My Family's Cemetery Is Connected to the Game World

The idea is good, but there are too many flaws. Instead of having the protagonist use undead to overwhelm enemies, he's constantly tinkering with magic; supposedly he's trying to survive the emperor's retribution, yet he recklessly courts death right under the emperor's nose. There are tons of side quests later on, but the main plot isn't progressed at all, which is really discouraging for readers.

I've read so many books that choose the Undead route, and they're all just reskins. Changing the name and replacing the unit type makes no difference. The only advantage is convenience—no need to write about loyalty and food. While other races are rampant with advanced technology, the Undead are still relying on resources and recruitment cards.

Shocking! This protagonist actually has both parents alive!

First of all, I've never been an author before, but I want to say, is it really that hard to write 100 chapters a day? 🤔 I'm not being unreasonable, after all, as I said at the beginning, I've never been an author before.

This is supposed to be a secondary account for "The North"? I used to follow "Archangel" and "The Underachiever" all the way to the end, but their later books were either banned or canceled, so I gave up on them. Years later, I came across this book on "Daily Poison Guide" and genuinely liked it. But the updates became too slow later on, so I put it on hold. Now that I've come back and see it's supposed to be a secondary account for "The North," I don't know whether to be happy or worried. 🙄

The beginning seemed promising. But the family territory dispute dragged on and on for too long. They kept dragging their feet, avoiding any real fighting, which was truly frustrating.

It's so weak. What's the main plot? The protagonist goes to the game to level up and dawdles for ages without doing anything. He goes back to act like a saint and then gets slapped in the face, but still doesn't do anything. You can basically just read the titles of the 36 chapters. The plot is too messy. A whole bunch of random things happen. Each thing is only briefly mentioned. Basically, nothing gets done at all.

I strongly suggest that authors avoid writing about scheming or plotting. If you don't have the ability, pretending to be shrewd and calculating is very unpleasant to read.

I don't know if the author was unaware of the past or wrote it this way intentionally; it feels like they were just trying to lure casual viewers in.

The current plot feels very problematic. It's one thing to nurture a villain, but why not deal with her when it's time to eliminate her? The national powers in the player world are completely offline. They talk about how powerful the super guilds are, but they're actually less useful than the protagonist.