Swallowed Star: Trading Across the Myriad Worlds, Starting with a Fox Spirit
吞噬星空：从狐妖开始诸天交易
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 540k Words
- Subgenre
- Myriad Worlds
- Updated
- 1y ago
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183Chapters
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The slow progress is one thing, but the cheat codes aren't quantifiable at all. Frankly, initially it's just a matter of trading with hundreds of people a day. Talents haven't changed much either. The lack of quantification is just to make it easier to suppress combat power and the storyline. It's boring...
This is a transaction; don't let the plot force the protagonist to help.
Art style issues
What I dislike most about writing about the myriad realms is a "sudden change in style". Popular novels, different novels by the same author, American comics and TV series, Japanese comics and Chinese comics, etc. It's fine to specialize in one type of world, where the art style is more similar.
The protagonist is awkward, hates trouble, wants to become stronger, dislikes others for being ambitious, and wonders if becoming stronger is ambition itself. The author should take a look after finishing the story; the protagonist's character is hard to describe.
The descriptions of the cultivation system in Swallowed Star are all wrong 😅
Spending so much space on the character Liu Ting was a mistake. Ask any reader how many like her; most will skip her. Female characters in the original novel should be beautiful and famous, or powerful enough to help the protagonist. Liu Ting doesn't fit any of these categories.
Does the author only use love rivals to prop up the plot? The worst thing to write in Swallowing the Stars is a plot with a brainless love rival.
Shield — This is my boyfriend Haha, this plot knows how to filter its readers.
That's hilarious!
Only 30 chapters and they've already started writing about romance... Dude, dude, a woman with a family business, someone you'd never normally associate with. Then, just because you got a job at a state-owned enterprise, she starts getting close to you. She even comes to your house the very next day... Wearing her workout clothes, and invites you for a run (Chapter 47)... My God, is this a plot even a human could write? Dude, have you ever been in a relationship?
In the genre of multiverse fiction, the most undesirable element is a drawn-out plot.