
If I Don't Seek Death, I Will Really Die!
我不作死,真的会死!
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- 665k Words
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- Historical
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- Male
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- Alternate History
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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It's okay. Although I don't know why the data is not good, I would like to make a suggestion. The way the protagonist makes money is too buggy. It is sugar production and anthracite. In fact, they are all cheats. However, the protagonist has cheats, so it doesn't matter if you open some resources to cheat. But the protagonist's work-for-relief and hiring people to dig coal are too idealistic, and they cannot make a difference in this field. People are like leeks. They can last as long as they are not extinct. This has been the case from ancient times to the present. In order to ideally "hide wealth among the people", the author can only crazyly open resource quotas. If you open sugar today, open coal tomorrow, you will have to go to the gold mine the day after tomorrow. I think resource quotas should be used with caution. Overdoing it is poison. Instead of the protagonist providing unlimited money to feed the people, it is better to wait for the spring to stabilize production and let the people produce on their own. With good policies and a good environment, people will naturally become rich. There is no need to keep unlimited money to the people. The second is the issue of the protagonist's father. The author explains it very thoroughly. It is understandable that the father is allowed to promote the plot, but your method is too old-fashioned, similar to the ancient heroine causing trouble for the hero. This writing method has become very unpopular, so many readers are giving feedback. If you are not afraid of divine enemies, you should be afraid of pig teammates, so pig teammates are taboo in the novel. The protagonist's father can be stupid but he should not be stupid and bad. Appropriately give some opportunities to "be bad guys" to other supporting characters. You cannot let the protagonist's father come out to be a pig teammate as soon as the plot is to advance. According to your logic, if the protagonist wants to develop, the first step is to kill his father. There is no reason to write such a mentally retarded supporting character. Anyway, the book is pretty good, the pace and writing are both okay. It would be nice to avoid some of the poisonous points of the new era. One more point in advance, please be careful with the four princesses who are about to appear. The previous description is a bit too much. The four dignified princesses wear common clothes and practice frugality (there were many thrifty emperors in history). But a ten-year-old princess who leaves the palace is setting up her character in advance. You don't need to use too much force. I am really afraid that you will have a heroine who is eager for talents and cares about the people. Then she will be astonished by the wisdom of the protagonist, and finally the protagonist will help develop the economy and become an empress. If your plot can be guessed by others, what's the point of reading your book? It's really easy to give up on books if you have a sense of déjà vu.
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Well written, good luck to the author!
There has been no update for so many days. Are you a eunuch?