Is This Cartoonist Mentally Ill?

I can't tell the difference between priority and priority. I just draw comics. What the hell is a game? Besides, it's too awkward for the protagonist to appear as a saint in front of others. Are you proud to be able to write code?

Gentlemen, after seeing chapter 541, and then taking a look at the two chapters 545+565, it is considered the finale. The story line is very complete, not a bad ending, just a smooth ending. As for the giant volume, it is an "extra chapter", a castrated version of the original text written by the author who is unwilling to be lonely and wants to write about current affairs. I read this book again when I had nothing to do today. The protagonist gets married and has a child, the masterpiece is completed, the apprentice becomes a apprentice, and the author just needs to change the ending slightly to finish it. LOL - Of course, this book is not that good. There are too many references to the original work in the middle and late stages. My evaluation is that it is better to read the male protagonist's modified version than to read the fandom stream directly, which is more engaging (ૢ˃ꌂ˂⁎)

The plot has a smooth rhythm and is worth watching

The paragraph comment limit of 150 words is placed here Why does it feel watery? I think there are the following points First, the description of details is insufficient, the key plot passes too quickly, and there is a lack of excitement. The Edgewalker, which was heavily foreshadowed in the early stage, did not make me feel enough impact when it was finished. Instead, my attention was distracted by things like anime adaptations, game adaptations, movie copyrights, and looking for family. In short: like a cow chewing a peony Second, readers had an early impression of Aoyama as an unconscious comic superman. I have high expectations. At the beginning of the novel, Aoyama abandons fame and fortune and the popularity of the comics is enough of a contrast. But now the plot development seems to have a tendency to return to the kingly way and upgrade the monster-killing style, which is a bit off topic Thirdly, there is a lack of a unique and creative world view. It seems that everything is a reflection of the real world. On the surface, it seems that we can save pen and ink and not make redundant descriptions, but the same three-dimensional stereotype is brought into the novel. The middle is to frame the imagination of the protagonist pretending to be slapped in the face. If you have no expectations, you can read it in ten lines at a glance Fourthly, it does not integrate the whole part. Many variables, such as "billionaire", "scientific genius", "world sensation" and "beauties surrounded", may bring new conflicts that can change the protagonist's mentality. However, these settings are thrown out in a short time without being derivative, and some old-fashioned pretending content cannot be used. Enough omission [Although there is a need for objective description, things must be made clear, but the reader's perspective follows the protagonist, and Aoyama's attitude can really determine how much emphasis should be placed on a matter], and there is a feeling of eagerness to shake off the burden Fifth, the description of some "minor" characters lacks a sense of reality, that is, everything outside the field of view is nothingness, and the interpersonal and social environment is very thin It's time to go to bed, so let's write this much first

Author, haven't you understood why your last book with the same comic theme was rejected? Please tell me about comics carefully, Mr. Wenzhao! Is everything centered around comics? Can you please stop writing about irrelevant things and reduce the number of words? Draw comics, editors are amazed, editorial staff are shocked, publish, readers are shocked, feedback, gain fame and money, draw comics... Just write according to this rhythm, don't touch anything else! Otherwise your book will be thrown into the street and you will be able to tj

I feel that as long as the plot is focused on comics, there is no need to include such a long life drama. It feels very useless and not many people like to read it.

As long as you don't write emotional dramas for the main character, and mainly write comics and are influenced by comics to go crazy in normal life, then this book just lacks popularity.

The protagonist is so decadent. I feel like I have a knot in my heart when I watch it. It's not refreshing to watch. It's obviously time travel + system + text copying and yet it's a 5 , the decadent male protagonist that was popular 6 years ago, it is such a cool theme, but it seems uncomfortable to write about a decadent protagonist. This copy of the article successfully stole the limelight, but when I turned around and saw the male protagonist's situation, I couldn't feel happy anymore. Also, why should I call him System Lao Deng? It sounds weird. I am a person who listens to books and rarely stares at them. Calling Lao Deng feels a bit too intimate😟

The previous comment has been deleted. Fortunately, I voted for it for a month before I speak (). I don't have much to say, so as to save the readers behind me: It's a new book by a newbie. There are quite a lot of flaws. The ideas are good, the writing is average, and the future is promising.

I'd give it a 7/10. It's quite enjoyable to watch. The plot of the comic and the events related to the comic are very well written. I almost couldn't sleep at night. But the emotional drama of daily life is too ordinary. In comparison, it is like decorating a chocolate cake with jelly beans. And my personal taste is that the emotional scenes are well written, so -3.

The sense of immersion is too bad. Except for cyberpunk, the feeling behind it is too watery.

This blockbuster made me, who had read the comics, not know what to read. There was a trick in the introduction. With your way of writing a book, you can just write a few chapters and I will go next door to read it before coming back here. This will prevent you from writing too many tricks and the original text will be regarded as plagiarized.

I came back and read dozens of chapters, and I really can't stand it anymore. It's okay for you to draw comics with a weak plot, and it's acceptable to make movies, special effects, and games. But the author is too ambitious, or there is no outline. He writes whatever comes to mind, and just does entertainment. If he insists on pursuing high technology and AI, you are putting the cart before the horse. I thought about it again, and now that I have written it all, let me talk about other content. The first drawback is the development of the Cyberpunk 2077 game. You can just set the background technology to be a little advanced, and then let the protagonist be a producer in name. You have to go out in person, and what is shown is not very clever, which only adds to the jokes. There is also Digital Life. When I saw this terminally ill fan for the first time, I thought I would make an easter egg in the game after the fan passed away. However, when you came to this, I was completely unmoved and even felt it was a bit unnecessary. Other minor problems are acceptable. I just hope that the next book will be well written. Even if it is longer like the plot of the parasitic beast, it doesn't matter. I just hope that I can concentrate on the main plot and not be like this one. The main plot is poorly written and no one subscribes. As a result, the branch plot is even worse. Finally, I suggest that the author read more novels of the same type to improve himself. After all, there are not many authors who are willing to write this kind of subject and are good at it these days.

