The Fierce Son-In-Law of Da Qin

This is a true masterpiece. Although the title is not so good but the content is the most relevant to the historical background and the narrative is very restrained among all the historical novels I know I recommend it directly, just follow it.

Come on, the plot is more exciting, not contrived, better than that Qin Gong,,, it's all about the Warring States Period and the Qin Dynasty,, The Qin Gong, it feels like it has a hook, various supporting characters are constantly shocked,, shocked many times, turned into Xianglin's wife,, it's annoying... This book is very good from the first chapter to the following chapters. I hope the author can refer to some of the touching techniques of my father, Emperor Gaozu of the Han Dynasty - such as the death of Liu Bang. Touching technique, what I see most is the ordinary life of ordinary human beings. It is written like a junior high school reader and is a story that touches college students 100 times. Although it's crude, it really makes me cry. It's on the same level as Da Bing's "Guai Mo Tiao". The characters are more three-dimensional. They can't always be the protagonist. They can be supported by others. They can be multifaceted. In short, I am still looking forward to this book.

A common problem with many time-travelers is that the protagonist is too invincible. The ancients only had less knowledge than us, but they were much smarter than us. Many times, those who write about time-travelers, especially those who write about hegemony, have never lost from the beginning to the end. Throughout history, every founding king has not lost many times, and his lair has been destroyed countless times. However, the time-travelers win from beginning to end with God's perspective bugs all the way, and regard the ancients as primitive people, which is particularly intelligent.

The writing is quite good, and the pace is neither urgent nor slow, but at this time, I don't know whether I will learn about the struggle for hegemony at the end of Qin Dynasty. If there is a struggle for hegemony at the end of Qin Dynasty, it would be better, it would be interesting.

Come on

I started reading it 4 days ago and have finished reading it all. Overall, there are no problems. However, the reading experience is a bit poor. Reading two chapters in one day is the same as not reading it. The plot and story have not progressed at all. This is a big shortcoming in online novels. Old authors rely on old readers to support themselves, while new authors can easily fall into the situation of reading books and directly supporting them to death. I always think that it is a good thing for new authors to update more. If new authors don't update more, do you still want readers to read other books and vote for you? In terms of the plot, some parts are unreasonable. For example, the patriarch of a big family gave three maids to the protagonist, but he was afraid that they would not accept them. Normally trained maids can tell that they are extraordinary at a glance, but the author wrote a series of plots that the maids look down on. The highlight of the follow-up plot is probably the attack on South Korea, and then the pull between the Qu family and the Fan family, and the pull between the protagonist and the Han family. Personally, I feel that it will be discontinued. The author has laid so much groundwork, and it can't be a happy ending. Finally, I hope that the more I write, the better I get and finish the book smoothly.

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It's so short that no one can read it

Monthly tickets have been given. By the way, does the author have any other works? I want to read it, but this book is not enough

Didn't the system of prefectures and counties only come into being after the unification of Qin Shihuang? Since it is set at the end of the Warring States Period, it means that it has not yet been unified, so where does the county magistrate come from? Even if it first appeared, it was probably in the Qin State, and before unification, the county magistrate was not a completely certain official position. Isn't it called County Yin in Chu State?

There were few updates yesterday. Will there be more updates today?

If South Korea is like a maggot, it shouldn't be a problem to gather 10,000 or 20,000 people, right? Why is there nothing that can be done when the protagonist's 1,000 infantrymen are in front of the capital and there are no reinforcements behind them? And the protagonist is a small-scale officer with no designated tasks? , Do you really just act casually? Go wherever you want?

It's been written well so far, and it's the most satisfying one recently. It has time-traveling and plug-ins, and plug-ins are integrated and upgraded. Come on, author

There is a question. How can less than 1,000 people capture more than 4,000 people? What else can they do? You can't handle so many people at night, and the team has not gone through large-scale training. If the camp roars, you don't know why they will die, right?

I have ordered it for the first time, but can you add a few more chapters? Author Jun

Starting from Jishan, the plot "takes off". It's so easy to win over people's hearts and conquer clans. Too idealistic and too fast-paced. After that, almost every chapter had a "shocked face". The shock was too intense, too much but not enough. Then it's time to form a new army and recruit a group of skeletons to go to the battlefield. Before the battle formation has been adjusted, they immediately go to the battlefield. What to fight with? Rely on slogans? By blood? Or is it just a brain twitch? How can a group of skeleton soldiers use bows? Do you rely on your bones to draw a bow? Crossbowmen need to be extremely strong. Is this the most basic common sense in historical literature? Anyway, there are more and more bugs. The golden finger of collecting dead souls is also a double-edged sword, so use it with caution. This book has the foundation of "Qin Li", even better than "Qin Li". But the author was a little too hasty, maybe because of the new author, who wanted to speed up the development of the plot and write a lot of fun stories to retain readers. But I feel that this is a bit counterproductive. There are many bugs in the plot that should be more rigorous, and the protagonist's path to invincibility is too fast.