Journey to the West: Lord of the Land, Can You Touch This Monster?

You made the protagonist childish...

Didn't look back. Just read the first chapter. Didn't read the second chapter of Big Desire. It's not that the writing is bad. But the three golden chapters are like this, and I don't even know what happened later.

I really like this style, the pace could be a little faster.

I've seen this setting. It's an original animation from Bilibili, but the author's degree of completion was too low, wasting the subject matter.

The pacing of this book is not good, it is not a cool novel, and the story is not out of the box, but I will still write it to the ending. After all, it is my first book. To emphasize, this is Journey to the West, don't use the title of God to teach me how to write a book. How long did the Jade Emperor live? The way of heaven is bullshit in my book. People will never kneel down to worship gods. That's it.

From land to land? ? ? How do you write it? How is that possible! Don't even think about surpassing the Jade Emperor after entering heaven! This is the limit of heaven, and it is also the will of heaven! The list of gods is prepared for you! In the past, there were restrictions on the geniuses, but now we can let you enter the immortal status. Don't think about going against the will! The purpose of the Conferred Gods List is to kill the unparalleled geniuses in the prehistoric world! So that the battle power of future generations of Journey to the West can be evened out! In case there are more than ten quasi-holy levels! There is no garbage in the list of gods, and everyone can enter the Da Luo Jin Wonderland! But don't even think about it if you are on the list of gods! Limit everything to improve your strength!