yu (a weak scholar with no martial arts knowledge), allowing him to quickly counterattack and defeat other masters. Therefore, Beiming Shengong was designed to infinitely absorb external forces (spirits and spirits of other creatures) and turn them into his own original power, which can then be used to strengthen his own spirit, energy, and spirit to infinitely develop and enhance his own foundation. For example, Duan Yu used the Beiming Divine Technique to absorb and refine the Manggu Clam to strengthen and sublimate his own foundation potential, so that he has a physique that is invulnerable to all poisons and decades of pure cultivation. The Beiming Divine Technique can be used to command and practice, master and even absorb and integrate all other martial arts. First of all, Beiming Divine Skill absorbs and refines the infinite original Beiming Qi, which can be used to practice and infinitely strengthen and sublimate one's own essence and spirit, so that the practitioner can prolong his life and continuously improve his own foundation, so that his own strength, speed, defense, immunity and other aspects of essence, energy and spirit can be comprehensively and unlimitedly strengthened and even evolve the life level, making the practitioner immortal and immortal. For example, Beiming Shen Gong is like a cheat and full attribute modifier in the game. Bei Ming Shen Gong is never an evil or demonic skill such as the Gong Absorbing Technique, the Star Absorbing Technique, or the Heavenly Demon Gong. Therefore, the practitioners of Bei Ming Shen Gong never actively absorb people's internal energy or even their essence. Beiming Shengong is the authentic Taoist Supreme Mysterious Skill, so it follows the Taoist nature. So often when a cultivator is attacked by others (such as poison, physical energy attacks, curses and other spiritual attacks), the body automatically protects the body, absorbs, absorbs and refines the enemy's energy and spirit and the power of nature in the universe, such as poisonous gas, miasma, evil spirit, curses, thunder and lightning, and other external forces into one's own original Beiming Qi. In addition, the Beiming True Qi of the Beiming Divine Art is extremely refined and pure, combining yin and yang, strong and soft, with Hunyuan Ruyi, infinite, automatic body protection, full of vitality, endless life, and extremely strong defensive attacks. Beiming Divine Skill is the Supreme Sect Divine Skill that can only be practiced by the leader of the Xiaoyao Sect. Beiming's magical power is vast and profound, and has returned to the sect. "Beiming's magical power has no distinction between yin and yang" - the two qi of yin and yang are transformed at will, "is no different from other internal powers" - the fusion of the imperial envoys to practice other internal powers, "is no different from the world's internal power" - there is no different kind of true energy, "there is no distinction between good and evil, good and evil" - Kung Fu is in people, not in skills. In fact, it has reached the ultimate level of Taoist inner strength and mental method, and realized the unity of heaven and man. My way is the way of heaven, and there is no distinction between all living things under the world. It is actually the only immortal magical power in the Golden Book. After integrating the Bahuang Liuhe Self-respecting Art, the life span is greatly extended and the youth can be restored to immortality. After integrating the Xiao Wuxiang Art, The martial arts of all schools in the world can be mastered, absorbed and integrated, and can be better than the blue... In harmony with people, in harmony with the earth, in harmony with the sky, in harmony with the Tao, it is supreme! Beiming Shenggong, Xiao Wuxiang Gong, Bahuang Liuhe Sovereign Kung Fu, Lingbo Weibu, Tianshan Liuyang Palm, Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand, Hua Gong! Dafa, Sound Transmission Soul Searching Dafa, Baihong Palm Power, Hanxiu Fuxue and other Xiaoyao sect martial arts are worthy of being written by Ni Kuang, a science fiction author with science fiction theory and Taoist ideas. The super martial arts science fiction fairy martial arts are far from the common martial arts in the martial arts novels written by Gu Long, Huang Yi, Wen Ruian and Liang Yusheng (such as the Wedding Dress Magic, Ming Yu Gong, and Si Zhao Magic). , Wuxiang Divine Skill, Nine Yang Manual, Nine Yin Manual, Taixuan Sutra, Shenzhao Sutra, Shaolin Yi Jin Jing and other seventy-two stunts, God of War Illustration, Immortality Technique, Immortal Seal, Tianmo Secret, Cihang Sword Manual, Daoxin Demon Planting Technique, Covering Rain Sword Technique, Shura Yinsha Gong) can be compared. [Beiming Divine Technique]. The refiner absorbs external forces and turns them into his own original power to quickly become stronger. At the same time, he can endlessly develop and improve his own potential, foundation, and sublime his own essence and spirit with the infinite original power derived from refining external forces. The capacity of Na Baichuan is great, it is compatible with and can absorb and fuse the essence of countless other techniques to remove the dross and infinitely enhance the power of