Longevity in Martial Arts: Starting from Becoming a Disciple of Huashan

I'm a little confused, this is a novel. At the age of 10, at the beginning of his apprenticeship, Yue Buqun grabbed his throat and questioned him. It was outrageous.

Chapter 3 wants to change the fate of the junior wife and junior junior sister, which shows that the protagonist is kind-hearted, but the protagonist wants to win over Yilin, Lan Fenghuang, Ren Yingying... It feels very obscene. Many authors have limited creative ability and cannot write about joys and sorrows, so they rely on obscenity to attract readers, which ruins the book.

Don't like this start. Near Songshan Mountain, travel thousands of miles to kneel and lick Huashan Mountain? What does Huashan have? Don't talk about the Zixia magical power. Zuo Lengchan also created his own secret book to develop ice-attribute internal power. He is a true Taoist master. And Yue Buqun strangles people's necks when he comes up? This is written to forcefully subjugate one's wits. Is this the name of the Gentleman's Sword? Even if he is insidious, he will not show it to the surface and will only test it secretly. I can't stand it any longer, so I recommend an overhaul. I really recommend any book. Has the editor been depraved too?

The topic is martial arts longevity, but it turns out that the story is about a young junior sister who is not yet born, and a nun who is a witch. The emotional person Linghu Chong is the prodigal son of Huashan, and you are the voluptuous demon of Huashan!

You can't stand scrutiny. Yue Buqun must have turned bad in the later period, but at this time he is not considered a bad person or he is a person who cherishes feathers. It is impossible to say that he will ruthlessly kill the protagonist as soon as they meet. This is inconsistent with other people's settings. Secondly, Linghu Chong is a prodigal, not a bastard; he is uninhibited, free and easy, not a fool; he is loyal, a good person, not a fool. Finally, when writing about the protagonist entering Huashan, we can't write Huashan so poorly at this time, otherwise why would the protagonist have traveled all the way?

I don't think you should think of Yue Buqun so darkly.

What do you think? In ancient times, sects also paid attention to family background and household registration when recruiting disciples. You are near Songshan Mountain and went to Huashan Mountain to become a disciple. Putting aside the troubles of transportation and household registration transfer in ancient times, do you think Yue Buqun has lost his mind and will accept you? Even if I accept you, I will probably regard you and Laudenuo as Zuo Lengchan's secret accomplices. Moreover, what's wrong with Songshan? In terms of running the sect and the centripetal force of the sect, Songshan is the strongest! If you don't pay close attention to Songshan Mountain and go to Huashan Mountain instead of going far away, how much water must be put into your brain to reach Huashan Mountain? Songshan Zuo Lengchan lost because his structure was not big enough and his defense against Shaolin and Wudang was not sufficient. It can be said that Zuo Lengchan's opponent in the entire novel was not the four sword sects such as Huashan, but the two giants of Shaolin and Wudang! The tone of the original novel is actually that the second-tier sect wants to become a first-class force like Shaolin Wudang. There is Huashan in front of it. In its heyday, it needs personal force and a master of swordsmanship like Feng Qingyang. In terms of overall talent, Huashan is full of talents. However, Southern Shaolin directly played a game of killing three with two peaches and took a copy of "Sunflower Collection" to split up Huashan. It also stood on the moral high ground, causing Huashan itself to be embarrassed to talk about it! As Huashan declined, Songshan took over and rose. Compared with Huashan, Songshan had a stronger centripetal force, and with Zuo Lengchan sitting in the middle, Songshan's rise was much more stable than Huashan. There were top masters like Zuo Lengchan at the top, the Thirteen Taibao of Songshan as the backbone, and powerful disciples at the bottom to take over. Outside, there were various green forest and underworld masters as foreign aid. It is more stable than the original Huashan and has a more solid foundation. Especially the backbone of Songshan such as Zuo Lengchan has an online IQ. The threat of this sect is much greater than the sudden rise of Huashan. This is why Shaolin demolished Huashan with the help of the Sunflower Book. But when it came to Songshan, it was Shaolin and Wudang who joined forces and destroyed the Shaolin family once before Songshan was finally conquered. This kind of sect refuses to worship and goes to Huashan to find Huashan, which is the least capable of teaching disciples. How much water does it take to make this decision? Unless your plug-in is bound to Huashan, or you live near Huashan, there is really no need to worship Huashan, it makes no sense. If you have cheats, you may have a chance to get the lost swordsmanship of the Wuyue Sword School from Si Guo Cliff. As for the Dugu Nine Swords, it is actually a cheat for the protagonist, which means that other than the protagonist, others cannot practice it. There is absolutely no need to practice Dugu Nine Swords. The novel has made it clear that Dugu Nine Swords is indeed the strongest swordsmanship in the novel, but Linghu Chong, who practices swordsmanship, is not the strongest. He has the highest spirituality in his own swordsmanship and is qualified to learn Dugu Nine Swords. However, according to Feng Qingyang's internal strength qualifications, if he wants to compete with the top masters in the world, the so-called heroes of the world, he will have to practice hard for twenty years! Just look at Dongfang Bubai's battle and you will understand. At that time, Linghu Chong relied on the Star Absorbing Technique to make up for the shortcomings of internal strength. However, he could not defeat Aunt Dongfang with a single sword. His brain said I could break it, but his hands said I couldn't keep up! So, do you need to learn Dugu Nine Swords? Not needed.

