Return of the Lord of Fear

The writing is messy and there is no transition. It is commonly known as being sick.

It gives people a feeling of watching. There is no difference between reading the first chapter and reading more than 30 chapters.

😠 It feels like the author has thought a lot and made up a lot of settings in his head, but he didn't write them all when he wrote it. It's so confusing that he doesn't know what he's talking about, and the characters' appearances and exits are also unclear.

I just said there are so many discussion posts, but not a single comment in the chapter 😅

The writing is so poor that normal people cannot understand this book. I would like to mention that the dialogue in this book is simply outrageous. Every character seems to be the same person talking to himself, which is terrible. The author cannot understand the dialogue at all. Let me give you an example Ordinary authors write dialogues like this Xiao Ming looked embarrassed, "I didn't expect you to have this skill." Xiao Hong, "I have been guarding against you for a long time. Everyone knows Sima Zhao's intentions." Hold" This is the author's way of writing "I didn't expect you to have such a hand" "I have been guarding against you for a long time, everyone knows Sima Zhao's heart" "Despite this, you still can't defeat me" "Cricket Xiaoming, I really think I have a chance to win" Do you really think that readers can clearly tell who is talking? Your character itself has no personality. Apart from the difference in name, the tone and behavioral logic are the same. The dialogue description omits the speaker. Who can know who is speaking your line? And the world view is also incomprehensible. After reading more than 20 chapters, the world view gives the impression that the author sews whatever he thinks of. Some dishes are Northeastern stews, and some dishes are stewed like pig food. It's a dungeon again, and it's a BOSS hidden again. I don't see a big frame at all, it's all about sewing and the world view. The character itself cannot stand upright. The protagonist wakes up from a coma for a year, and his emotions are understandably weak. The other characters you wrote are also emotionally weak. Basically, you just changed the name of the protagonist, and the whole book is just the protagonist acting in a play by himself. None of the characters are differentiated at all. The only difference between them and the protagonist is their gender. I think there are still a lack of adjectives. If you add a few evil smiles to the villain, it will be considered a character. If you give the niece a few silly smiles or pursed lips, you can also see the mood swings. All the characters written by the author have no emotions. Even the passerby villains who come out to make faces are trying their best to be emotionless. It is really a three-point novel. It is hard to imagine that so many chapters can be written under such circumstances. It is really awesome.

What are you writing? It doesn't make sense.

The transition in this novel is quite abrupt. There is a lack of description of the environment, appearance and other scene items, and it is almost all psychological description + dialogue. The book's setting and plot are attractive, but it's a pity that the writing is lacking.

Animation and comics are well received. Novel, this style is completely unsuitable for novels

Well, the same old thing, layer after layer. You can all imagine what the next routine will be. (Shakes head and sighs)

A normal day. The first volume will be finished next week. If you have any questions about the setting and plot, you can ask in the building. The author will reply after reading it. 🙂

I don't know what's wrong with my novels in the past two years. I like the [] symbol so much + put a lot of data panels, so I can polish the plot. Hey... Couldn't it be written by AI?

Regardless of the country or city, you should generally avoid using your real name. To be honest, I feel embarrassed when I see it.

The settings are good, but the writing power is really lacking, so give it a try.

The story background and protagonist settings of the novel would be quite interesting if they could be expanded upon. However, the author's writing style is uncomfortable to read, the sentences are not fluent and there is a lack of emotional description, which makes the characters in the book look like a group of paralyzed people having a conversation.

The content is good but the writing style is not good The content is too confusing

I didn't understand the plot, I was confused. . .

The writing is so messy, and it's so tiring to read. I have to read everything someone said several times.

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