Beiming Divine Technique. For example, Beiming Divine Technique is a comprehensive cheating tool that can be infinitely upgraded and adapt to changes. Beiming Divine Technique, Xiao Wu Xiang Gong, and Bahuang Liuhe. Xiaoyao sect martial arts such as Weiwozunzungong, Lingbo Weibu, Tianshan Liuyang Palm, Tianshan Plum Blossom Shou, Sound Transmission Soul Searching Technique, Baihong Palm Power, Hanxiu Fu Acupoint, etc. All promote, complement and complement each other. To use an analogy, the skills in the game can add experience and effects to each other. Superposition. In particular, the Zhenpai Divine Kung Fu, which can only be practiced by the leader of the Xiaoyao Sect, has the supreme control fusion effect and the greatest auxiliary bonus effect on other Xiaoyao sect martial arts. If you practice the Beiming Divine Kung Fu and then practice other Xiaoyao sect martial arts, you will get twice the result with half the effort. Wuxiang, Wujixun can simulate and master other skills and martial arts, and can be better than the original Qingyulan and even reach the point where Hunyuan Ruyi Wanliu returns to the sect and uses Wuji to create countless martial arts that surpass the original. The Six Ice and Fire Techniques or the fusion of the Immortality Technique and the Huangtian Dafa or the Dugu Nine Swords and the Covering Rain Sword Technique or the fusion of the Immortal Seal and the Great Shift of the Universe and the Transfer of Flowers and Jade or the fusion of the Tiancan Magic Technique and the Wind God Legs and the Eighteen Dragon Subduing Legs and the Dragon Subduing Divine Legs or the Innate Universe Technique and the Huntian Treasure Mirror and the Heavenly Demon Technique, Raksha Kui and [Hong Kong Manga: Divine Palm Dragon Sword Flying] The Five Elements Version of the Tathagata Divine Palm. [Eight Desolations and Liuhe Sovereign Skills] can rejuvenate oneself and lead immortality. Each rejuvenation is a process of refining and sublimating one's own cultivation and foundation, including essence, energy, and spirit. Each rejuvenation makes the practitioner's strength, speed, defense, and The whole body attributes such as immunity and even [jing, qi, and spirit] are comprehensively strengthened and become thicker, purer, and restrained. Returning to nature, practitioners who have returned to their original state can hide their martial arts realm and cultivation level at will. This is because of the [introverted characteristics] of [Bahuang Liuhe Only Self-respecting Gong] and the [breaking and then establishing] characteristics of rejuvenation and reconstruction. , So this [Bahuangliuhe Only My Own Skill] is like a [BUG] in the game that involves level-up transfer and reincarnation! If you think about a player who appears to be a first-level player, but has level 200 attributes, skills, and experience, this set of skills is really the best tool for pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger, and to pretend to be young in the world... [Lingbo Weibu] is based on the [Book of Changes], and the combination of movement and stillness has infinite changes. It can stop statically, use slowness to go fast, use the same to adapt to changes, and can also use movement to control stillness, use fast to slow, and use all kinds of changes. The faster the god, the more unpredictable he is, making the enemy exhausted. In this way, the weaker the enemy, the stronger he becomes. In the end, the enemy is exhausted and defeated without fighting. In addition, Lingbo Weibu complements other Xiaoyao sect martial arts, and when practiced or used with other Xiaoyao sect martial arts, Lingbo Weibu can promote each other. It is the teleportation skill in the game that adds blood regeneration, mana acceleration, dodge attributes, and other skills and experience. [Tianshan Plum Blossom Hand] has no end. It can absorb and integrate countless other combat skills, take their essence and remove the dross. The experience can be continuously upgraded and transformed to infinitely improve the power. At the same time, it can be transformed into any combat skill at will, such as absorbing and integrating the top ten martial arts, Liaoyuan Marksmanship, Seven Exploration Snake Spear, Yue Family Spear, Fengshen Legs, Cloud Pavilion Palm, and Tianshuang Fist. Yang Palm] Study the way of yin and yang, the way of change (that is, the way of change in the Book of Changes). As the saying goes, change leads to change, and change leads to success. Therefore, the Tianshan Six Yang Palm can reverse the yin and yang to create the life and death talisman of yin and yang. However, the difference is that one is the study of vector changes. Another function is to hone one's own mind and soul. Only a mind with a clear mirror and a soul that can see all things can freely change the force vector. [Sound Transmission Soul Searching Method] is like a map search in the game, allowing the practitioner to monitor and lock everything in the universe and attack the enemy with sound. The other function of cultivation is to train one's soul and true energy. [Huan Gong Dafa] was created by a junior member of the Xiaoyao sect. It can destroy the enemy's foundation or purify the poisonous miasma