Hunting in the Qinling Mountains, 1983

The pace is too slow and the plot sequence doesn't make sense. The chapter on cotton shoes should be written later. Wouldn't it be better to transport the pigs back first to make the readers happy, and then to sensationalize it?

It's all flashy and fancy, and the web article is just a straightforward narrative, so there are so many twists and turns There are too many characters at once, it makes my head hurt to read it,

Change the name, call it Lao Niu's day. Chapter 16 of the Chronology is here and I'm still writing about one day's events

There are 49 chapters in total. The first two chapters are about hunting, and the rest are all bullshit. How can we keep people watching?

Great God, we signed the contract just one day after launching! Got it! Can someone please give me some pointers as to what is missing in my three golden chapters? It has been posted for four days, and there is no sign of the signing at all. It seems to have come before, but it also seems to have never come. "Why Borrow Eternal Life?"

The logic is a bit confusing and I can't keep up with my thinking.

The time between hunting and returning home is too long to write. You can go hunting two or three times, but you cannot write so many chapters.

If you have anything to say about this book, you are welcome to give suggestions, advice or criticisms. The author will read them carefully and adopt them. Thank you.

The new book "Dream Back to 1983: Survival of Fishermen and Hunters" has been released. If you are interested, take a look. The pace of the story has accelerated.

Boss, your taste for serious literature is too strong.