Hunting in the Ziwu Ridge, 1983

The protagonist has no redeeming qualities whatsoever. His family relationships are fraught with conflict, and when the family splits, he gets the worst possible share. And then he tries to forgive and forget, but his own suffering is irrelevant; his wife and children's suffering is what truly matters.

A wheat harvester wrote 30 chapters! Who gave you the courage to start with such a weak opening? Over sixty people went to the toilet, first showing disgust, then falling down, then being stripped naked by his wife and awkwardly frozen in place? Did you time-travel at age 6? Did you end up in a dog's body? How can someone so childish time-travel?

My new book is out! It's written from the author's independent perspective, so I don't know how well it's written. Feel free to leave comments; I'll reply to almost every one. I'm getting old and talkative, so I'll respond to every comment.

I've read up to chapter 30, and I'm truly impressed; it's too drawn out. I specifically checked the comments, and since they're all negative, I'm relieved.

This is completely nonsensical... A person from level 68 is reborn and goes back to dry wheat; everyone else is fine except him, who gets flooded. He gets a few rabbits and wants to buy a bicycle... And sells it for over a hundred yuan? What does that even mean? A hundred-pound pig might not even sell for a hundred yuan! This was 1983! Pork was considered lucky to sell for six or seven mao (0.6 Or 0.7 Yuan)! What are you thinking?!

Aside from the Northwestern accent in the way you address each other, there's nothing else. All three of your brothers are good, so why were you the worst when the family divided the property? Your brothers are good, but you didn't say a word? Your parents didn't treat you equally, and you think it doesn't matter that you got the worst share?

Chapter 42 is still reminiscing about the past, about his son, daughter-in-law, and the wheat harvest taking up most of the time. The wild rabbits and pheasants he caught didn't elicit much reaction from his family. And couldn't you just write properly? Why use dialect? 🙂🙂

I'd like to ask everyone, is my writing superficial or not? In some places, I might have written a bit too much to be detailed, is that right? Feel free to leave a message if you have any questions! The author's initial intention was simply to write a good book and try to tell you the story of the 1980s in their own words.

Seeing that wild rabbit was three yuan a pound made me want to stop looking; it was outrageous. Even bear meat wasn't three yuan a pound in the 1980s, and rabbit meat had no fat or oil; who would eat it? It was better to buy bear meat. Back then, pork was only a few cents a pound, and rabbit meat was three yuan a pound? In the 1980s, wild rabbits weren't as tasty as farmed ones because they lacked fat and oil. It wasn't until the 1990s that wild rabbits tasted better than farmed ones.

Too wordy! I've read dozens of chapters and they haven't even actually gone hunting yet. Then why did you choose this title? Author is awesome!