My life is innocent! Big brother. Dengfeng was still so young when he went to Huashan, so it looked suspicious. With Yue Buqun's character, would he really accept a disciple? Would you believe that Yue Buqun could travel from Henan to Shaanxi at such a young age? In ancient times, going out was not like today. You didn't need a guide. Even if you were walking in the wild, it was not peaceful in ancient times. There were robbers and beasts everywhere. How should the protagonist deal with it? I hope the author can fill in the gaps

What kind of exquisite swordsmanship does a trashy low-level martial artist like Swordsman Jianghu need? The so-called Dugu Nine Swords is just a kind of skill. To put it bluntly, it is a move that calculates the weakest point to attack and achieves a small force against others. Why do you look down on Xiaoao Jianghu's low martial arts? The evil-proofing sword technique only increases the attack speed and enters the first sequence. The main character is powerful because of his high overall physical fitness. In other words, your physical speed may be faster than the evil-proofing sword technique. What the hell are you afraid of? In the original work, Linghu Chong didn't have much internal strength and was able to kill a group of masters simply by relying on his skill with the Dugu Nine Swords.

The poisonous point in the first chapter is to get someone from the foot of Songshan Mountain and travel a long distance to Huashan Mountain to become a disciple. Just go directly to the foot of Huashan Mountain. If you like Linghu Chong, you may not like him. I have reiterated this several times! Mother-in-law's!

Many people use the protagonist of online novels as a template to evaluate Yue Buqun. They believe that the protagonists of online novels gradually evolve in strength and personality as the plot develops, but they ignore the age issue. Some of the protagonists of time-travel novels who are already adults have to go through such a "secondary development of character" process. This is quite ridiculous, let alone Yue Buqun, a veteran who has been "cooked" before the plot develops, how can he change? Change it to pi, and the ending will be the same as the beginning. Personality changes are just for little kids.

Yue Buqun was forced to go to a dead end by pressure. Huashan is in danger and its own strength is insufficient. Yue Buqun reciprocated his expectations🙍The eldest disciple was careless, obviously very talented, but unfortunately he just didn't work hard. And causing trouble everywhere. Didn't Yue Buqun know about the situation in Huashan that the Qingcheng faction destroyed the Fuwei Escort Bureau? He knows, but does Huashan have the strength to take care of these things? If Linghu Chong wants to take care of it, can you practice martial arts well and become the best in the world? After learning the Dugu Nine Swords, Feng Qingyang refused to tell anyone even if it was not allowed. How could he be worthy of his master and his wife who had raised him for more than ten years? Is it okay if I can't express it and imply it? Are you just being stubborn and colluding with people from the Demon Sect, for fear that Zuo Lengchan won't find an excuse? A Quyang Zuo Lengchan can save the entire Liu family. Just by doing what Linghu Chong did, Zuo Lengchan was able to destroy the Huashan Sect. So Linghu Chong is a white-eyed wolf.

