From the Integration of Yin and Yang to the Enlightenment of Eternity

Come on, I hope this work will get to the point soon, and won't lose readers like the first few pages that have nothing to do with the magic industry introduced in the introduction.

Gu Ning

The one that reminds me of 🐱 is Resurrection after Death. You need to kill the people who have seen the protagonist.

Mo Xuan

I really can't cut it anymore. It feels completely inferior to Omnic Advent. It's boring to watch.

This introduction makes the book half dead

My evaluation is: "Not as good as Mozhi. Not even worthy of carrying shoes."

It's better to write less emotional scenes. The same is true for the last book. It has a kind of illusion from ten years ago. The ideas are quite good and it is refreshing enough. It's just the emotion that makes me jump.

The writing is much worse than the previous one

But I still have to say that the barrier between Western fantasy and fantasy is still very thick.

I once read a novel in which the main character would take away the body of that person if he was killed.

You shouldn't change your name. The previous name is more recognizable.

It's a bit humorous to cry with joy after saving someone you just met.

There are two eunuchs, so why not finish the last book as quickly as possible? The author of the last book said that he had an idea and had planned how many words to write, but he ended up cutting it anyway. I vaguely remember the sentence "I'm in a hurry", which was really cool and cool. It's not unacceptable to become a quick-flow book. It can be written well and smoothly, and it can still have its own plot. I had to cut it and write this rag! If the water flows eastward, it will hate the iron but not become steel!

This book really doesn't work. You can refer to "Death for Life" and write "Kill Me If You Want" 😅

The understanding guys in the comment section are laughing so hard 😂👉

Go back and continue writing the last book, it will definitely be a masterpiece

Which group did the author submit to, or did he sign it from the editor? 😰

I feel very good after reading the four chapters. The author's writing style cannot be overemphasized. It would be great if he could always grasp the rhythm.

It's well written, I hope the author will update it soon

Brother, are you still there? 🙂🙂

Quarterly updates, one chapter per quarter

What kind of update is this? Is it a monthly update? .

Author, author, are you still there