Pushing All the Heavens: Starting from Becoming a Disciple of Huashan

The more you write, the more outrageous it becomes. The protagonist is eight years old and Linghu Chong is 11 years old. Lao Yue asked them to go down the mountain to suppress the bandits. How many times can Linghu Chong swing a sword at this age? How tall is his wingspan? How long does the light function last? If you know how to use concealed weapons or crossbows, it's still possible. Are two melee players playing tricks on each other? Are they really mindless? When the ninja in the little life next door goes on a mission, the veteran guides the newcomer to explain it all the way, and it is said that when it comes to the protagonist, he can use his own subjective initiative.

In fact, if you know that you can see the meaning of the book after reading it a hundred times, don't always think about practicing Kung Fu. Instead, just learn Huang Shang's own Kung Fu method and read as much Taoist canon as possible.

He's only nine years old😦😦😦

The people of the Sword Sect joined the Huashan Sect more than ten years in advance. If the protagonist had not traveled through time, disciples like Linghu Chong would have been arrested, Huashan would have been exterminated, and there would be no time travellers to drive the Sword Sect. There would still be more than ten years before the plot begins. According to the original plot, it ended before it even started?

That's outrageous. And why is the protagonist so used to Linghu Chong?

Poisonous! ! When I came down from the mountain at the age of nine, I started with the Three-Character Classic, the entire Huang Ting Jing, and the Tao Te Ching too! ! He began to cause trouble everywhere since he was very young, for fear of having a stable living environment. This golden finger was developed by practicing ethics, not by killing animals for points.

This golden finger can definitely develop well, there is no need to be in such a hurry, and Huashan Mountain should be semi-closed at that time, and Feng Qingyang is the guardian of Huashan Mountain. The previous head of Huashan must have known about him, and even his task of guarding the mountain was arranged by him. It's just that he left too early and there were some hidden clues that were not handed over to Yue Buqun, otherwise it wouldn't be so difficult for Yue Buqun.

I don't know if it's because the author has changed it or because he's not familiar with the original work. The timeline is obviously wrong and it's uncomfortable to watch. When Ren Woxing was still in office, Zuo Lengchan didn't know the Ice Qi at all. This thing was invented after Zuo Lengchan and Ren Wo suffered a loss in the last battle. In addition, years ago Regarding age, Linghu Chong was about 25 or 26 years old at the beginning, and Yue Lingshan was about 18 years old. Therefore, Yue Lingshan was already born when Linghu Chong became a disciple. In addition, from the time Ren Woxing stepped down to the beginning of the timeline, it was actually twelve years. The author made it twenty years, which is outrageous.

If you don't write fan fiction, you should still read it. At least read the original novel, but if you can't, watch the TV series.

The writing is good, but Linghu Chong is portrayed as a bit of a villain. I hope there will be time to change his character later. After all, the relationship between Linghu Chong and his senior brothers in the novel is very good, and they will not laugh at each other 😅

My writing is too immature, please practice it slowly.

As an adult, having traveled through time for so long, the sadness and shock have long passed. He has no central control at all. Why doesn't the author let his wife feed him oral milk?

The magic transformation is serious, the timeline is messed up, and it is extremely poisonous.

This gold finger is very good, but it is useless. It is a very high-level gold finger. Low martial arts can be transformed into high martial arts and cultivation. The Taoist scriptures do not read the Three Character Classic, but also involve Huashan terrain and martial arts. Travelers have just begun to understand martial arts. When we see the sea, we can say, oh sea, you are all water, which is very good. Quanzhen can be traced back to Zhang Boduan, the founder of inner elixir, who said: Once a golden elixir is swallowed, I will know that my fate is not in control. Huashan is also well-known to the world because of the famous ancestor Chen Chuan. Everyone should know his fetal breath method, which is also the sleeping method. The Taoist Zhixuan Chapter is this method. Travelers with golden fingers know that they can transcend, but what have you done? Not laying the foundation for transcendence. This golden finger is obviously not prepared for low-level martial arts. As a result, the overlord gun has no progress. The writing is broken. There are too many dialogues throughout the article. , It's hard to swallow, I'm jumping to read it, I won't talk about the Ping Japanese Imperial Guard and so on. You have become a god later. Is it necessary to write like this? It is obvious that the path of martial arts cultivation is good. Do it well. It is an absolute divine book. Your writing is not bad, but the result is this result

The poison has been tested, and the plot is progressing too fast

Brainlessly obscene, written as one pleases, with a junior high school writing style

Goldfinger is good, but the plot you wrote, author, is really outrageous and toxic.

Author, if you are writing about Swordsman, can you briefly explain the original work? Is it okay to smooth out the timeline before writing?

The protagonist is a gangster. It's okay to kill all the immortals in the snow. Those are parasites. The immortals in the world of gods are at least responsible and interact with humans. Except for Buddhism, the protagonist just can't stand it. He hates the sky, the earth, and the air.

What did I spend money to read in these chapters?

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Although Linghu Chong has deceived his relatives in various ways as a result of his behavior, generally speaking, he will not scold others for being nosy like in Chapter 19. Don't change his character casually.

I withdrew it when I saw the chapter about being a court hawk.

I particularly like Goldfinger novels, but there are very few that I can read. What a pity.

The road is long and long, and I will search for it from top to bottom. Let's work hard and encourage each other!