and internal energy in oneself and others. [Hanxiu Fu Point] can harmonize the qi and blood. Internal force reverses chaos and reverses the essence and energy of living beings. Taoist Qigong pays great attention to step-by-step processes. It strictly follows the path of refining Qi to transform, practicing Qi to transform into spirit, refining spirit to reverse emptiness, and practicing emptiness to combine with Tao. In the early stage, it takes a long time to polish and build the foundation, just like the great hero Guo Jing in The Condor, who taught horses to Quanzhen in the desert when he was young. Yu taught Quanzhen Foundation Internal Kung Fu and practiced hard for many years. He had a solid foundation. Although his power was not obvious, after acquiring the Nine Yin Manual, the Eighteen Palms of Subduing the Dragon and the Kongming Fist, his martial arts improved by leaps and bounds and he became the top master at that time. His wife Huang Rong was a hundred times smarter than Guo Jing. She also practiced the Nine Yin Manual, Beggar's He is a top-notch master in Taohua Island, but he is far behind Guo Jing, because Huang Rong was cheating when he was a child, and his temperament was unstable. It can be seen that the slightest mistake in martial arts can make a huge difference! When it comes to foundation building, Taoist Qigong can be regarded as the best in the martial arts! R>Taoist practice takes Tai Chi Yin Yang and Bagua Yi Jing as the ultimate principles, and takes the three elements of essence, Qi and Shen as the core, which is often said to be the three levels of practice: "refining essence to transform into qi", "refining qi to transform into spirit", and "refining spirit to return to emptiness". Those who don't know the truth will mistakenly think that the Taoist cultivation method is only to train qi and spirit, and physical training is not as good as the superficial national martial arts in the late Qing Dynasty and the early Republic of China. Combat fitness methods and other extreme body-refining and soul-refining systems such as magic, fighting energy, and supernatural powers that specialize in the soul and body, and mistakenly believe that the three levels of refining, refining qi, and refining the spirit in Taoist monasticism must be step-by-step and progressive, so they forcibly split them into nourishing essence, refining essence, transforming qi, refining qi, transforming spirit, and refining spirit. There are so many single small steps, but they really don't matter. They are totally wrong and extremely ridiculous! In the beginning of Taoist internal martial arts practice, accumulating essence and Qi requires the coordination of body, mind and mind in both active and static exercises. I have never heard of anyone who can enter the palace without one of them! The key to refining qi is the heart, and the key to refining the spirit is the mind... At the beginning of practicing, if the body, mind, and mind are pure and unique, the body is calm, the heart is pure, and the mind is sincere, then the power will advance by leaps and bounds, that is, the three elements of essence, qi, and spirit are refined at the same time. Therefore, even if the practitioners of [Refining Essence and Transforming Qi] have just started, their energy, momentum, and thoughts will be far stronger than ordinary people. Sheng is not just about energy. Inferring from this, the three levels of [Refining Qi to Transform Spirit], and [Refining Spirit to Return to Void] are all about refining the three elements of essence, energy and spirit from beginning to end, rather than specializing in one or two of the three elements at a certain level. The difference is [Refining Qi to Transform into Spirit]. The main thing is nourishing and refining the essence, supplementing each other by practicing Qi and Shen. When the Yuan Jing is overflowing, the Qi will be transformed and regenerated until it is soft, and then the Qi will return to the Yuan. [Refining Qi and Transforming God] mainly focuses on refining the vitality and spirit, and the pure spirit of vitality must constantly nourish the spirit. During this process, the essence must be inexhaustible, and the divine will is unwavering, and the requirements for the essence and will are further increased. It can be said that the essence and spirit are refined again in a subtle way [Refining the Spirit and Returning the Void] seems to be. The most focused on the most unfathomable, mysterious and mysterious Yuan Shen Kung Fu and 'Tao', in fact, at this stage, the essence, energy, spirit and the 'Tao' of personal understanding have been integrated into one. Refining the spirit and returning it to the void means refining the four elements of essence, energy, spirit and Tao, blending the void, and then 'unifying the Tao and transcending'

Li Qingluo and "Fairy Sister" Wang Yuyan have a father (grandfather) and a mother (grandmother) who are excellent in martial arts. They also have countless magical secrets from "Langhuan Paradise", but the martial arts they practice are not top-notch. The qualifications and talents of these mother and daughter are really useless, haha!

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