Simultaneous Transmigration: How Many Copies of Me Have Transmigrated?

Think carefully about what you want to see in fan fiction. If you're going to create original content within the fan fiction genre, then why write fan fiction in the first place?

There are indeed many plot holes in Naruto, especially in the movies. For example, the guy who planted explosive tags in Konoha was only spared because he was soft-hearted; otherwise, Konoha would have been severely weakened.

May the divine arts of all realms and the divine help Shennong make this beautiful?

I feel something's off about Hiruzen Sarutobi; maybe he's not old yet.

Naruto deviates too much from the original work; I can't stand watching it.

The criticisms in the book review section are mostly acceptable to me, but the part about selling out the Marvel version of Wink and adding a new setting where the main Wink is the core and the others are just clones or clones of the main god is so lame it left me speechless. This is worse than writing a projection story where the main Wink is the core and the clones are written one by one.

Chapters six and seven completely blew my mind. The earlier parts were going so well, then suddenly it went completely mad. If it had been setting up some kind of extraterrestrial invasion, that would have been fine, a connection to the protagonist's mission after their transmigration. But instead, it was a complete mess.

Let's drastically revise the Harry Potter parts before it's released.

There have been too many works based on stories like those in Duke Fanfiction and Naruto, and there's also a lot of fanfiction available. It's hard to compete with them, since not every author has the exceptional writing skills of someone like Feng Chaohuang. You could write about other worlds; that really tests an author's creativity.

The fact that they were crippled by a single member of the Otsutsuki clan in Hokage's homeland means they can't be considered that strong.