When the Weird Knocks on the Door, I Load the Villain System

Newbie author, newbie. So far so good.

Can't you name the protagonist? Or is this name too good? I have abandoned many books with this title because I always have the illusion that the next moment Bai Ye will pull out the Dragon Slayer Flash and kill everyone on the opposite side.

There is no need to write the story line of the falling star. I am not a great author. The more story lines there are, the more poisonous points there will be. The more poisonous points there are, the faster the eunuch will be. Just write about catching ghosts normally.

For me, a fan of Samsara Paradise, it's very funny, this white night is so watery

I have been reading this book, and I feel that the horror scenes are quite exciting, but the layout is not big enough. The author should be more liberal with his writing.

This scary atmosphere is very exciting, I'm really looking forward to it

I only read the beginning and the end (more than 110 chapters). There is nothing wrong with the writing, but there is a big problem with the plot, which makes both sides unwatchable. The problem lies here... First, why is there a live broadcast at the beginning? I don't think the author intended this book to be a short story. I suggest that the author should have some purpose in everything the protagonist does and take into account the consequences afterwards. So what is the purpose of live streaming? Fishing? It still makes money, but in the eyes of readers, the purpose of live broadcast is to expose oneself, but the article also says that it does not want to be exposed, which is more embarrassing. Second, there is too much written about the villain organization Xingyun and it is difficult to grasp it. I suggest that the author just write short stories one by one. This is a web novel, and the pace is brisk and easy to grasp. Third, in the latest chapters, what is he going to do in this department? Why is this pendant in their hands? It seems that he took the initiative to research it for them. He still can't get it back, and he's being attacked by others. He's so sick that he can't fight back? Brother, this is a novel, just for fun. If you write it like this, readers will think that they won't be able to read it if they don't go to war with that department directly and fight to the death. I know that the author put a lot of thought into writing this way, but it doesn't look good. It not only creates obstacles for the protagonist, but also creates obstacles for the readers. If you write so many chapters, a lot of people will be discouraged. I still suggest that the author works hard on the plot and makes it more enjoyable, rather than making it a thankless plot. That's all, if you don't agree, please continue.

The system as written is at its breaking point. The mission of the villain's extramarital escape system is actually to absorb ghosts, not because the protagonist legally robs ghosts! Moreover, the system has a petty temperament, which is not pleasant.

I have read almost 100 chapters, and I feel that the system is also a ghost. It's just the ball of light, which is the system. Personally, I feel that the runes on his surface are seals, and they are the authentic seals of Xuanmen. I feel that he will definitely attack the system in the end.

This is a city. It should be more scary 😏

You have to write a contrast between cuteness and horror. The front is scary, and the chasing behind is scary.