The Knockoff Dao Ancestor

You can stop reading after seeing thirteen pages. The point was the concept: you can painstakingly cultivate for over a decade to earn two million, then casually kill a few extraterrestrials and get two million directly. The idea of ​​using real-world items as a medium to drastically reduce prices was great, and you even get cultivation techniques and spells after exchanging them.

It feels like these three worlds were once one, then split into three due to some event. Later, these three worlds followed their former paths and merged again. However, due to the incompleteness of the laws of heaven and earth, three different cultivation systems emerged in these three worlds.

The biggest problem with this book is the lack of satisfying gameplay. The cheat system is too rudimentary and doesn't provide any positive feedback to the protagonist. In other words, the protagonist doesn't learn anything from it and can only rely on the cheat system's equipment to overpower others.

Maybe it's because I don't like the adventurous spirit of seeking fortune through risk, but the beginning was quite interesting. Suddenly, it all fell down the mountain due to a common trope, and then various conflicts ensued. Perhaps this is the difference between ordinary people and protagonists: one wants to take the civil service exam for a stable income, while the other navigates the turbulent business world as a trendsetter of the times.

Ordered so many, only to find out it was a eunuch? What bad luck!

Don't write about a purely Taoist sect; it's illogical. The struggle between different Taoist lineages is no less intense than a world war. Besides, the biggest drawback of cultivation is its slowness; otherwise, people wouldn't have such long lifespans. Also, the protagonist learns too many different things.

You can't make the original; the original is in the primordial era. At best, you can only make a high-quality replica.

A piece of trash is a piece of trash, and a eunuch is a eunuch.

The update schedule has changed from once a day to once every two days, so it's probably about to be cut off. I'll just leave it on hold and read it once it's finished. If it's cut off, I'll move it to another page.

Try to include more scenes of crafting magical artifacts. What attracts us to this book is the creation of various primordial magical artifacts and their use to manifest divine power. Don't write too much about cultivation and comprehension of laws. The chapters on comprehension of laws feel a bit weak, as you weren't very good at it. However, the chapter on Qingyun is very well written.