Myriad Worlds: Sharing Talents, Starting on Chicken Island

If you're not good at romance, write less of it. Learn from Duke: focus more on physical attraction and less on emotional depth. Avoid playing female characters who are popular with audiences; this way, you're less likely to make a mistake.

The combat power seems off. The protagonist's strength is only around 1000 jin (approximately 500 catties), which seems a bit weak. In the country of Ster, the robots' strength couldn't be less than two tons. Even with internal energy enhancement, their peak technology would at least be tens of tons, possibly even a thousand tons. Shouldn't your strength be ten times higher, otherwise the combat power doesn't match up?

If the author hasn't finished writing the book, they shouldn't blindly listen to others' opinions at the end. It's impossible to please everyone, and changes made to cater to certain groups may disrupt the original flow and actually lower the quality of the work.

The power levels are severely underestimated. In the Legend of Sword and Fairy series, a character could defeat the Demon Lord Chonglou, but in Douluo Continent, they might not even be able to defeat a Title Douluo. It's ridiculous.

I really don't know what's so pretty about the female characters in Assassin's Creed 567. Mei Hua Thirteen isn't pretty at all, so why would someone think she's a beauty? I don't understand. Is it my aesthetic sense that's the problem, or is it the author's?

I read a few chapters; the writing is so-so, but the rest is alright. This kind of novel is basically an "invincible" story—either there's no female lead, or the female lead's role is so well-developed that she steals the original male lead's spotlight to woo him, and it feels incredibly forced. Wu Liuqi even kissed her then; will the male lead kiss her later too? This kind of "stealing the female lead using the original male lead's methods" is really boring.

What is that person writing? This kind of self-deprecating praise and denigration, along with those clichés like "Taoists in troubled times, monks in prosperous times," is ridiculous. While each sect may have its own calculations in normal times, they are generally fighting for their country during times of crisis. There hasn't been a single sect retreating in the comic yet.

The power levels in each world are unbalanced, which is ridiculous. Someone who can defeat the Demon Lord Chonglou is only on par with a Title Douluo in Douluo Continent? How could someone with Demon Lord Chonglou's combat power not be able to easily sweep through the pirate world? This brain is really not suited for writing books.

Chapter 29 already killed Red Fang, that's great, that's satisfying.

The book can be lighthearted and mindless, but if you're looking for a Douluo Continent story, then there's no need to read it. The protagonist can defeat most immortals, and you're telling me he can't even beat Tang Hao? Ugh, goodbye.