I like Xiaoao fan very much. When I was young, I thought Linghu Chong was very cool. In middle age, I think Linghu Chong is a scumbag! Lao Yue is such a good person, what a pity! Good people cannot survive. Sorry, I don't quite agree with the author's understanding

A common problem in fan martial arts novels is that the protagonist likes to practice all the powerful martial arts. Aren't martial arts novels all about practicing internal skills? You said you were the protagonist I read a Tianlong fan before. The protagonist taught Beiming Shen Gong, Xiao Wu Xiang Gong, Yi Jin Jing, Jiu Yin Zhen Jing, Nine Yang Zhen Sutra, and even the Shen Zhao Jing. I wanted to scold him, but I was too lazy to complain! A martial arts novel that can train a book of internal strength or martial arts to the point of becoming powerful is already very impressive, look at Qiao Feng Take Xiaoao as an example, if Yue Buqun can perfect the Zixia magic skill, is it not better than the evil-fighting sword manual?

The protagonist is so awesome, he brags about how many people he has trained every day and how well he has trained him. Don't be so ridiculous. You practiced by yourself, how could you teach so many people? Everyone's physique is different, otherwise how could there be such a thing as bones? It is made as if it can be taught casually, but it is second-rate at every turn. If you want to say this, others who have worked hard for decades are not as good as you can say a few words.

By the time I got around chapter 20, I was like a good guy! An eight-year-old with second-rate internal strength and swordsmanship that puts even Lao Yue to shame! Just showed it to Zuo Lengchan like this? Do you think Zuo Lengchan doesn't dare to touch you? Do you think you are invincible? Does it make you look awesome to beat your own senior brothers to a pulp in front of the disciples who are the leaders of various sects in the world?

Linghu Chong has always been a very problematic person. He thinks he is right, but his mind is actually confused. As long as he masters the correct method of using Linghu Chong, he will basically be sold and pay for others. The one who knows how to use Linghu Chong the most is Xiang Wentian. The method of use is as follows: 1. Show your skills to make Linghu Chong feel that this person is great. 2. Drink with Linghu Chong and compliment him a few words. 3. Ask him for help, but never tell him everything. 4. After tricking him, make up a so-called good reason for him and apologize sincerely. Then Linghu Chong not only doesn't care about it, but also feels grateful. Actually, Ren Woxing understands Linghu Chong's user manual, but he is used to being strong and domineering, and sometimes he doesn't want to use it. But Yue Buqun doesn't understand! It's not surprising that fathers sometimes don't understand their children as well as outsiders, because it is naturally difficult for fathers to detect their children's independent personality, especially for strong fathers. When it comes to dealing with rebellious children, you usually choose to preach rather than cajole. Yue Buqun trained Linghu Chong as his heir. The kindness of raising and teaching him for more than ten years was not as good as a few bowls of wine and a few flattery from outsiders. This has to be said to be ironic.

Can the first author have some geographical knowledge? Songshan Mountain is close to Huashan Mountain? A teenage child can go to Huashan Mountain safely and safely, which really challenges other people's social experience. The second suspicion is that the author has only read TV series or fan fiction. Hei Yue Buqun has no lower limit, and heroes do not care about their deeds. Yue Buqun behaves in front of his own palace and is a flawless gentleman. He is a person who is highly respected by Master Dingxian. In front of others, he cannot do anything like pinching his neck and questioning a young boy who has no skills in front of others. If this were the case, Laudno would have died long ago.

