Myriad Worlds: Sharing Talents, Starting on Chicken Island

If you are not very good at emotional dramas, write less. Follow Duke's example and focus more on your kidneys and less on your heart. Use less of the kind of female characters that are popular with the audience. This way, you will be less likely to get into trouble.

The combat power is not quite right. The protagonist's strength is about 1,000 pounds. Is it a bit weak? In the country of St, the power of those robots inside cannot be less than two tons. Even if you have internal strength bonus, their peak technology should start at least ten tons, and it is possible to have thousands of tons. Shouldn't your strength be increased by more than ten times, otherwise the combat power will not be matched?

If the author has not finished writing the book, in the end, do not listen to other people's opinions casually. It is difficult to adjust the opinions of others. After making changes to cater to some groups, the original idea will not be as smooth as the original idea, but the quality of the work will easily deteriorate.

It seriously overwhelms the combat power. The Immortal Sword can defeat Demon Zunzhenglou, but it turns out that Douluo may not be able to defeat Titled Douluo. It's funny.

I really don't know how beautiful the female characters in Assassin 567 are. Plum Blossom Thirteen is not beautiful either. Why do you think she is a beauty? ? I don't understand whether it's my aesthetic problem or the author's aesthetic problem.

I read a few chapters and the writing was average, but the rest was okay. This kind of novel is basically an invincible novel. Either there is no role for the female protagonist, or the female protagonist's role is well written, and the original male protagonist's role is snatched away to seduce the female protagonist, which is very blunt. Wu Liuqi even kissed her at that time. Will the male protagonist also have a kiss later? It's really boring to rob the female protagonist using the same tactics as the male protagonist.

What did the person at the back write? Why would you use such rubbish words like Taoist priests in troubled times and monks in prosperous times? At present, one person and each sect may have their own calculations, but in times of national calamity, they basically fight for the country. There is no sect that retreats in the comics.

The description and performance of combat power in each world are unbalanced. I am speechless. The person who can defeat Demon Zunzhenglou only has the same combat power as Titled Douluo in Douluo? The combat power of the Demon King Tower cannot be easily pushed around in the pirate world? This brain is really not suitable for writing a book.

In Chapter 29, I'll chop Chiya to death, okay, okay, comfortable.

The book can be a novice or a no-brainer, but if you play Douluo, there is no need to read it. The protagonist can defeat most immortals. You tell me that you can't beat Tang Hao. Wow, goodbye.