Because of my fan value, I subscribed specifically to post comments. The beginning is about Zhang Zhangbuli committing suicide and returning to his hometown. If he wants to just click on it and jump down from a height of 100 meters, there are so many nonsense. He pulls it back and forth and mentions it repeatedly. What should you wear if you don't want to travel through time⁉

Goodbye Eri, but the live version of Tieba

I felt that Gu Qianli was a little annoyed and disliked her. At first I was just indifferent, but as I went on I became more and more disgusted with it, to the point where I felt it was an eyesore as soon as I appeared on the stage. To sum it up in one sentence, "Women affect my reading of comic plots and the speed at which readers praise the works." Another thing that makes me happy when reading this novel is that the comic resonates with the readers, and they either cry or express various opinions. The discussion was in full swing, which made me feel happy. But lately this woman is all about love. Other readers from Chainsaw Man: "This protagonist is so miserable!" "Miss Makima~" "Dreams are high or low!" Gu Qianli: "Could it be said that Qingshan likes me?" "Did other women do this to Aoyama before?" Other readers from Yanquan: "Yeah Well, it's about to be a royal revenge plot~" "Let Agni die like this!" "Living is painful! Revenge is also painful!" Gu Qianli: "Does Qingshan like girls who smoke? I have some ideas..." How unexpected is her love-minded idea among a bunch of readers who are happy and sad for the comic! It's simply an out-of-tune moment in the perfect chorus! Noise! So I'm annoyed with her now. Just like when I used to watch shounen comics and see a vase heroine who would only hold her back and become a nymphomaniac. Can the author write less about love? I really hate love brains. She's now getting in the way of me reading reader reactions and the main character's pretense.

See you again in the world... I should have skipped over the plot, but after the Dragon Clan is over, there is another 2.5 Enlightenment... Nothing can be changed, right? And I can't even finish a chapter describing this kind of plot... It's watery and boring -.-

It can be seen that the author is really a big fan of Jiangnan, and he also has a lot of resentment and regrets about "Dragon", but can't we stop mentioning "Dragon" all the time? Good guy, "EVA" has come out like "Dragon" 😅. Although I know it is the difference in the order of publication in the novel, I am so speechless 🤔

When I draw comics, I focus on the comic part. I start making games, composing music, and looking for relatives out of nowhere. The key to writing is that I have the feeling of being a saint in front of others. Others think that you know a hammer when you draw comics, and then the main character pretends to be a b. The taste is too strong. Even if you want to branch out, it is related to the comic industry or comic exhibitions and other work-related branches. If you don't know that you are watching Xiaohu Returns Home when you start a line about finding a family, you will think that you are watching Xiaohu Returns Home.

Why did the author write this book to promote comics? Or write a novel? If it's the former, then of course you can write whatever you want. If it's the latter, then the ratio of the original work to the plot of the novel is really too much (I haven't seen the paid chapters, but the author said it is 3:1 in the free chapters). What do readers want from reading this book? The author probably doesn't think that his dozens of chapters of the original work can be condensed to reflect the original work's splendor and character descriptions and give readers a sense of empathy, right? Take Edgewalker as an example. Those who have never watched the animation will not be too touched by the deaths of Rebecca and David. I won't blow up Arasaka Tower again because of the original text of these dozens of chapters. For readers who have read the original work and can sympathize with it, how do they feel when they see this long section of the original plot? (I personally skipped it, after all, I already know the ending) Is this embarrassing? What is the use of this long section of the original work to readers? You can write one or two exciting clips, and then express through the audience the emotions that everyone feels about that clip in reality. It is not necessary to write out the foreshadowing of the original work, it can be directly brought out by passers-by in one sentence. Readers who are attracted may read the original work, while readers who are not attracted can quickly skip the plot description of the original work. As a reader, I originally read this novel as a story, but when I was halfway through the free chapter, I found that I was reading a little novel interspersed with the original plot. If the author wrote this novel (jealousy) for the original dumpling, wouldn't it be better to use a comprehensive novel?

I wrote about where the game deviated from the theme, and the comic took too long to write.

I think the data should have started to decline since the Dragons HD ending. It's too subjective and fan-oriented.

And you get more than a dozen kinds of gifts 🤔 at one time. It's so baffling. This is not how gifts are given.

Generally, if there are no accidents, one chapter will be updated at 9:00 in the morning, one chapter at 2:00 noon, and three chapters at 11:30 in the evening~

The whole story of Eva gives people the impression that it was the work of a lunatic. Are all the people who appear on the scene mentally ill? The decisions and reactions made by the people inside are not like what normal people would do. By the end of the whole story, no one with a normal heart can be found. The only one with a normal heart will immediately die of various coincidental accidents, thereby aggravating the condition of others. Most of the conflicts and directions of the entire story are based on twisted counter-intuitive thoughts and malicious coincidences. It feels like there is a serious conflict in three views and it makes it a headache to watch.

It's too sloppy. Many famous scenes of giants and the audience's reactions are not written much. Isn't this what this subject is about?

As title. Because I really like the Edgewalker, Flame Fist, Chainsaw Man and so on at the beginning of this book. . He directly controlled us for two hours. I touched half of it quickly. Wish me good luck tomorrow.

Isn't the author going to update? Give me an accurate letter

Aren't you going to finish writing about marriage? At least you haven't written any plot points that can be used as the final messenger?

Let's just go to chapter 37. Any more will be annoying.