My Family's Cemetery Is Connected to the Game World

The idea is very good, but there are a lot of poisonous points. If you don't write about the protagonist using the undead to push the enemies, and tinkering with your magic every day; it is said that you are afraid of the emperor's liquidation, and you are crazy about dying under the emperor's nose.

I read a lot of books about choosing the undead route, and they are all traps. Changing the name to another troop type makes no difference. I just highlight the convenience of not having to write down loyalty and food. Technology is everywhere outside, and the undead race still relies on the number of resources to recruit cards. At least there is a spiritualism in the heroes and invincibles. In this way, there is no need to write undead. If you use orcs, there will be no conflicts in all the plots.

Shockingly, this protagonist actually has both parents!

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write 100 chapters a day? 🤔 This is not because I am being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I have never been an author.

Is this the true north trumpet? I originally followed Archangel and The Scumbag until the end, but the subsequent books were either sealed or cut, so I gave up on them. After a few years, I came across this book from Daily Daodu, and I really liked it. I picked up the book when I saw that it was too late. When I came back to read it, I said it was a trumpet from the north. I didn't know whether I was happy or worried 🙄

The beginning looked good to me. But the dispute over the family territory became too frustrating. Whether I can fight or not, I have been grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, grinding, and grinding.

It's too watery. What's the main plot? The protagonist went to the game to upgrade and spent a long time grinding and grinding but didn't do anything. He ran back to pretend to be a virgin and slapped him in the face and still didn't do anything. The content of Chapter 36 basically just read the title. The plot is too confusing. A lot of mess. Just do a little bit of everything. Basically it's like doing nothing.

I strongly recommend that the author not write about planning. If you don't have the strength to pretend to be cunning, it will be very uncomfortable to watch.

I don't know if the author doesn't know about the old days or if he wrote it like this on purpose. It feels like he's just tricking passers-by into it.

Now the plot feels like the problem is very big. It's okay to raise a villain, but why not solve her when it's time to solve her? The national forces in the player world are completely offline. They talk about super unions, but in fact they are not as useful as the protagonist. The country also did not clean up those players who had taken refuge with the villains. It allowed the villains to grow in size and did nothing at all. They talked about difficulties, but in fact they did not take any action. Especially that woman, you said she can use the power of the game, but no one in the country can use the power of the game? Her subordinates are all ranked brothers, are they awesome? You don't know why you have betrayed the world. What is the difference between this and the puppet soldiers going shopping in Yan'an? They also forcefully praise the protagonist. The country's important plans still rely on the protagonist. Because they are engaged in these important opportunities, they can't free up their hands? Are all the troops going to the game? Can all gamers have unlimited access to gaming abilities? The number one in the world is only rewarded for ten minutes. After the time has passed, isn't it one shot at a time? As a result, it became dependent on the protagonist to do all the tasks. The way it was written more than ten years ago is that the country is basically invisible and serves as a background, unable to contribute any force. It has high standards but cannot do anything. It is powerful but cannot do anything. Just bragging, all three worlds depend on the protagonist. Just say it as you like, be more thorough if you feel comfortable, or be more logical and self-consistent. You can't always ask readers to find rationality on their own. Of course these are subjective opinions, if you don't agree you can just pretend I didn't say it.