My old man dares to accept Lauderno, but he is still afraid of your child? I don't have enough brain, right?

There's a lot of inner drama, too much self-pleasure!

Although Linghu Chong is unbearable, you are still drunk when you write him as a villain.

Yue Buqun is a bad guy, but he was actually forced to do so by Linghu Chong. Who of the disciples he accepts can shoulder the heavy responsibility of reviving the sect? If Linghu Chong has the ability and ability, he can continue to be Junzijian's assistant from generation to generation Therefore, if he becomes a disciple of Yue Buqun, not only will he not be suppressed, but he will really be trained and valued if he has ability.

The author writes that the protagonist is from Songshan, which I think is too close. It should be written that the protagonist is from America. He started from the Americas to Huashan at the age of 8 and went through a lot of hardships. 🤭🤭

Linghu Chong is just pedantic, not bad. This is a fan fiction. At least Yue Buqun is clearly the villain in the original work. From the five tyrants in the Yaowang Temple to the false accusation of Linghu Chong killing the sixth junior brother with the evil sword manual, and then to a lot of horse-drawing operations after cutting off the gg, why do so many people leave it alone without reading the original work?

The Song Dynasty was destined to perish. If we really wanted to destroy the Yuan Dynasty, we might as well think about how to destroy the Song Dynasty. A group of pig teammates in the court

If it hadn't been for what happened in the ruined temple, Yue Buqun might not have had the courage to practice swordplay in the palace. At that time, Yue Buqun himself could not save his family and apprentices. Linghu Chong tried to turn the tide, which caused Yue Buqun's mentality to change, and Linghu Chong hid it from himself.

Your updates are too slow. It's not enjoyable to read at all. It's too difficult to read and write. The writing is okay. If you update more, the results should be much better.

As soon as Chao Yu opened his eyes, he came to the golden age of the Northern Song Dynasty. Wealthy people walk in the village. Surrounded by his family's tenants and fields. "Chao Daguan, when are you going to rebel?" The surrounding villagers greeted cordially. Walter? Don't slander me, I'm warning you! ................ Chao Yao went to the county town to visit friends. "Brother Chao, when are you going to rebel?" A few heroes lifted their clothes, revealing various weapons inside. Faq, can you say and do this kind of thing casually? I have just become a member of a wealthy family, and I am not satisfied yet. ................ Chao Yu passed by the Yamen Gate. "Executive member Chao, when are you going to rebel?" The county officials asked kindly. Your sister, everyone knows this, how can I still rebel? ............ Who is it? Who keeps spreading. "Brother, it's me, Kogi Kurosaburo. Say it straight. This is my way of doing things. You don't have to thank me." What are you doing? You all know that I want to rebel, so can I succeed in rebelling? ................ But I never expected that Chao Yu succeeded in the end. ................ The government saw that he was eating, drinking and having fun every day, showing off his excessive debauchery and not taking any action, so they rushed to his home and hung a sign around his neck that read "The rebellion is successful, he is a huge bandit". They then ransacked his home, imprisoned him, put him on trial, and escorted him to the execution ground. The one-stop service was completed in the blink of an eye. ............ Chao Yan just came back to his senses and found that he had arrived at the entrance of the vegetable market, and the executioner's ghost-headed knife had been raised high. "Who keeps slandering me?" Chao Yan shouted. "Brother, it's me, Kogi Kurosaburo. I speak directly when I have something to say and never hide it. This is my way of life." ------------- "Ah!" Chao Yu woke up from his dream with a loud cry. Isn't it right? Shouldn't the protagonist be me? ...... Dear readers, do you want to come to "Water Margin of Destiny" to read and give some advice? ... I am occupying valuable space to promote it, and wish the author more than 10,000 updates every day, thank you.

The protagonist of Flowing Waters and Heavens, the iron-clad Yue Buqun

I just looked at the catalog. Will there be a big change as soon as I get married? What is this? How did you arrange the character of this book girl? In the middle of the wedding, she ran away and changed the map?