Fan Jin's Ordinary Life

The author's writing style is very good, surpassing 95% of the starting point authors. But there is a problem. The plot arrangement is very strong and the key driving points are not logical enough. This problem becomes more obvious as you go to the back. The protagonist is a poor man with no background. He has not yet become an official, but he takes all kinds of risks and makes mischief everywhere. If it weren't for the protagonist's aura given to him by the author, he would have died a hundred times. Every time you take such a big risk and achieve meritorious service, but because you have no fame and fame, you can't get any share of the credit. The risks are obviously far greater than the benefits. Then you might as well use that system to become a great talent. The risks are much lower and the benefits are not low. This kind of plot happened so many times that I was tired. After meeting Zhang Juzheng's daughter, she let herself go even more, and various forced plots appeared. Smallpox is even more outrageous. Taking Zhang Juzheng's daughter directly to the quarantine area is no longer a sign of wisdom. If her daughter gets sick, the Zhang family will not let the protagonist go. There was no foreshadowing for Zhang's maid to harm others, and the heroine was treated lightly. Instead of arranging for the protagonist to come to the rescue, she would have been cooked beforehand. No one can learn from Jin Baoyi. The plot arranged here for Zhang Juzheng's daughter is purely forced and toxic.

Although everyone praises the truth, even if the man is really like this, the reality is annoying. I really hate it when you clearly don't like others, yet you make them enjoy their efforts with peace of mind. She is not some rich lady who spends a small fortune to support a pretty boy. She gives everything she can, even wishing to use her own flesh and blood to support the male protagonist. So even if this girl is not good-looking, you can stay away, but please don't hurt her. Such a cute and kind-hearted young lady makes people feel so sad that they want to hug her so that she will never feel sad again.

It makes my balls hurt to read it. What kind of literary work do you expect from a novel? This protagonist is a top-notch scumbag. If you don't love him, then don't hurt him. If the dog meat seller and the butcher's daughter look different, it's another story. Then he becomes a toad selling dog meat and wants to eat swan meat. The butcher's daughter beats the mistress. The protagonist will definitely help the good-looking one. The butcher's daughter keeps helping you. The protagonist has no conscience. You don't need to explain it clearly! ! ! OK! ! ! Still hanging, disgusting! ! ! ! !

Sister Hu's true thoughts as a woman are that even if the original Fan Jin didn't win the election, he would at least be devoted to others and be better than this modern scumbag from time travel.

Too many people who spray this book only have a self-righteous "knowledge system" and a self-concealed rich "experience". Take academic qualifications as an example. There are so many undergraduates, but they account for less than 5% of the total population. It used to be Baidu, but now Weibo and Douyin have become their encyclopedias. Can you expect these people to abandon their "correct" "framework" when they see something realistic. To put it into perspective, many people live in a monotonous and narrow two-dimensional world throughout their lives and have no contact with reality at all. But their knowledge is enough in that little piece of life.

In the end, men still look at the appearance... Then if Madam Hu and Gorou Xishi change their looks, I'm afraid it won't be a different story.

Fortunately, I gave up the game as soon as possible after watching the ending. The meaningless stallion article has neither technological, ideological changes nor institutional progress. The protagonist is still an extreme egoist

I found that those who wrote the imperial examination papers of the Ming Dynasty all liked widows. Several of them were similar, like the number one scholar from a poor family. What is the necessity for widows to submit imperial examination documents? ? ?

If you practice Ma Zhe in reverse, his intention is to be punished, so this book should be sealed.

There are five works by the author in total, and there is also a Republic of China-type time-travel "The Warlord" that was clamped by pliers. The harem to save the country is a real feature, and you have to taste it. Of course, people who can't stand it can find fault with everything they look at. .

It's really disgusting to watch. I have a wrong outlook on life. I like widows.

Very disgusted: Fan Jin is written as a "walking genital"! Go to bed when you see a woman! ? Are you writing this content to make up chapters to trick people into subscribing? Since you are already an official of the imperial court, you must have an official appearance and do some serious work! ! ! Does the author lack women in real life? ? ?

My IQ is on the line, but I feel like I don't fit in like Fan Jin! Pig's trotters didn't even pass the exam to be a scholar, and they did a lot of bad things! If the pig's trotters are really so clever, they should have the primary goal of winning the election! Don't do too many extraneous things and try not to deviate from the original plot!

What does this book say? The author is very knowledgeable. At least unlike some historical articles that are full of errors, what he writes is very well-founded and tenable. But the system you introduced in Chapter 16 really caught me by surprise. I always felt like you added it temporarily.

