Start with a Rent-Collecting Magical Girl

I'm here to encourage you, can Bai Baoji go back and update the villain witch? I really want to see the story behind Vivian's daughter 😭 That book is obviously very well written.

Is it the magical girl I thought of? 😁😁😁

I wonder why the Japanese background is not used? From a domestic background, the sense of violation is too strong. Weren't you clearly arranged when you were in school in China? How can there be so many stories? And with a Japanese background, you can do whatever you want. No one will say anything to the little Japanese no matter what they do, and they can write very freely.

The main themes of this book: 1. Magical girls 2. Props 3. Happy play (Brother, my writing is so concise, please don't swallow my posts, okay?)

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

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I dream of becoming a magical girl!

Can you keep the outline idea this time and finish writing a book 🙂

A magical girl awakens at the age of 12 or 13. With her IQ and childish nature at this age (she loves to play and show off), it is absolutely impossible to achieve zero capture as mentioned in the book. Even if you are in your twenties, even if you have superpowers, there are already witches who have died in the battle, and many of them are seriously injured and unconscious. With these dark organizations that can even study monsters at will, it is really easy to set up a trap to capture a few witches with a girly heart and a sense of justice. But it doesn't affect the plot very much. Lao Bai's writing style is as smooth as ever, and the blending of themes is also very natural. It's just Sesel who increased the intensity for me, Modo Modo! I hope I won't abuse magical girls less, after all, everyone just reads novels to relax 😁😁

First of all, I have never been an author, but I want to say, is it difficult to write a hundred chapters a day ? It's not that I'm being unreasonable. After all, I said at the beginning that I've never been an author.

The writing is really good, but the main reason is that the title of the book is limited. When I first saw this magical girl, as a male compatriot, when I saw the name, I subconsciously crossed it out and planned a novel about fujoshi. I also read it out of curiosity. I didn't expect it to be very good, so I read it secretly. If others saw it, I would be so embarrassed. Damn it, magical girl. What will others think? I don't know the private rumors. How are they spreading? You can only read this book secretly by yourself. If others see it, it will easily kill you.

Brother, why are you dead?😭

I vomited. The previous book made me feel like I was off work, but I lost it after reading it. This book is like that again. Is there a complete magical girl novel?

The protagonist has a housekeeper named Afu, and the protagonist is very rich. Everyone knows who the protagonist is!

Blonde foreign maid!

Absolutely, I would like to call you the King of TJ!

The male protagonist always watches the villain transform. He kills innocent people so that his teammates almost die that time. When he sees the doctor transforming, he doesn't stop him. It's just a waste. I'm the protagonist and I'm not afraid of overturning, right? It's acceptable to see it once, but not every time. Others are fine. I hope this situation disappears. We are not anime and we watch the villain transform. Galaxy was kicked when he turned around in the transformation. Look at him, he still can't turn around in the future.

Sure enough, I decided to cut it. Once the author said it could be improved, I had to cut it. I decided not to read it. I'll come back and read it after a while. It'll be good to save a chapter of coins.

Shennong is here! ! ! ! I have read all the chapters~ Let me talk about my personal experience (because my personal language expression ability is limited, you can just make do with it~) In my personal opinion, there are several aspects to whether online novels are good or not. Very important~ . The first thing is the concept. Just like comics, "interesting" is very important in my mind, regardless of serious literary works. . Then there are three views. There are many things reflected in the words of a book. No matter how exciting it is, I really can't stand it. It feels like eating chocolate that tastes like shit. . The second is the plot and the rationality of the characters. I won't go into details~ . Then there is the expressive ability of words, that is, writing style. When the above contents can be fully combined, it will not be a bad work. So what is this book? As of right now, I think it is. Evaluation: More than good grass, good for jelly grass (it showed to me in the middle of the night)

White ⚡ ⚡ violent ⚡ attack ⚡, you ⚡ here ⚡ owe ⚡ me ⚡ what ⚡ should ⚡ pay ⚡

Ah, I was wondering why I haven't watched it for a few days, and I haven't seen any updates. I only saw the ending when I clicked into the details page.

Why did it end suddenly? ? ?

Did the author change his title or stop writing? Are there any new books? But if you have new books, you have to keep them up, otherwise the eunuch will be unfinished again.

No, just cut it??? Why?

After not watching it for a while, I suddenly felt that it was not as interesting as when it first came on the shelves. I suddenly felt that I almost didn't want to watch it anymore.

Why don't you come back and make up the ending or outline of a chapter before cutting it?