I particularly hate this Sister Hu. A few pieces of pig water, a little favor, in exchange for so much, it is a huge profit. Many people have misunderstood the author. The protagonist accepts her love and takes advantage of her because he values ​​feelings and cannot bear to abandon her. Otherwise, if you can help the third sister to make up for it, how can you really be embarrassed by this little thing at home? When it comes to helping, Sister Hu also helped: the original Fan Jin. As for after time travel, who can appreciate her? And this woman is very smart. She sticks to her all day long for fear of being dumped. That is, the protagonist still has a conscience, so she is given a chance. And the greedy faces of her family members. It was obviously his daughter who was behind the scenes, but he always wanted to gain profits by selling her daughter. The protagonist is still not cold-blooded enough, otherwise she would just be rejected.

The writing is good, but the plot is so bad, it's like a cutting board made of rosewood. It's such a pity.

Sleeping with the prime minister's daughter, and then embarking on the road of Qingyun? Damn, at most he is a Ming Dynasty version of Qi Tongwei! 🤭

I originally thought I had discovered a good story, and I was overjoyed. This kind of darkness is about pursuing an official career, and the IQ of the supporting characters is also online. Unfortunately, after adding the system, it is still a harem story. In the later period, it is all about love and love, widows, and peasant women. Why

What a disgusting plot. I'm not a good examiner. I go back and forth with several women all day long. The author lacks love.

The author is also awesome. The protagonists written by others are at least lovable. When the author writes the protagonist, he must first screen a wave of readers and purify them.

I wrote 2.46 Million, and it was only level 1 when I left the circle. Does the author reflect on this? The woman advocated that Shunqing's temper was really bad. She scolded Fan Jin directly in public, "Tuisi, you are really..." In a reprimanding tone. Even modern women rarely scold their husbands like this outside. I don't know how bad Zhang Juzheng's tutoring is? Or do you love your daughter who is lawless?

The protagonist is a garbage man

It was really uncomfortable to watch the plot of Sister Hu. Sister Hu is so pitiful and the main character behaves sexually.

Also, I love to read comments when I read books. The comment section is full of talented people, everyone expresses their own opinions, and all kinds of comments are very interesting. I often laugh out loud when I read it. I have been laughing for ten years, and I have to add 2 bowls to my meal.

The author writes well, and the characters' personalities are well portrayed. There must be a standard. For example, Sister Hu is not kind but has a good heart. If she had not helped Fan Jin's family, even if there were villagers to support her, she would only help them in learning and ignore their daily life. Fan Jin's family would have starved to death, and even after the male protagonist traveled through time for 2 years, the house still leaked. , It means that the male protagonist is of no use in the front, so the author must regard Sister Hu as the first wife. This is gratitude and the standard of life. Later, Miss Zhang can be the equal wife, so this male protagonist will be lovable. An ungrateful person will be rejected by everyone.

After reading many comments, the most annoying thing is the protagonist's outlook on life. Most of the people who criticized this book after reading it are probably the student gang. As far as I'm concerned, some of the concepts are actually kind of funny. When you step into society, there are countless monsters and monsters under high-pressure competition. Why should people fight to make a living for themselves? At the beginning of the book, the protagonist Fan Jin is actually a trapped cow and horse eager to make progress. If you want to get ahead, you must be bound by actual interests and be ruthless: I can't live any longer, and soon countless dogs will come up to bite you. What kind of integrity do you want? Okay, you are not from an official family, so you are not qualified to be promoted. Fan Jin's little character situation at the beginning is that a dog will attack other dogs desperately, trying desperately to let its master know that it is worthy of the meat you give. So I don't have any problem with the protagonist being like a dog, but put down your phone and take a look, maybe you do too? This is not shabby, this is life. The only difference is that many of us cannot have the progressive moments in novels. I have also read a lot of real-life books, and this one is indeed toxic in its female characters, so there is no need to force it. But this book is indeed the pinnacle of real people (I personally really like Jin Yi Xiao Ao Xing, at least the protagonist looks like a human being)

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I feel like I don't have much sense of involvement in several big plots.

After reading it again, I felt happy and sad. It would be great if all the pits were filled. Although it has some flaws, it is a book that I really enjoyed reading.

In fact, most people who read online articles like to raise their hands to control the wind and rain, and open their mouths and bow their heads. Including having a harem, 99% of readers will definitely not be able to accept wearing women's clothes and licking the heroine, and cooks Zheng and Qian Caiyin, let alone C, I am afraid that readers will be disgusted by holding small hands with other men. The author has nothing to say about the writing style, which is a bit like Riverside During the Qingming Festival. The poor performance of this book is entirely because the audience is too small, but I really think this book is worth reading three times 😍